Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is natural and relevant, but it could be more concise and better organized. Begin with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid fillers (e.g., “uh”) and slightly repetitive phrases. Keep within 3–4 sentences for clarity.

Ejemplo: I don't usually look out the window when traveling by bus or car. Instead, I often play games on my phone or read a book because I find those activities more engaging. Also, when I'm tired I prefer to close my eyes and rest, especially if the weather is bad or the route is unfamiliar.

Sugerencia: Good direct answer and clear reason. Improve by correcting a small grammatical error and adding a brief example to make it more specific. Use a linking word to connect the reason and the example, and keep it within two sentences.

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually take photos of scenery because I'm not the type of person who likes to document every moment. For example, when I travel I focus on enjoying the view rather than stopping to photograph it.

Sugerencia: This is a strong answer with clear preference and specific reasons. To improve further, use a linking phrase to structure your points and vary vocabulary slightly. You could add a short personal detail to make it more vivid, while keeping the response concise.

Ejemplo: I definitely prefer the mountains because the air is refreshing and the atmosphere is much calmer. For instance, I enjoy hiking there since it's peaceful and cooler, whereas beaches often feel crowded and too hot for me.

× Also, if the weather is bad and it's dark outside, there's really not much to see anyway and unfamiliar routes.

✓ Also, if the weather is bad and it's dark outside, there's really not much to see, and the routes are unfamiliar.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks a verb for 'unfamiliar routes.' This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Connect the clauses properly and provide a verb for the second idea. Suggestion: add a conjunction and a verb phrase ('the routes are unfamiliar') to make two coordinated clauses.

× No, because I'm not really the type of person who would likes to document every moment or any place that I went to.

✓ No, because I'm not really the type of person who would like to document every moment or any place that I go to.

The verb after 'would' should be the base form, so 'likes' is incorrect. This is a third person singular/modal verb error (ID 2). Use 'would like' (base verb) and keep tense consistent: 'go to' rather than 'went to' to match the general preference being described.

× I prefer to live the moment.

✓ I prefer to live in the moment.

The idiomatic expression is 'live in the moment.' This is an issue with prepositional usage/phrase correctness related to the verb phrase (ID 10). Add the preposition 'in' to form the correct present participle phrase 'live in the moment.'

× I definitely prefer mountains over the sea because the air is very refreshing and chilly and the atmosphere is also very calm compared to the beach which is always so crowded and the sun is blazing hot.

✓ I definitely prefer the mountains to the sea because the air is very refreshing and chilly, and the atmosphere is also very calm compared to the beach, which is always so crowded and where the sun is blazing hot.

Several issues: comparatives with 'prefer' usually take 'prefer X to Y' rather than 'over' (Article/structure-related, ID 22). Also the long sentence needs commas and a relative clause: 'the beach, which is always so crowded' and it's clearer to add 'where' before 'the sun is blazing hot.' Restructure to correct idiomatic comparison and punctuation.

× Not always, sometimes I like to just play games on my phone or read a book.

✓ Not always. Sometimes I like to just play games on my phone or read a book.

This is mainly punctuation/structure: the original joins two independent clauses with a comma, creating a comma splice which is a sentence structure problem but also affects tense clarity (ID 6). Separate into two sentences for clarity and correctness.

× Or when I'm tired I might just, uh, close my eyes and take a rest.

✓ Or when I'm tired, I might just close my eyes and take a rest.

The original has misplaced filler 'uh' and missing comma after the subordinate clause. This is a modal verb usage/ punctuation issue (ID 4). Keep 'might' with base verbs ('close' and 'take') and add a comma after the introductory clause; avoid filler words in formal responses.