Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp, phát âm không được kiểm chứng ở đây nên tập trung vào ngữ pháp và mạch văn. Cụ thể: (1) Sửa thì và động từ (help → helps), (2) dùng số nhiều/phân từ đúng (windows → window hoặc keep plural consistently), (3) sửa lỗi chính tả (Sometime → Sometimes), (4) làm câu mạch lạc hơn bằng liên từ và chia câu hợp lý, giữ tối đa 4-5 câu. Hãy thêm một chi tiết cụ thể hơn (ví dụ loại cảnh bạn thích) và sử dụng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để kết nối ý.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel by bus or car, especially in a new place. It helps me relax and pass the time because I enjoy spotting local architecture and small cafes. Sometimes I even note down potential places to visit later, so the journey becomes part of my trip planning.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có ý tốt nhưng chứa nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai (text photo → take photos, traveling a new places → traveling to new places). Cần sửa cấu trúc câu để rõ ràng: dùng thì hiện tại đơn chính xác (I often take photos), chủ-vị-động từ phù hợp (have → helps me remember), và tránh câu dài lủng củng bằng liên từ như "because" hoặc "which". Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: loại cảnh bạn chụp hoặc mục đích chụp) và giới hạn 3-4 câu.

Ejemplo: To be honest, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window, especially when I travel to a new place. I like to capture roadside scenes and small villages because the pictures help me remember the journey. They also distract me and sometimes prevent me from feeling car sick.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời hiện tại không rõ ràng và chứa nhiều lỗi (CF và anxiety là sai ngữ cảnh; thiếu chủ ngữ/đối tượng cuối câu). Cần mở đầu trực tiếp với quan điểm rõ ràng (I prefer the sea), sửa ngữ pháp (sounds of the waves is very relaxing → the sound of the waves is very relaxing; which helps me unwind), và hoàn thành ví dụ cụ thể. Giữ 2–3 câu, dùng liên từ để nối ý và tránh từ không phù hợp. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động bạn làm trên bãi biển để cho câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea because the sound of the waves is very relaxing and helps me unwind after a busy week of school. For example, I often go to the beach to swim and read, which makes me feel refreshed. Mountains feel too quiet and isolated for my taste, so I usually choose the seaside for short breaks.

× For me it help me relax and pass the time.

✓ For me it helps me relax and pass the time.

'Help' needs an -s in the present simple third person singular subject 'it'. Use 'helps'. Suggestion: Remember to add -s for verbs when the subject is he/she/it; re-read sentences to check subject-verb agreement.

× Sometime I spot interesting places like coffee and viewpoint that I want to visit.

✓ Sometimes I spot interesting places like cafes and viewpoints that I want to visit.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to mean occasionally. 'coffee' is a noun for the beverage; the intended meaning is likely 'cafes' (plural). 'viewpoint' should be plural 'viewpoints' to match 'places'. Suggestion: Use 'sometimes' for frequency, and ensure nouns that refer to multiple items are plural when appropriate.

× To be honest, I often text photo of the landscape outside the car windows, especially when traveling a new places.

✓ To be honest, I often take photos of the landscape outside the car windows, especially when traveling to new places.

'Text photo' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'take photos'. 'Traveling a new places' needs 'to' after 'traveling' and 'places' should be plural without 'a'. Suggestion: Use 'take photos' for photographing; use 'traveling to new places' for movement toward locations.

× Capturing landscape and interesting roadside scenes have me remember the journey and it's also helped me prevent me from getting car sick.

✓ Capturing landscapes and interesting roadside scenes helps me remember the journey and it has also helped prevent me from getting carsick.

'Capturing landscapes and interesting roadside scenes' is a singular activity (or the subject is treated as singular), so use 'helps'. 'Have me remember' is ungrammatical — use 'helps me remember'. 'it's also helped me prevent me' is redundant; better: 'it has also helped prevent me' or 'it has also helped me avoid getting carsick'. 'carsick' is one word. Suggestion: Ensure verb agrees with the subject, avoid redundant pronouns, and use standard forms like 'helps me remember' and 'helped prevent me from' or 'helped me avoid'.

× I prefer the CF by the sounds of waves, anxiety a very relaxing which help me unwind after a busy week and school time.

✓ I prefer the coast by the sound of the waves; it is very relaxing and helps me unwind after a busy week at school.

'CF' is unclear and likely a typo for 'coast' or 'sea'. 'sounds' should be singular 'sound' when referring to the general sound, and 'anxiety' is incorrect; perhaps 'and is' is intended. The sentence structure is broken; 'which help me unwind' needs a clear subject and verb agreement: 'it ... helps'. 'school time' is better phrased 'at school'. Suggestion: Replace unclear abbreviations, ensure correct word choice ('sound' not 'sounds' when used generically can be 'sound' or 'the sound of the waves'), connect clauses properly with subjects and verbs, and use 'helps' for third-person singular subjects.

× For example, I often go to the beach to swim and read, whereas mountains feel too quiet and isolated from my.

✓ For example, I often go to the beach to swim and read, whereas the mountains feel too quiet and isolated for me.

The phrase 'isolated from my' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'isolated for me'. Also add 'the' before 'mountains' when referring to mountains in general. 'For me' or 'for me personally' expresses the subjective contrast. Suggestion: Use 'the mountains' for the general category, and use 'for me' to express personal feeling; ensure phrases are complete and not truncated.