Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct minor grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and keep within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I enjoy watching the passing landscape, especially rural scenes and interesting buildings, so I often take photos to remember them. For example, last month I photographed a series of old stone houses and later used the pictures for a small photo album.

Sugerencia: Make your answer clearer by correcting collocations and grammar (e.g., "it's my cup of tea" is informal but acceptable). Use linking words to structure your response and give a concrete example of what you photograph and why.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of scenery outside the window, especially when I see striking natural views. For instance, if I pass a dramatic sunset or a mountain range, I take several shots so I can look at them later and remember the place. This helps me relive the trip and notice small details I missed at the time.

Sugerencia: Correct grammar and clarity: use past tense for upbringing and avoid unclear phrases like "very low in watching mountains" and "audacity of nature." Provide a clear preference statement, a reason, and one specific detail or example. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer the mountains to the sea because I grew up in a seaside village and want to experience different environments. For example, I enjoy hiking in forests and exploring mountain trails because they feel more adventurous and peaceful than the beach.

× When I'm travelling in bus, I look out of window and look and see the scenery.

✓ When I'm travelling by bus, I look out of the window and see the scenery.

Use 'by bus' for the mode of transport (preposition error). Also use the definite article 'the' with 'window' when referring to a specific window; remove the redundant 'look and' to make the sentence natural.

× Generally when I travel to from one place to another place, I'll be watching the things around around the world, how it is, how it looks and I'll be taking pictures.

✓ Generally, when I travel from one place to another, I watch the things around me, how they are and how they look, and I take pictures.

Remove the extra 'to' and duplicate 'around'. Use simple present 'travel' and 'watch' for habitual actions instead of future progressive 'I'll be watching'. Replace vague 'around the world' with 'around me' to match context. Use plural pronoun 'they' for 'things' and consistent verb forms.

× I often take photos, but when it is a very good nature, a very good scenic picture, then definitely it's my cup of tea to take a picture.

✓ I often take photos, but when the scenery is very beautiful, I definitely enjoy taking pictures.

'Very good nature' and 'a very good scenic picture' are awkward; use 'the scenery is very beautiful'. 'It's my cup of tea to take a picture' is informal and clumsy; replace with 'I enjoy taking pictures'. Adjust adjective placement and noun choice.

× So by looking at so collecting those pictures, I feel like I wanted to watch it again.

✓ So by looking at those pictures, I feel like I want to see them again.

Use present simple 'feel' + 'want' to express current desire. Remove 'so collecting' which is ungrammatical here and change 'watch it' to 'see them' to agree with plural 'pictures'.

× Then I'll be recognizing all those things when I watch those pictures in future.

✓ Then I'll recognize all those things when I look at those pictures in the future.

Use 'recognize' in simple future 'I'll recognize' rather than progressive. Use 'look at' with 'pictures' (correct preposition) and include 'the' before 'future'.

× As I grown up in a seaside village in my childhood, I want I want to experience new things in my life so that I prefer mountains rather than sea because I'm very low in watching mountains.

✓ As I grew up in a seaside village, I want to experience new things in my life, so I prefer the mountains to the sea because I enjoy looking at mountains.

Use past tense 'grew up' not 'grown up'. Remove duplicate 'I want'. Use 'prefer the mountains to the sea' (correct comparative structure and articles). 'Very low in watching mountains' is incorrect; replace with 'enjoy looking at mountains'.

× Mountains has that audacity of nature.

✓ Mountains have that grandeur of nature.

'Mountains' is plural so the verb must be 'have' not 'has'. 'Audacity of nature' is awkward; 'grandeur of nature' or 'raw power of nature' is more natural collocation.