Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be slightly more concise and add one specific example to make your answer more vivid. Also use a clear linking word when adding the reason. Keep it within 3–4 sentences total.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because it helps me relax. For example, I enjoy watching rolling fields and people working in small towns, and the changing colors of the sky and trees make the journey feel shorter.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler sounds (uh) and vague phrases. Choose specific, correct nouns and keep the sentence structure simple. Use a linking word to connect the condition and result (e.g., “so” or “then”).

Ejemplo: Sometimes I take photos with my phone when I see something beautiful, such as a dramatic sunset or colorful street scenes, so I can remember the moment later.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence and add one concrete detail or comparison. Avoid contractions or short spoken fragments like "I can't help to eat them"; instead use a natural phrase. Keep it to two sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea because it gives me a sense of peace and calm. Also, I love fresh seafood—for example, grilled fish and shellfish are my favorites, so I often try local dishes when I visit coastal towns.

× I like watching changing landscapes and people in small towns and noticing colors and movements helps the trip pass quickly.

✓ I like watching changing landscapes and people in small towns, and noticing colors and movements helps the trip pass quickly.

The original sentence is grammatically acceptable but missing a comma before the conjunction 'and' which separates two coordinated clauses. Adding the comma clarifies that 'noticing colors and movements helps the trip pass quickly' is a separate clause. Suggestion: use a comma before 'and' when joining two independent clauses to improve clarity.

× Sometimes if I see beautiful sceneries such as a dramatic sunset or a beautiful, uh, people in street things, I will take a photo with my phone to remember it.

✓ Sometimes if I see beautiful scenery such as a dramatic sunset or interesting street scenes, I will take a photo with my phone to remember it.

The word 'scenery' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'sceneries'. The phrase 'a beautiful, uh, people in street things' is ungrammatical; 'people' is plural and cannot be described by 'a beautiful'. Replace with 'interesting street scenes' to refer to visible elements along the street. Also maintain consistency by using singular 'a dramatic sunset' and plural 'street scenes'. Suggestion: use 'scenery' for general landscapes and 'scene(s)' for countable visual events.

× I prefer sea because it gives me a sense of peace and I also like seafood.

✓ I prefer the sea because it gives me a sense of peace, and I also like seafood.

When referring to a specific natural feature like 'sea' in general contexts, English normally uses the definite article 'the'. The sentence also benefits from a comma before 'and' linking two independent clauses. Suggestion: use 'the sea' when speaking generally about that environment.

× They're so delicious I can't help to eat them.

✓ They're so delicious I can't help eating them.

'Can't help' is followed by a gerund (-ing) not an infinitive. Using 'to eat' after 'can't help' is incorrect. Change to 'eating' to form the correct idiom 'can't help eating'. Suggestion: memorize common verb patterns such as 'can't help + -ing'.