Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating similar ideas (e.g. “whenever I visit an attraction” and “for a very long period” convey similar meaning).

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually look out the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, on my last trip I watched the changing landscape from city buildings to rice fields, which helped me notice local farms and temples along the route.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer, then give a specific reason and one brief example. Use linking words like “because” or “so” but keep sentences shorter and avoid unnecessary words (e.g. “peep” could be replaced with “look”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos from the car window because they help me remember interesting places. For instance, I photographed a colorful market last month so I can show my children later and tell them about the visit.

Sugerencia: Provide a complete, clear topic sentence stating your preference, then explain briefly with one or two specific reasons. Avoid repetition (don’t repeat location name) and finish the sentence fully. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I prefer the mountains because I grew up in a bungalow on a hillside in Sri Lanka and I enjoy the fresh air and quiet. For example, the mountain views and hiking trails make it easier for me to relax and exercise.

× Of course, I do love to look at the scenery whenever I visit an attraction for the first time. If it's by bus or car, I have enjoyed doing this for a very long period.

✓ Of course, I love looking at the scenery whenever I visit an attraction for the first time. Whether I travel by bus or car, I have enjoyed doing this for a very long time.

Issues: unnecessary emphatic 'do' with 'love' and mixed tense/modal phrasing. The present simple 'I love looking' is the normal form to express habitual action; using 'do love' is emphatic and uncommon here. Use 'love looking' (verb + -ing) to match 'whenever I visit'. Also replace 'If it's by bus or car' with 'Whether I travel by bus or car' for clarity; 'have enjoyed doing this for a very long period' is wordy—use 'have enjoyed doing this for a very long time' to express a continuing experience. Grammar Problem Type ID:6

× I love taking photos whenever I peep outside of the car window because I could keep these photos as memories and also I can even show it to my children one day when they grow up so they could visit this place.

✓ I love taking photos whenever I look out of the car window because I can keep these photos as memories, and I can even show them to my children one day when they grow up so they can visit the place.

Multiple issues: 'peep' is informal/wrong register; use 'look out' or 'look out of'. Mixed modal verbs 'could' and 'can' create inconsistency—use 'can' for present/future ability. Pronoun agreement: 'show it to my children' is incorrect because 'photos' is plural; use 'show them'. Also 'could visit this place' should be 'can visit the place' to match ability. Grammar Problem Type IDs:4,12

× I enjoy living in the upper mountains because we have a bungalow in Sri Lanka which is in the hillside area of Sri Lanka and over here there are plenty of mountains. So I'm.

✓ I enjoy living in the mountains because we have a bungalow in Sri Lanka that is in a hillside area, and there are plenty of mountains here.

Problems: 'upper mountains' is awkward—use 'the mountains' or 'highlands'. Repetition 'in Sri Lanka' twice is redundant. 'which is in the hillside area of Sri Lanka' is wordy; use 'that is in a hillside area'. The final fragment 'So I'm.' is incomplete and has no verb—sentence fragment error. Remove the fragment or complete it. Ensure articles: 'a bungalow' is correct. Grammar Problem Type IDs:26,17}]}assage.