Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Speak more clearly and correct grammar errors. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetition and complete your sentences. For example, correct verb forms and articles ("by bus," "when I travel by car") and remove unfinished clauses.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus. Because I am a passenger on buses, I have time to enjoy the scenery, especially trees and small towns along the road. In contrast, when I travel by car I have to concentrate on driving, so I rarely look around.

Sugerencia: Make a clear, concise response with a topic sentence and specific reason. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., "however", "because") and correct grammar ("when I am driving", "when I am a passenger"). Avoid repeating similar phrases.

Ejemplo: Sometimes I take photos from the car window, but only when I am a passenger. If I am driving, I never take pictures because it would be unsafe. I usually take photos to remember a beautiful view or an interesting place.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and give specific, coherent supporting details using correct tense and linking words. Avoid repetition and check vocabulary ("sunset" not "sunset rise"). Combine short sentences into one or two fluent sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea to the mountains because I enjoy the coastal scenery and the calming sound of waves. For example, I often go to the beach in the evening to watch the sunset, which I find very relaxing and beautiful.

× I often look out the window at the scenery when I travel using bus.

✓ I often look out the window at the scenery when I travel by bus.

Use of preposition with modes of transport requires 'by' not the gerund 'using'. This is a preposition error (fits 'Verb + -ing form' only if restricting to list). Suggestion: use 'by bus' for correct idiomatic expression.

× This is because when I travel with car, I need to drive the car and the didn't have any time to look out the window.

✓ This is because when I travel by car, I need to drive and I don't have any time to look out the window.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'with car' should be 'by car' and tense/missing subject: 'the didn't have' is ungrammatical. Also unnecessary repetition 'drive the car'. Corrected to present simple 'I don't have' to match habitual action. Suggestion: use 'by car' and 'I don't have'.

× But in bus I can easily look out the window because.

✓ But on the bus I can easily look out the window.

Fragment: sentence ends with 'because' without completing the clause. Also preposition with bus is 'on the bus'. Remove trailing 'because' or complete the reason. Suggestion: say 'But on the bus I can easily look out the window' or '...because I am not driving'.

× Sometimes when I need to drive I don't usually take photos outside the window, but if I am a passenger so I tend to take the photos for the purpose of remembering it.

✓ Sometimes when I need to drive, I don't take photos out of the window, but if I am a passenger I tend to take photos to remember the view.

Issues: adverb placement 'don't usually' is acceptable but redundant with 'sometimes'; 'outside the window' awkward, use 'out of the window'; 'so' is unnecessary; 'take the photos' article unnecessary; 'for the purpose of remembering it' is awkward and 'it' unclear. Use infinitive 'to remember the view'. Tense remains present habitual.

× I prefer visiting the sea rather than mountains because I like the scenery at the sea.

✓ I prefer visiting the sea rather than the mountains because I like the seaside scenery.

Missing definite article before 'mountains' and awkward phrasing 'scenery at the sea'. Use 'the mountains' and 'seaside scenery' for natural English.

× During the evening, I often go.

✓ In the evenings, I often go.

Preposition and frequency phrasing: 'During the evening' is unnatural for habitual actions; use 'in the evenings' to indicate regular habit.

× I often went to the sea during evening and see the sunset rise.

✓ I often go to the sea in the evening to see the sunset.

Mixed tenses: 'often went' (past) conflicts with habit; use present 'often go' to match other sentences. 'During evening' should be 'in the evening'. 'See the sunset rise' is incorrect collocation; use 'see the sunset' or 'watch the sun set'. Suggestion: 'I often go to the sea in the evening to see the sunset.'