Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, with natural vocabulary and a pleasant tone. To improve: make the response more concise and varied by using a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details linked with a connective. Avoid repeating ideas (e.g. ‘relax’ and ‘happy’ convey similar meaning).

Ejemplo: I do look out of the window when I travel, especially to see the sea and mountains. For example, the bright sky or a coastline often catches my eye and watching those views relaxes me because they feel peaceful and different from my everyday city environment.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but is long-winded and contains repetition and some grammatical errors. Improve by using one clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason and an example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' and avoid repeating the same idea twice.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos from the window because I want to preserve special moments and share them with friends. For instance, last month I photographed a sunset over the hills and later sent the picture to my sister so she could see the view too.

Sugerencia: Good direct answer with a personal reason, but the sentence is long and has small grammatical issues. Improve by stating the preference clearly, then give one concise, specific reason with a linking word. Add a brief example or sensory detail to strengthen the response.

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea because I grew up surrounded by mountains, so the ocean feels refreshing and different. For example, listening to the waves and smelling the salty air instantly calms me after a busy week.

× Yes, I look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus and especially the sea and the mountains or even the bright sky.

✓ Yes, I look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus, especially at the sea, the mountains, or even the bright sky.

The original sentence misuses parallel structure and prepositions. Use 'especially at' before the list to indicate what is being looked at; separate items with commas for clarity. This fixes verb phrase flow and makes the sentence more natural. Suggestion: include 'at' with 'especially' when listing objects of the verb and use commas to separate items.

× I enjoy the views when traveling and that makes me relax and happy.

✓ I enjoy the views when traveling, and that makes me feel relaxed and happy.

The verb phrase 'makes me relax' is incorrect here; we use 'make someone feel + adjective' to describe an emotional result. Use 'feel relaxed' (adjective) rather than bare verb 'relax'. Also add a comma before 'and' to join independent clauses. Suggestion: use 'feel' + adjective to express resulting state: 'makes me feel relaxed'.

× Yes, I usually take photos of scenery outside the window and it is because I want to save these beautiful memories in my mind and in case of forget this wonderful memories and I want to share with my friends, I need to use my phone to keep this in my mind.

✓ Yes, I usually take photos of the scenery outside the window because I want to preserve these beautiful memories in my mind. In case I forget these wonderful memories and because I want to share them with my friends, I use my phone to save them.

Multiple errors: missing definite article 'the' before 'scenery'; awkward and incorrect expressions 'save in my mind' and 'in case of forget'; incorrect plural agreement 'this wonderful memories'. Rephrase into clearer sentences: 'preserve these beautiful memories' and 'in case I forget' (use subject and base verb). Use 'them' to refer back to 'memories'. Suggestion: use 'the scenery', 'in case I forget', plural agreement 'these memories', and use pronouns to avoid repetition.

× I prefer the sea and this is because I live in a city which surrounded by mountains so when I see the sea I will feel relaxed and hearing the sound of waves which makes me feel comfortable and peaceful.

✓ I prefer the sea because I live in a city that is surrounded by mountains, so when I see the sea I feel relaxed and hearing the sound of the waves makes me feel comfortable and peaceful.

Errors include missing verb 'is' after 'which' (use 'that is' or 'which is'), unnecessary future 'will' for a general habitual feeling (use present tense 'feel'), and missing article 'the' before 'waves'. Also combine clauses with commas for clarity. 'Which surrounded by mountains' needs the verb 'is'. Suggestion: use 'a city that is surrounded by mountains', use present tense for habitual feelings ('I feel'), and include 'the' with 'waves'.