Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 문법과 표현을 자연스럽게 고치고 불필요한 중복을 줄이세요. 특히 동사구 조합(open/look out)을 정확히 사용하고, 어순과 관사, 전치사를 체크하세요. 또한 말을 망설이는 소리(MMM)를 줄이고 문장을 간결한 주제문 + 구체적 이유 형태로 구성하세요. 예: 주제문(창밖을 본다) → 이유(여행지의 다양한 풍경을 볼 수 있어서) → 구체적 예시(특별한 건물이나 풍경을 본 경험) 순으로 답하세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy seeing places I don't have near my home. For example, I like spotting unusual buildings and fields that I rarely see, which makes the trip more interesting.

Sugerencia: 현재 시제와 동사 형태를 정확히 사용하고 문장을 더 구체적으로 확장하세요. 예를 들어 'I like to take photos'처럼 to부정사 사용, 그리고 언제/어떤 풍경을 찍는지 구체적 예시를 추가하면 더 자연스럽습니다. 또한 이유와 결과를 연결하는 접속사를 사용하세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like to take photos from car windows because I enjoy capturing interesting landscapes during trips. For instance, I often photograph rolling hills and old bridges when I drive through the countryside, and these pictures help me remember the journey.

Sugerencia: 흐트러진 문장 구조와 문법 오류(복수·단수, 시제, 어순)를 수정하세요. 선호를 밝히는 주제문을 명확히 하고, 이어서 2~3개의 구체적 이유를 간결하게 제시하세요. 연결어(for example, also)로 이유를 자연스럽게 이어주고, 중복 표현을 피하세요.

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea because I enjoy swimming and sunbathing, and I find the sound of the waves very relaxing. For example, when I'm at the beach I can unwind and sleep better because of the peaceful atmosphere.

× Yes, I open lookout the window at the scenery when traveling by both or car. MMM because I can see the interesting things that can not see in my area.

✓ Yes, I look out of the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car because I can see interesting things that I cannot see in my area.

This sentence contains multiple issues: incorrect verb choice and word order ('open lookout the window' is wrong; use 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window'), incorrect preposition ('by both or car' should be 'by bus or car'), modal/auxiliary omission and contraction errors ('can not see' should be 'cannot see' and needs a subject 'I' before 'cannot see'), and unnecessary filler 'MMM'. Suggestion: use 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window', specify the mode of transport correctly ('by bus or car'), include the subject before verbs, and avoid fillers in formal responses.

× Yes, I like take photos outside the car window because I love capturing beautiful landscapes from the car window, especially when I'm traveling.

✓ Yes, I like taking photos outside the car window because I love capturing beautiful landscapes from the car window, especially when I'm travelling.

When 'like' is followed by a verb to express general preference, the verb should be in the -ing form ('like taking', not 'like take'). Also ensure consistent spelling ('travelling' British or 'traveling' American). Suggestion: use 'like taking' and keep consistent spelling.

× I prefer the sea because I love swimming and sunbathing and the sounds of waves is came coming for me.

✓ I prefer the sea because I love swimming and sunbathing and the sound of the waves is comforting to me.

This sentence has subject-verb agreement and tense issues: 'the sounds of waves is came coming for me' is ungrammatical. 'Sounds' (plural) with 'is' (singular) disagrees; 'came coming' is incorrect verb usage. A natural correction: 'the sound of the waves is comforting to me' or 'the sounds of the waves are comforting to me.' Suggestion: decide singular or plural ('sound' or 'sounds') and match the verb accordingly; use appropriate adjective (e.g., 'comforting') rather than awkward verb phrases.

× So I love the sea because of those these reasons.

✓ So I love the sea for these reasons.

Using both 'those' and 'these' together is redundant and incorrect. Choose one: 'these reasons' (if referring to reasons just mentioned) or 'those reasons' (if more distant). Also 'because of' can be simplified to 'for' in this context. Suggestion: use 'for these reasons'.