Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp, phát âm từ sai (ví dụ: "century" không đúng từ). Hãy mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó đưa thêm 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ ngắn gọn. Sử dụng thì và cấu trúc đúng (I enjoy looking, I like watching) và tránh từ thừa.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy looking out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I like seeing different landscapes and natural scenery. For example, I often notice fields, rivers and small villages, which relax me during the trip.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời lộn xộn, có nhiều từ sai (ví dụ: "portals", "tabletop of the car of the sanctuary"). Cần trả lời trực tiếp, dùng cấu trúc đơn giản, sắp xếp ý rõ ràng: hành động, lý do, mục đích. Tránh câu quá dài; chia thành 2–3 câu ngắn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos through the car window when I travel. I do this because I want to capture interesting views and share them with my family and friends. I also save them so I can remember the trips later.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I prefer the sea). Tránh lỗi từ vựng ("refer the seas", "very rich to climb"). Giải thích lý do cụ thể với 1–2 chi tiết và dùng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý (because, so, therefore). Hạn chế lặp từ.

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea. I enjoy relaxing on the beach and swimming, which I find refreshing and cheerful. I also feel safer at the seaside compared with hiking in the mountains, which can be risky.

× Yes, I really enjoy looking out the window at the century when traveling by bus or car because I like to watching views and natural beauty.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy looking out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car because I like watching the views and natural beauty.

The student used 'century' instead of 'scenery' (wrong word choice) and 'to watching' which combines 'to' with a gerund incorrectly. Use either the gerund alone after 'like' (like watching) or the infinitive without 'to' structure correctly. Also add 'the' before 'views' to refer to specific visual scenes. Suggestion: replace incorrect words with appropriate vocabulary and use 'like' + gerund. Grammar Problem Type ID:11

× Yes, of course, I like taking portals while traveling, especially tabletop of the car of the sanctuary outside the car window until share with my friends or family or keep them to look back when I am old.

✓ Yes, of course, I like taking photos while traveling, especially pictures of the scenery outside the car window to share with my friends or family or keep to look back on when I am old.

Multiple issues: 'portals' and 'tabletop of the car of the sanctuary' are incorrect word choices; likely intended 'photos' or 'pictures' and 'scenery outside the car window'. 'until share' is ungrammatical; use purpose 'to share'. 'keep them to look back when I am old' should be 'keep to look back on when I am old' (use 'look back on' and remove unnecessary object 'them' when using 'keep' + infinitive structure). Also use gerund 'taking photos' correctly after 'like'. Suggestion: choose correct nouns and use 'to' + verb for purpose, and 'look back on' as the correct phrasal verb. Grammar Problem Type ID:8

× I would refer the seas because the mountain is dangerous.

✓ I would prefer the sea because the mountains are dangerous.

'Refer' is the wrong verb; 'prefer' expresses choice. 'Seas' vs 'sea' and 'mountain' vs 'mountains': use singular/plural consistently. Here 'the sea' (general preference) or 'the seas' could be used, but common phrasing is 'the sea'. Also 'mountain' should be plural 'mountains are dangerous' if speaking about mountains in general. Use correct verb and subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: use 'prefer' and match singular/plural nouns and verbs. Grammar Problem Type ID:1

× It's very rich to climb the mountain.

✓ It's very risky to climb the mountain.

The adjective 'rich' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is likely 'risky' or 'dangerous'. Choose the adjective that correctly conveys danger. Also consider using 'to climb mountains' for a general statement. Suggestion: replace with 'risky' or 'dangerous'. Grammar Problem Type ID:13

× I like the sea because you you can enjoy lying at the beach or swimming is very cheerful.

✓ I like the sea because you can enjoy lying on the beach or swimming, which is very enjoyable.

There is a repetition 'you you' and incorrect preposition 'lying at the beach' should be 'lying on the beach'. 'Swimming is very cheerful' is awkward; use 'which is very enjoyable' or 'which is great'. Also change structure to avoid two independent clauses without connection. Suggestion: remove duplicate words, use correct prepositions, and revise the adjective to describe the activity properly. Grammar Problem Type ID:12