Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details. Reduce fillers (umm, uh) and correct small grammatical errors (e.g., “travelling by bus or car,” “I like to look outside”). Use linking words like “because” or “for example” to make your reason clear. Keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually like to look out the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy seeing the landscape. For example, when I go to a new place I pay attention to buildings and countryside scenes, which helps me remember the route. Also, it gives my eyes a break from my phone.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct statement, then give a specific reason and a clear example. Avoid repetitions and filler sounds; use correct verb forms (e.g., “I find,” “it's hard to capture”) and linking words like “but” or “however.” Keep the answer to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often try to take photos of the scenery outside the window, but it can be difficult because the bus moves quickly. For example, I usually focus on taking pictures when the vehicle slows down or when I see a striking view, so I can get a clear shot.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then provide 1–2 specific reasons with correct grammar (e.g., “I prefer the mountains because I grew up there” or “they make me feel relaxed”). Avoid informal tags like “And Yep.” Use linking words such as “because” and “for example” to connect ideas and keep it natural and concise.

Ejemplo: I prefer the mountains because I grew up in a mountainous area and they make me feel calm. For example, seeing the hills every morning relaxes me and reminds me of home.

× Yes, I usually like to watch outside when I'm just travelling by by bus or car.

✓ Yes, I usually like to watch outside when I'm just travelling by bus or car.

The original has repeated 'by' ('by by') which is a typographical error, not a grammar category listed. The relevant issue to correct within the allowed list is 'Verb + -ing form' because 'travelling' is correctly used as a present participle to indicate an ongoing action. Keep 'travelling' and remove the duplicate 'by'. Suggestion: proofread to remove duplicated words.

× Umm. When I'm traveling to a new place I would like try to watch these things or have it seen reviews?

✓ When I'm travelling to a new place, I try to look at the scenery or read reviews about it.

This sentence has awkward structure and incorrect verb combinations. 'Would like try' is incorrect; use either 'would like to try' or simply 'try'. 'Have it seen reviews' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'read reviews about it'. Use commas to separate clauses and keep verb forms consistent. Suggestion: choose one construction ('would like to try' or 'try') and use correct verbs for reading reviews.

× Umm and watching from a uh. Watching out from the window also keeps my eyes relaxed from phone.

✓ Watching out of the window also relaxes my eyes from looking at my phone.

The phrase 'watching from a uh' is fragmented; 'watching out from the window' is acceptable but word order and phrasing are awkward. 'Keeps my eyes relaxed from phone' is incorrect; use 'relaxes my eyes from looking at my phone'. The present participle 'watching' is correct; adjust following verbs and prepositions for clarity. Suggestion: use 'relaxes my eyes' and specify 'looking at my phone'.

× Yes I always try to take the pictures of the scenery which I found like umm it's I catching UMM but if I can't match the speed of bus it's it's hard to get the umm photo of that scenery but I usually try to have the photo.

✓ Yes, I always try to take pictures of the scenery that I find interesting, but if I can't match the speed of the bus it's hard to get a good photo. I usually try anyway.

Multiple issues: 'take the pictures' should be 'take pictures' (article error), 'which I found' should be 'that I find' to match present habit (tense), 'match the speed of bus' needs definite article 'the bus'. Also simplify repetition ('it's it's') and unclear phrases ('it's I catching'). Suggestions: remove unnecessary articles before plural 'pictures', use 'that I find interesting', include 'the' before 'bus', and break long sentence into two for clarity.

× Well, I usually prefers the mountains as I like the place where I belong to.

✓ Well, I usually prefer the mountains because I like the place where I belong.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'I usually prefers' is incorrect; first-person singular takes base verb 'prefer'. Also 'because' is a clearer conjunction than 'as' here, and 'the place where I belong to' has an unnecessary trailing preposition; use 'the place where I belong' or 'the place I belong to'. Suggestion: use 'I prefer' and avoid ending clauses with redundant prepositions.

× It's just surrounded by mountains and seeing those mountains just feels me relaxed and I feel so grateful, like seeing those mountains every day.

✓ It's surrounded by mountains, and seeing those mountains makes me feel relaxed and grateful, like seeing them every day.

Pronoun and verb choice errors: 'feels me relaxed' is incorrect — English uses 'makes me feel relaxed' or 'I feel relaxed'. Also repetitive 'just' and awkward phrasing. Use 'them' to avoid repetition and keep verbs correct. Suggestion: use 'makes me feel relaxed' and replace repeated nouns with pronouns where appropriate.

× And Yep.

✓ Yes.

'And Yep' is informal and does not fit the test register. It is a sentence fragment; replace with a simple affirmative 'Yes.' Suggestion: use concise, formal responses in a speaking test.