Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevabınızı daha açık ve düzenli yapmalısınız. Öncelikle soruyu doğrudan bir konu cümlesiyle yanıtlayın (ör. "When I drive, I can't look out the window"). Ardından kısa nedenler verin ve gereksiz tekrarları ve karışık ifadeleri kaldırın. Bağlaçlar (because, but, so) kullanarak neden-sonuç ilişkisini net gösterin. Ayrıca kelime seçiminde net ve basit sözcükler tercih edin.

Ejemplo: When I drive a car, I usually don't look out of the window because I need to focus on the road. However, when I travel by bus and someone else is driving, I like to look at the scenery outside and enjoy the view.

Sugerencia: Cevabınızı basit ve doğrudan tutun. İlk cümlede net bir cevap verin (Yes/No + kısa sebep). Ardından bir örnek veya istisna ekleyin. Tekrarlardan kaçının ve zaman uyumuna dikkat edin (ör. "I don't", "my daughter likes"). Bağlaçlarla cümleleri mantıklı sırayla bağlayın.

Ejemplo: No, I don't take photos while driving because I must concentrate on the road. But my daughter often takes pictures from the car window when she is a passenger.

Sugerencia: Cevabınızı doğrudan tercihinizle başlayın ve ardından nedenleri açık ve spesifik bir şekilde verin. Karışık veya belirsiz ifadeler (ör. "take a picture of sing") yerine doğru kelimeleri kullanın (sea, mountains, countryside, river). Maksimum 3-4 cümlede nedenleri ve bir kısa örnek verin.

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea because I find the sound of the waves very relaxing. The sea scenery helps me unwind, and I often take photos of the coastline when I visit seaside towns.

× I couldn't look out the window when I was driving a car because when I drive a car I I have to look in front of Corbett when somebody plays something in bus.

✓ I couldn't look out of the window when I was driving a car because I have to look in front of me when I am driving, and I can't when someone is playing something on the bus.

The sentence has multiple structure and wording problems: incorrect word order, repeated words, wrong noun 'Corbett', and unclear clauses. Simplify into two coordinated clauses and use correct pronouns and prepositions: 'look out of the window', 'look in front of me', 'when someone is playing something on the bus'. Use present continuous for ongoing actions and simple past for the past context consistently.

× If somebody drives around the car, the bus I can look out window to and look the scenery.

✓ If somebody else is driving the bus or car, I can look out of the window and enjoy the scenery.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing prepositions. Use a clear subject 'somebody else', correct verb tense 'is driving' for ongoing action, and proper prepositions 'out of the window'. 'Look the scenery' is incorrect; use 'enjoy the scenery' or 'look at the scenery'.

× No I couldn't because I when I drive the car I cannot.

✓ No, I couldn't because when I drive the car I cannot look out of the window.

This fragment lacks clarity and proper verb placement. Combine clauses and place the verb 'look' after 'cannot' to form a complete idea. Maintain consistent tense: past ability 'couldn't' referring to past situations and present 'drive' to general habit; better to use present 'drive' with 'cannot' for habitual context.

× I couldn't watch it all off the window so but my daughter likes to watching out of the window this scenery so she can take a photo while while I'm running.

✓ I couldn't watch everything through the window, but my daughter likes looking out of the window at the scenery, so she can take photos while I'm driving.

Problems: wrong pronoun/object 'it', incorrect preposition 'off the window', unnecessary repetition 'while while', and incorrect verb forms 'likes to watching'. Use gerund 'looking' after 'likes', 'through' or 'out of the window', and 'driving' rather than 'running' to match vehicle context.

× I prefer to take a picture of sing because it's relaxing to me.

✓ I prefer to take pictures of the sea because it is relaxing to me.

The word 'sing' is likely a typo for 'sea'. Use plural 'pictures' for general preference, and 'it is relaxing to me' is clearer. Ensure vocabulary is accurate.

× When I see the river and some other places, it's more comfortable and it makes me relax.

✓ When I see rivers and other places, it makes me feel more comfortable and relaxed.

Awkward phrasing: 'it's more comfortable' should refer to the speaker's feelings. Use 'it makes me feel more comfortable and relaxed' for natural expression. Use plural 'rivers' or 'the river' consistently; choose plural for general statement.