Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar, sentence boundaries and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, use proper verb forms and articles, and split into shorter sentences (max 5). Add a linking word when giving a reason and a specific example to make it more natural and effective.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I prefer this because focusing on my smartphone usually makes me feel carsick, so watching the scenery helps prevent that. Also, it gives me a pleasant break from screens; for example, I enjoy watching passing countryside or city skylines and noticing small details like street markets or unusual buildings.

Sugerencia: Clarify and organize the response with a clear topic sentence, reasons and an example. Correct grammar (articles, verb forms, and pronouns) and avoid redundant phrases. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: It depends on how attractive the view is; I only take photos when a scene is truly striking. Because we cannot remember every special moment, photographs help me keep those memories. For example, I once photographed a dramatic sunset over a lake so I could look back at it later.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear direct answer first, then give specific reasons using coherent linking words. Fix grammar (verb forms, articles, and sentence fragments) and avoid short sentence fragments; combine them into complete sentences with supporting details and an example.

Ejemplo: I don't have a strong preference; it depends on my mood and who I am travelling with. If I go with a group of friends, I enjoy both the mountains and the sea because we usually have activities like barbecues and campfires. However, if I travel alone, I might prefer the sea because I like quiet walks on the beach.

× I do I really enjoy looking out the windows when I traveling on the bus or car because normally on the cars or bus if I just focusing on using my smartphone it will get me carsick instead of that looking out the windows, enjoy the beautiful views and also take a break from the phone is the ideal way to find the realization.

✓ I do. I really enjoy looking out of the windows when I am traveling by bus or car, because normally if I focus on using my smartphone I get carsick. Instead, looking out of the windows, enjoying the beautiful views and taking a break from the phone is the ideal way to relax.

Errors: missing auxiliary verb and wrong verb form after 'I' (should be 'am traveling' — present continuous), incorrect gerund forms ('focusing' needs simple present 'focus' in conditional), and inconsistent verb forms in list (use gerunds 'looking', 'enjoying', 'taking'). Suggestions: use 'am traveling' for ongoing action, use 'focus' for general conditional result, use 'looking out of the windows' and parallel gerunds for consistency, replace 'find the realization' with 'relax' or 'feel refreshed' for correct meaning.

× It is definitely depending on the how beautiful the view is.

✓ It definitely depends on how beautiful the view is.

Errors: incorrect verb 'is depending' and extra article 'the' before 'how'. Use simple present 'depends' for general truth and remove unnecessary 'the'. Suggestions: say 'It definitely depends on how beautiful the view is.'

× I like to take a photo only if the pictures is really beautiful and it's worth remember because it is very hard for us to memorize all the beautiful moment.

✓ I like to take a photo only if the picture is really beautiful and worth remembering because it is very hard for us to remember all the beautiful moments.

Errors: 'pictures is' — plural noun with singular verb; use singular 'picture' or plural consistently. 'Worth remember' is incorrect; use gerund 'worth remembering'. 'Memorize' and 'moment' word forms are awkward: use 'remember' and plural 'moments'. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement and use correct gerunds and plural forms ('picture is', 'worth remembering', 'beautiful moments').

× So taking the photos could be very essential to remember to trace back.

✓ So taking photos can be very helpful for recalling those moments later.

Errors: awkward structure 'essential to remember to trace back' and article misuse 'the photos'. Suggestions: use natural collocation 'taking photos can be helpful for recalling' and 'later' to express tracing back memories.

× It's what's back there.

✓ That's what I mean.

Errors: unclear and ungrammatical phrase 'It's what's back there.' Suggestions: replace with a clear idiom such as 'That's what I mean' to express intention.

× It's definitely depends on my mood and also who I traveling with.

✓ It definitely depends on my mood and also who I am traveling with.

Errors: unnecessary 'It's' plus verb 'depends' — use 'It depends'. Missing auxiliary 'am' before 'traveling'. Suggestions: use 'It definitely depends' and 'who I am traveling with' for correct present tense continuous.

× I like to go either way.

✓ I like both equally.

Errors: 'go either way' is acceptable colloquialism but can be clearer. Suggestion: 'I like both equally' is more natural and concise.

× Only when I have a group of friends go join me.

✓ Only when a group of friends joins me.

Errors: wrong word order and missing auxiliary; 'a group of friends' is singular so verb should be 'joins'. Suggestions: use concise clause 'Only when a group of friends joins me.'

× Because normally when we go travelling doesn't matter where we go, it's BBQ campfire.

✓ Normally when we go travelling, it doesn't matter where we go because we always have a BBQ and a campfire.

Errors: sentence fragment starting with 'Because' and incorrect word order. Also 'it's BBQ campfire' is ungrammatical. Suggestions: combine clauses properly and use 'we always have a BBQ and a campfire' to convey the idea.

× If I just do it by myself it will be kind of a boring.

✓ If I do it by myself, it is kind of boring.

Errors: 'will be' unnecessary for general truth; 'a boring' incorrect article with adjective—use 'boring' without 'a'. Suggestions: use simple present for habitual/general statements and correct adjective usage ('it is kind of boring').