Travelling— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Candidato
Yes, I always look out the window at the scenery when I'm traveling riding on a bus or car because there are scenic views out the window and I can't skip it.
Examinador
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Candidato
Yes, sometimes I take a photo of the scenery outside the transport window because, uh, I think that umm, those views are really beautiful and I post it in my Instagram.
Examinador
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Candidato
Personally I like the sea more than mountains because I have never been in the sea, so I would like to go to there and to enjoy with this views of sea.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Puntuación: 68.0Sugerencia: Сократите лишние слова, исправьте повторения и сделайте ответ более плавным и естественным. Лучше начать с ясного предложения, затем добавить одно короткое пояснение с связующим словом. Избегайте сочетаний вроде "traveling riding" и «can't skip it», которые звучат неестественно.
Ejemplo: Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because the views are often very scenic. For example, I enjoy watching the countryside change as we move between towns.
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Puntuación: 64.0Sugerencia: Уберите словесные паузы («uh», «umm»), используйте более точную лексику и логичную структуру. Дайте краткую причину и добавьте один конкретный пример, чтобы сделать ответ информативнее.
Ejemplo: Sometimes I take photos of the scenery outside the window because I find it beautiful. For instance, I often post sunset photos from the road on my Instagram.
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Puntuación: 58.0Sugerencia: Исправьте грамматические ошибки и тавтологию, используйте более конкретные причины и плавные связки. Фраза "I have never been in the sea" звучит неуклюже — лучше сказать "I have never been to the sea". Добавьте одно-два конкретных описания того, что привлекает в море.
Ejemplo: I prefer the sea because I have never really spent time at the coast and I'm curious about it. I would enjoy swimming, relaxing on the beach and watching the waves at sunset.
Gramática
× Yes, I always look out the window at the scenery when I'm traveling riding on a bus or car because there are scenic views out the window and I can't skip it.
✓ Yes, I always look out the window at the scenery when I'm traveling by bus or car because there are scenic views outside and I can't miss them.
Использование 'riding' лишнее и неестественно с 'traveling'; корректная форма — 'traveling by bus or car'. 'Outside' предпочтительнее чем 'out the window' здесь как место, и местоимение согласуется с множественным 'views' — 'them' вместо 'it'. Также 'can't miss' более подходящий фразовый глагол, чем 'can't skip' в данном контексте.
× Yes, sometimes I take a photo of the scenery outside the transport window because, uh, I think that umm, those views are really beautiful and I post it in my Instagram.
✓ Yes, sometimes I take photos of the scenery outside the vehicle window because I think that those views are really beautiful and I post them on my Instagram.
Предлог 'on' используется с 'Instagram' ('post on Instagram'), а не 'in'. 'Transport window' звучит неестественно; 'vehicle window' или просто 'window' лучше. 'A photo' следует заменить на множественное 'photos', если говорим в общем, и местоимение 'it' должно согласоваться с 'views' — 'them'. Убрать междометия ('uh', 'umm') для корректного письма.
× Personally I like the sea more than mountains because I have never been in the sea, so I would like to go to there and to enjoy with this views of sea.
✓ Personally, I prefer the sea to the mountains because I have never been to the sea, so I would like to go there and enjoy these views of the sea.
Сравнение: 'prefer the sea to the mountains' корректнее чем 'like the sea more than mountains'. Предлог 'to' с 'been' — 'been to the sea', а не 'in the sea' когда говорим о посещении места. 'Go to there' неверно, правильно 'go there'. 'Enjoy with this views' некорректно: 'enjoy these views' без предлога 'with', и 'this' должен быть во множественном 'these'. Также нужен артикль 'the sea'.
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