Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your response more fluent and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (umm, uh), keep it within 2–4 sentences, and add a specific supporting detail. Use a linking phrase when giving a reason.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually look out the window when I travel by bus or car because it helps me pass the time. For example, I enjoy watching changing city scenes and local shops, which makes the journey more interesting.

Sugerencia: Provide a direct answer, remove hesitations, and give one or two clear specific examples of what you photograph and why. Organize with a brief topic sentence and a supporting detail using linking words like 'for example' or 'sometimes'.

Ejemplo: Sometimes I take photos of the scenery outside the window, especially when I see a beautiful sunrise or interesting animals. For example, I often photograph colourful sunsets to share with my friends because they look dramatic and memorable.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct preference with concise reasons. Avoid vague or repetitive phrases and remove fillers. Use specific reasons and one linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'so') and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea because I love swimming and relaxing on the beach. I also find mountains less appealing because I worry about getting lost and I don't like encountering many insects.

× I love looking out the window 'cause umm, I feel so bored, uh, in the bus or the car and I cannot look at my phone 'cause it always gives me headaches and nausea.

✓ I love looking out of the window because I feel so bored on the bus or in the car and I cannot look at my phone because it always gives me a headache and makes me feel nauseous.

The original sentence uses inconsistent prepositions with locations and unclear pronoun references. 'Looking out the window' is acceptable but 'looking out of the window' is more natural here; 'in the bus or the car' should be 'on the bus or in the car' (different standard prepositions for vehicles). 'Headaches and nausea' should be idiomatically 'a headache and feel nauseous' or 'headaches and nausea' but parallel structure improved by 'gives me a headache and makes me feel nauseous.' Also replace informal 'cause/umm/uh' with 'because' for clarity and formality.

× Yeah, nothing. But umm, sometimes I see umm, the sunset or the sunrise and maybe some cute animals and maybe the nature's beauty or uh, I'm just sending a photo of someone, of my to my friends of someone.

✓ Not really. Sometimes I see the sunset or the sunrise, maybe some cute animals, or the beauty of nature, and I sometimes send those photos to my friends.

The original contains fragmented ideas and incorrect pronoun placement 'of my to my friends of someone.' This is a sentence structure and pronoun-use issue. Rewriting clarifies meaning: 'Not really' for responding to 'Do you take photos...' and then list objects with parallel structure. 'The nature's beauty' is ungrammatical; use 'the beauty of nature.' 'I'm just sending a photo of someone' is unclear and incorrect; changed to 'I sometimes send those photos to my friends.'

× Well, I prefer to see 'cause I love swimming so much and I think mountains are very scary, 'cause umm, you know, you can just, umm, cannot find yourself back to the just land.

✓ Well, I prefer the sea because I love swimming so much, and I think mountains are very scary because you might get lost and not be able to find your way back to land.

This sentence misuses pronouns and has awkward phrasing 'prefer to see' and 'cannot find yourself back to the just land.' 'Prefer the sea' fits the question. 'You can just... cannot find yourself back to the just land' is ungrammatical; replace with 'you might get lost and not be able to find your way back to land.' Also replace informal fillers and 'see' with 'the sea.'

× And I feel like there's a lot of creatures and very much of bugs.

✓ And I feel like there are a lot of creatures and many bugs.

'There's a lot of creatures' mixes singular contraction 'there's' with plural 'creatures' (subject-verb agreement) and uses incorrect quantifier 'very much of bugs.' Use plural form 'there are' and the quantifier 'many bugs.' This fixes number agreement and quantifier usage.