Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and unfinished fragments. Also use correct verb forms and articles.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often look out the window when I travel by bus or car. I do this because watching the scenery helps me relax and take my mind off travel stress. For example, I enjoy seeing passing fields and small towns, which makes the journey feel shorter.

Sugerencia: Provide a concise reason and a specific example. Use correct tense and natural phrasing: say you take photos to remember the trip and describe a typical situation. Keep it within three sentences and use linking words like "so" or "so that".

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos through the car window so I can remember special moments from trips. For example, I usually photograph coastal views or interesting buildings and then look at those pictures when I return home to relive the experience.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a clear, specific reason. Avoid hesitations and unclear phrases. Use simple, accurate sentences to explain why you prefer the sea, and optionally contrast it briefly with the mountains.

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea because it makes me feel free and relaxed. The sound of the waves and the open horizon help me forget my worries, whereas the mountains feel more isolated and quiet.

× Yes I do because it is because it will assist me to relaxing and wind when traveling and it will also. Give me.

✓ Yes, I do because it helps me relax and unwind when traveling.

Original uses incorrect infinitive and gerund forms ('assist me to relaxing' and 'wind') and has a fragment ('and it will also. Give me.'). Use 'help' or 'assist' with base verb: 'help me relax' or 'assist me in relaxing'. 'Unwind' is the correct verb for 'relax'. Remove the sentence fragment and keep present tense because this is a habitual action: 'helps me relax and unwind when traveling.' Suggestion: simplify verbs and keep consistent tense and complete sentence structure.

× Yes, of course I do. It is because it will have to memorize my precious memory of traveling.

✓ Yes, of course I do. It is because it helps me remember my precious travel memories.

The phrase 'will have to memorize' is incorrect here: it uses future necessity and 'memorize' awkwardly. Use present simple 'helps me remember' for habitual action. 'Precious memory of traveling' is awkward; use 'precious travel memories.' Keep tense consistent with the question asking about a habitual preference.

× When I got back-to-back back from traveling, I can look back the scenery.

✓ When I come back from traveling, I can look back at the scenery.

Mixed tenses: 'got' (past) with 'can' (present). Use present simple or present habitual: 'When I come back' or 'When I get back.' Also need preposition 'at' after 'look back' when referring to scenery: 'look back at the scenery.' Remove redundant words 'back-to-back back.' Suggestion: 'When I come back from traveling, I can look back at the scenery.'

× I prefer sea because it is it gives me freedom.

✓ I prefer the sea because it gives me a sense of freedom.

Before nouns like 'sea' used in a general sense, English normally uses the definite article 'the.' Also 'it is it gives' is redundant; use 'because it gives me.' 'Sense of freedom' is a natural collocation. Keep present simple for preferences.

× Then mountains, uh when I have something trouble by sea, in sea it will have to maintain.

✓ As for the mountains, when I have trouble at sea, I need to stay safe there.

Original sentence has multiple issues: 'by sea, in sea' incorrect prepositions — use 'at sea.' 'Something trouble' is ungrammatical; use 'trouble' or 'a problem.' 'It will have to maintain' is unclear; probably means 'I need to stay safe' or 'they are easier to manage.' I corrected to a clear alternative that fits context: 'when I have trouble at sea, I need to stay safe there.' Use present simple modal 'need to' rather than awkward 'will have to maintain.'