Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and fluency: use correct verb forms and combine ideas more naturally. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences). Add one specific detail and a linking word to create coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I particularly enjoy looking at mountains and green fields because their peacefulness helps me relax during the journey. For example, the sight of terraced fields often makes me feel calmer and less travel‑sick.

Sugerencia: Correct word choice and clarity: replace awkward phrases (e.g., “mix memory”) with natural expressions like “capture memories.” Reduce repetition and use linking words to show reason. Be specific about what you photograph.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos to capture memories while travelling. For example, I try to photograph mountain ridges at sunrise or golden fields at sunset because the light makes the scene look dramatic.

Sugerencia: Fix pronunciation/name error and grammar: say 'the sea' not 'Seymour', use singular/plural agreement, and link reasons clearly. Give one concise reason with a specific example of an activity.

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea because there are many water activities to enjoy, such as snorkeling and diving. For instance, last summer I snorkelled over a coral reef and saw colorful fish, which made the trip very relaxing.

× Yes I do enjoying the view from the window, especially for mountains and green fields.

✓ Yes, I do enjoy the view from the window, especially the mountains and green fields.

The verb 'do' as an auxiliary requires the base form 'enjoy' not the -ing form 'enjoying'. Also add a comma after 'Yes' and use 'the' to specify particular scenery. Suggestion: use 'do + base verb' for emphasis and place commas for clarity.

× It makes me relax and enjoy the trip without feeling dizzy and burned.

✓ It helps me relax and enjoy the trip without feeling dizzy or burnt.

The verb 'make' is grammatical but 'helps me relax' is more natural. Use 'or' to connect 'dizzy' and 'burnt' rather than 'and' because it's unlikely to feel both simultaneously. 'Burned' as an adjective for feeling tired/unwell is better as 'burnt' in British English; 'burned' can be used in American English but 'burnt' suits the context. Also 'help' collocates better with 'relax.'

× Yes, I do take photos because I love to mix memory during traveling.

✓ Yes, I do take photos because I love to make memories while traveling.

The phrase 'mix memory' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'make memories'. Also use 'while traveling' (or 'when traveling') instead of 'during traveling'. Keep 'do take' only if emphasizing; 'I take photos' is also fine.

× So when we pass by any fascinating view of the mountain during sunrise or field Greenfield during sunset, I love to take photos and capture that moment.

✓ So when we pass any fascinating mountain view at sunrise or green fields at sunset, I love to take photos and capture the moment.

Use noun phrase order 'mountain view' and 'green fields' (not 'field Greenfield'). 'During sunrise' is better as 'at sunrise'; 'capture that moment' is acceptable but 'capture the moment' is more natural. Also remove 'pass by' to 'pass' for conciseness.

× I do prefer Seymour because there is many water activity we can do while traveling like snorkeling and diving to explore marine life and we can play by the beach so it makes me relax and enjoy the trip.

✓ I prefer the sea because there are many water activities we can do while traveling, like snorkeling and diving to explore marine life, and we can play on the beach, so it helps me relax and enjoy the trip.

Multiple issues: 'Seymour' seems to be a misspelling of 'sea'—replace with 'the sea'. Use 'there are' for plural 'activities' (there is many -> there are many) which is a subject-verb agreement and 'there be' issue. 'Activity' should be plural 'activities'. Use 'on the beach' not 'by the beach' for playing at the beach. Replace 'I do prefer' with 'I prefer' (optional). Break into clearer clauses with commas. 'Helps me relax' is more natural than 'makes me relax.'