Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevabınızı daha doğrudan ve akıcı hâle getirmek için net bir konu cümlesi kurun, gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu kelimelerini azaltın ve neden baktığınızı kısa örnekle destekleyin. Örneğin zamir ve zaman kullanımı düzeltilmeli ('I'm usually doing this' yerine 'I usually look out...'), bağlaçlarla neden-sonuç ilişkisi kurulmalı ve maksimum 5 cümle sınırına uyulmalı.

Ejemplo: I usually look out of the window when I'm travelling by bus or car because I find it relaxing. For example, watching changing landscapes helps me think and unwind after a busy day. Sometimes I focus on small details like houses or fields, which makes the journey feel shorter.

Sugerencia: Cümlenizi daha doğru ve anlaşılır yapmak için kelime seçimlerine dikkat edin (sightseeing vs scene, 'good science' yanlış), cümleleri daha kısa ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla birbirine bağlayın. Fotoğraf çekme sebeplerinizi ve örnek bir durum verin; ayrıca zamirleri ve artikelleri düzeltin.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of interesting scenes outside the car window. For instance, if I see a beautiful natural view or an old building, I usually take a picture to remember it. I later look at these photos to share with friends or to remind myself of the trip.

Sugerencia: Bu soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın (I prefer X or I don't have a strong preference) ve nedeninizi en az bir ayrıntıyla destekleyin. Kısa bir karşılaştırma veya kişisel neden (örneğin huzur, aktiviteler) ekleyin. Ayrıca 'I'd like ****' gibi eksik ifadeler yerine tamamlanmış cümle kullanın.

Ejemplo: I don't have a strong preference between the mountains and the sea because both have advantages. For example, I enjoy the peace and hiking opportunities in the mountains, but I also like relaxing on the beach and swimming in the sea.

× I'm usually doing this on the road or traveling somewhere. I think it's, uh, good when you think something.

✓ I usually do this on the road or when I am traveling somewhere. I think it's nice when you can think about things.

The student used the present continuous 'I'm usually doing' where the simple present 'I usually do' is correct for habitual actions (Present tense issue). Also 'when you think something' is unnatural; 'when you can think about things' clearly expresses the idea of having time to think. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and choose natural collocations like 'think about things'.

× Yes, when I see a very good sightseeing, like a nature or something about historical things, when I say good science, I take a photo.

✓ Yes, when I see a very nice view, such as natural scenery or something historical, I take a photo.

The phrase 'a very good sightseeing' is ungrammatical; 'sightseeing' is an activity, not a countable noun. Use 'a very nice view' or 'beautiful scenery'. 'like a nature' and 'something about historical things' are incorrect noun phrases; use 'natural scenery' or 'something historical'. 'when I say good science' is meaningless here; likely intended 'beautiful scene' or 'good scenery'. Suggestion: use correct noun phrases (view, scenery, historical site) and avoid literal translations.

× Doesn't matter for me, alright? I'd like ****.

✓ It doesn't matter to me, alright? I'd like ****.

The student omitted the subject 'It' before 'doesn't matter', causing a subject-verb agreement/ sentence structure problem. The correct impersonal expression is 'It doesn't matter to me.' Suggestion: include the dummy subject 'it' with impersonal expressions and use 'to' after 'matter'.