Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan kelancaran; hindari pengulangan. Mulailah dengan kalimat topik yang jelas, lalu beri detail singkat dan spesifik. Contoh perbaikan yang perlu: gunakan tense yang konsisten (present simple untuk kebiasaan), hilangkan pengulangan kata seperti "bored" dua kali, dan tambahkan satu alasan atau contoh konkret.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by car with my family. I usually do this to pass the time and I enjoy watching changing landscapes, like fields and small villages. For example, last month I noticed a colorful market near the road which was very interesting.

Sugerencia: Perjelas ide utama dan gunakan kosakata yang tepat; perbaiki struktur kalimat dan penggunaan artikel (a/the). Hindari frase yang tidak jelas seperti "depend on the fuel" kecuali dimaksudkan. Jelaskan kondisi kapan Anda mengambil foto dengan contoh konkret dan gunakan connective untuk koherensi.

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation, but I often take photos from the car window when the scenery is attractive. For instance, if we pass a beautiful coastline or an unusual village I will stop and take pictures to keep the memory. Also, I usually check my phone battery before taking many photos.

Sugerencia: Buatlah jawaban langsung dan teratur: nyatakan pilihan dalam satu kalimat topik, lalu beri 1–2 alasan spesifik menggunakan connective (because, so). Hindari pengulangan frasa dan perbaiki tata bahasa (I am typically a person who loves nature; I prefer the sea to the mountains).

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea to the mountains because I find the sound of waves very calming and I enjoy swimming. For example, when I visit the coast I relax on the beach and watch the sunset, which helps me unwind after a busy week.

× I do when I get when I got bored, when I traveling with my family and I start to looking at the window and just imagine that about something because I got bored.

✓ I do when I get bored, when I am travelling with my family, and I start looking out of the window and just imagine things because I am bored.

Penggunaan bentuk waktu campuran salah: ada perpaduan antara present dan past ('get' dan 'got'). Gunakan present tense konsisten untuk kebiasaan ('I get bored', 'I am travelling'). Hilangkan 'to' setelah 'start' dan gunakan bentuk -ing ('start looking'). Gunakan 'look out of the window' untuk preposisi yang tepat dan ubah 'that about something' menjadi 'imagine things' agar lebih alami.

× It's depend on the fuel.

✓ It depends on the mood.

Kalimat asli menggunakan present tense tapi kata kerja salah bentuk ('depend' harus 'depends' untuk third person singular). Selain itu 'fuel' tidak logis dalam konteks; kemungkinan yang dimaksud adalah 'mood' atau 'energy'. Gunakan 'depends' karena subjek 'It' memerlukan third person singular.

× If the fuel is that good, it's a beautiful and I do take a photo of the scenery and also if there is a interesting places that I've never been before and I want to have a memories with that, that's why I take them.

✓ If the conditions are good, it's beautiful and I do take photos of the scenery. Also, if there are interesting places that I've never been to and I want to have memories of them, that's why I take photos.

Beberapa masalah: penggunaan third person singular ('is a interesting places' harus 'are interesting places' karena 'places' jamak). Artikel dan jumlah salah ('a interesting places' seharusnya 'interesting places' atau 'an interesting place'). Preposisi juga salah ('been before' -> 'been to', 'memories with that' -> 'memories of them'). Gunakan 'photos' jamak konsisten dengan 'them'.

× It's a beautiful and I do take a photo of the scenery and also if there is a interesting places that I've never been before and I want to have a memories with that, that's why I take them.

✓ It's beautiful and I do take photos of the scenery. Also, if there are interesting places that I've never been to and I want to have memories of them, that's why I take photos.

Preposisi yang benar untuk pengalaman adalah 'been to' bukan 'been before'. Untuk kepemilikan ingatan gunakan 'memories of' bukan 'memories with'. Gunakan 'photos of the scenery' bukan 'photo of the scenery' jika maksudnya beberapa foto.

× That's why I take them.

✓ That's why I take photos.

Kata ganti 'them' tidak jelas dalam konteks; lebih jelas menyebutkan 'photos'. Gunakan kata benda spesifik untuk kejelasan.

× I'm typically of person that love nature but if you ask me prefer to the mountain of the sea I would say I would say I would go to the sea rather than a mountain because the sea feels like calm and can enjoy the beautiful sea.

✓ I'm typically a person who loves nature, but if you ask me whether I prefer the mountains or the sea, I would say I would go to the sea rather than the mountains because the sea feels calm and I can enjoy its beauty.

Beberapa kesalahan tense dan struktur: 'I'm typically of person' seharusnya 'I'm typically a person'. Subjek jamak 'person who loves' membutuhkan 'loves' (third person singular). Frasa perbandingan salah 'prefer to the mountain of the sea' harus 'prefer the mountains or the sea' atau 'prefer the mountain to the sea'. 'Rather than a mountain' konsistenkan menjadi 'rather than the mountains'. 'Feels like calm' salah struktur — gunakan 'feels calm'. Tambahkan 'I can' untuk subklausa kemampuan dan ganti 'the beautiful sea' menjadi 'its beauty' untuk variasi dan kelancaran.