Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Clarify vocabulary mistakes and make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct key words (e.g. "car window" or "bus window" not "password card"), and then give one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Keep to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy looking out of the bus or car window, especially when we drive through the countryside, because the green fields and small villages make me feel relaxed. For example, seeing farms and rivers always helps me unwind after a busy day.

Sugerencia: Correct the meaning and use simple, logical sentences. Say whether you take photos or not, give a short reason, and use linking words (e.g. "because", "so") to connect ideas. Avoid unclear phrases and unrelated words.

Ejemplo: Not usually, because the vehicle moves quickly and the pictures often turn out blurry. Instead, I prefer to enjoy the view with my own eyes, which helps me notice small details that don't show well in photos.

Sugerencia: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and specific supporting details. Correct grammar and word choice (e.g. "I lived in Okinawa, which is an island, so I'm used to the ocean"), avoid filler words, and give one or two concrete examples about why you prefer the sea (e.g. activities, memories).

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea because I grew up on Okinawa island, so the ocean has always been part of my life. For instance, I often visit the beaches to watch the sunset and relax after work, and the sea breeze and views always make me feel peaceful.

× I like seeing the view from the password card, especially countryside.

✓ I like seeing the view from the passenger seat, especially the countryside.

The phrase 'password card' is incorrect vocabulary; likely meant 'passenger seat'. 'Countryside' as a noun usually requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific landscape. Use correct noun and add 'the' to specify the countryside. Suggested improvement: learn common travel vocabulary (passenger seat, window seat) and remember to use 'the' with 'countryside' when speaking about a particular rural area.

× The countryside alone makes me feel comfortable and relaxed and peaceful.

✓ The countryside alone makes me feel comfortable, relaxed, and peaceful.

The sentence has redundant conjunctions and punctuation issues rather than a plural problem; however it needed clearer parallel structure: commas between adjectives and a single subject-verb agreement is correct. Maintain parallel adjective list and proper punctuation. Suggested improvement: use commas to separate coordinate adjectives and avoid repeating conjunctions.

× I often prefer taking water from a bus or car because the vehicle moves so quickly.

✓ I often prefer taking photos from a bus or car because the vehicle moves so quickly.

The word 'water' is incorrect; context asks about taking photos. 'Taking photos from a bus or car' is natural word order. Ensure the verb 'taking' pairs with the correct object (photos). Suggested improvement: check context and collocations (take photos, take pictures).

× That turned out to be satellite partners.

✓ That sentence is unclear; perhaps: 'That doesn't work because the vehicle moves so quickly.'

The original sentence is semantically and grammatically incorrect and does not fit context. 'Satellite partners' is meaningless here. Provide a clear reason or clarification aligned with taking photos from a moving vehicle. Suggested improvement: when unsure, rephrase simply and clearly: 'It is difficult because the vehicle moves so quickly.'

× Just sing with my eyes.

✓ I just look with my eyes.

'Sing with my eyes' is an incorrect metaphor here and ungrammatical in context. The intended meaning is likely 'just watch' or 'just look'. Use a clear verb that matches the action. Suggested improvement: use literal verbs for clarity: 'I just watch/just look.'

× Umm, I prefer the sea because it's my part of my life.

✓ Umm, I prefer the sea because it's a part of my life.

Use the indefinite article 'a' before 'part of my life' to indicate one among possible parts. 'My part' is incorrect here. Suggested improvement: use 'a part of my life' for general statements about personal preferences.

× I lived in Okinawa which is island, we are surrounded by ocean.

✓ I lived in Okinawa, which is an island; we are surrounded by ocean.

Missing article 'an' before 'island' and punctuation needed to set off the relative clause. Use a semicolon or period to separate independent clauses. Suggested improvement: remember 'a/an' before singular countable nouns and punctuate relative clauses correctly.

× I often go and visit there, just go for work and the SEO sunset which is which makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

✓ I often go and visit there for work and to see the sunset, which makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

The phrasing 'go and visit there' is awkward; use 'go and visit' or 'go to visit', but 'go and visit there' can be simplified to 'visit there'. 'Just go for work and the SEO sunset' contains errors: 'SEO' is incorrect word, likely 'see'. 'To see the sunset' is correct infinitive use. The relative clause needs 'which' to refer to 'the sunset' and proper punctuation. Suggested improvement: use 'go to visit' or simply 'visit', use infinitive 'to see' for purpose, and ensure correct word choice ('see' instead of 'SEO').