Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the response more natural and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid redundant phrases and keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, I enjoy watching changing landscapes like fields and small towns because they relax me and help pass the time.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct tense and article forms, and avoid repetition. Provide one clear reason and a brief example, linked with a connective. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I enjoy capturing interesting moments. For instance, with my compact camera I try to photograph colourful fields and unusual buildings when the light is good.

Sugerencia: Make the answer concise and add a specific reason or personal detail. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct small grammar issues. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea because I love watching sunrises and sunsets over the water, which I find very calming. Therefore, when I take photos, I usually focus on the coastline and the changing colours of the sky.

× Definitely whenever I was I'm traveling, I look out of the bus or car to view the places while traveling and it gives a soothing effect to my mind.

✓ Definitely whenever I am traveling, I look out of the bus or car to view the places while traveling, and it has a soothing effect on my mind.

The sentence mixes past ('I was') and present continuous ('I'm traveling'). Use consistent present tense 'I am traveling'. Also use 'has a soothing effect on' instead of 'gives a soothing effect to' for natural collocation; add a comma before the conjunction for clarity.

× Yes, I like to take the photos as I have a advanced camera which took a beautiful and advanced pictures.

✓ Yes, I like to take photos because I have an advanced camera which takes beautiful pictures.

Use 'an' before a vowel sound ('an advanced camera') and remove unnecessary 'the' before plural 'photos'. Use present simple 'takes' to match general habit instead of past 'took'. Remove duplicate adjective 'advanced' before 'pictures' and use 'beautiful pictures'.

× So I love to take the pictures of the sceneries outside whenever I am sitting inside the car because it gives me relax and.

✓ So I love to take pictures of the scenery outside whenever I am sitting inside the car because it relaxes me.

Use uncountable 'scenery' instead of plural 'sceneries'. Use 'relaxes me' (verb + object) rather than 'gives me relax' and finish the sentence. Also omit 'the' before 'pictures' for general statement.

× I always prefer sea because it gives a beautiful view of sunset and sunrise and whenever we watch that scene, it gives a fresh relax to our body.

✓ I always prefer the sea because it gives a beautiful view of the sunset and sunrise, and whenever we watch that scene, it gives a refreshing feeling to our bodies.

Use 'the sea' with definite article. Add 'the' before 'sunset' and 'sunrise'. Replace 'fresh relax' with 'refreshing feeling' and use plural 'bodies' for 'our bodies'. Maintain present simple tense.

× So I whenever I want to take the pictures, I definitely take the pictures of the sea.

✓ So whenever I want to take pictures, I definitely take pictures of the sea.

Remove redundant 'I' after 'So' to correct word order. Omit unnecessary definite article 'the' before plural 'pictures' for general statements and avoid repetition of 'take the pictures'.