Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Отвечайте прямо и логично: начните с чётного утверждения, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных поддерживающих детали и свяжите их союзом. Избегайте грамматических ошибок и лишних повторов (например, «that's makes me feel happier than that», «I'm traveling and I am in and soon I will see new country»). Попрактикуйтесь в использовании правильных времен (present simple/continuous) и артиклей.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy looking out of the window on long drives to another country because I like watching changing landscapes. For example, I often see different towns and countryside along the way, which makes the journey more exciting.

Sugerencia: Дайте краткий основной ответ и затем конкретизируйте: назовите, что именно вы фотографируете и почему, добавьте одно конкретное примечание (например, техника или пример). Сократите междометия («umm») и используйте правильную форму глагола (enjoy doing).

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of sunsets and sunrises because I love their colours. For instance, I try to capture the warm light on the hills or reflections on water, and I usually use my phone with HDR mode to get better detail.

Sugerencia: Структурируйте ответ: скажите предпочтение или равную симпатию, затем приведите ясные, конкретные причины и примеры. Избегайте повторов и бессмысленных фраз («we see good for use») — используйте точные слова (ski, relax, swim). Ограничьте ответ до 2–3 предложений связанных союзами (however, also).

Ejemplo: It's difficult to choose because I like both, but I slightly prefer the mountains. In the mountains I enjoy skiing and fresh air, whereas at the sea I relax by swimming and sunbathing, so both offer different kinds of pleasure.

× Yes, of course. I really enjoy the time when I can look out the window in the car when we are going to another country.

✓ Yes, of course. I really enjoy the times when I can look out of the car window while we are traveling to another country.

The phrase 'the time' is better as 'the times' to match a habitual action (present simple). 'Look out the window in the car' is awkward; use 'look out of the car window'. 'When we are going to another country' should be 'while we are traveling to another country' for natural present continuous describing ongoing action. Suggest using simple present for habits and present continuous for actions in progress.

× That's makes me feel happier than that.

✓ That makes me feel happier.

'That's' (that is) followed by 'makes' creates a subject-verb mismatch and redundancy. Use 'That makes me feel happier.' The comparative 'than that' is unnecessary and ungrammatical here. Suggest removing redundant words and keeping subject+verb correct.

× I'm traveling and I am in and soon I will see new country.

✓ I'm traveling and I am excited; soon I will see a new country.

The original sentence has missing words and unclear structure ('I am in' is incomplete). Add an appropriate complement ('excited') and the article 'a' before 'new country'. Keep 'I'm traveling' (present continuous for current action) and 'soon I will see a new country' (future simple for upcoming event). Suggest completing fragments and adding necessary articles.

× Umm, of course I really enjoy to take photos of sunsets or sunrises because I like how they look and umm, the nature also is very beautiful in this time and I really enjoy to do it.

✓ Umm, of course I really enjoy taking photos of sunsets or sunrises because I like how they look, and nature is also very beautiful at this time, so I really enjoy doing it.

After 'enjoy' the verb should be in -ing form ('taking', 'doing'), not the infinitive 'to take'. 'The nature' is incorrect; use 'nature' (no article) or 'the natural scenery'. Use 'at this time' instead of 'in this time'. Suggest using gerunds after 'enjoy' and correct prepositional phrase.

× For me, it's a hard question because I like both.

✓ For me, it's a difficult question because I like both.

Grammatically acceptable but 'hard' is informal; 'difficult' is more natural here. Tense is correct (present simple for general preference). Suggest word choice improvement for register.

× I enjoy the time when we are going to the mountains where where we can ski, we see good for use.

✓ I enjoy the times when we go to the mountains where we can ski and enjoy the scenery.

'The time when we are going' is clumsy; use 'the times when we go' for habitual actions. Duplicate 'where where' is an error. 'We see good for use' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely meant 'we see beautiful views' or 'enjoy the scenery'. Suggest using clear noun phrases (scenery, views) and fixing repetition.

× But also I really like when we go on the sea where I can swim and just have fun.

✓ But I also really like going to the sea where I can swim and just have fun.

Use 'go to the sea' (not 'go on the sea'). Prefer gerund 'going' after 'like' or restructure to 'I also really like it when we go to the sea.' Tense/pattern should reflect general preference (present simple/gerund). Suggest using correct preposition 'to' with 'sea' and gerund after 'like'.