Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, correct grammar, and use linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and word choice (e.g., 'feel bored' not 'feel boring'), and add one specific detail using a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'so'). Avoid repeating words like 'always' unnecessarily.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I get bored easily. For example, on long trips I enjoy watching the countryside pass by since it helps me relax and notice small details like farms and rivers.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and organize reasons with linking words. Correct word choice ('photothermic' is incorrect; say 'a keen photographer') and grammar ('I sometimes take photos', 'it depends on the situation'). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and give a specific example of a situation when you would take photos.

Ejemplo: I don't usually take photos from the car, but I sometimes do when the view is exceptional. For instance, last summer I stopped to photograph a dramatic sunset over the fields because the colours were unique and I wanted to keep the memory.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, concise preference and support it with one or two specific reasons using linking words such as 'because' or 'since'. Avoid repetitive phrases ('also I'd like to mention') and grammatical errors ('mountains is' → 'the mountains are').

Ejemplo: I prefer the mountains because I grew up in Lutsen, which is a very mountainous area. Therefore I love hiking and fresh air, and I find mountains more peaceful than the busy seaside.

× Yes I always do because when I traveling by bus or car I always feel boring, bored and also I am a person who is very energetic so that's why I always want to watch window and look at the scenery.

✓ Yes, I always do because when I travel by bus or car I always feel bored, and I am a very energetic person, so I always want to look out of the window and watch the scenery.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'traveling' after 'when I' (should be base form 'travel' for present simple); misuse of 'boring' vs 'bored' (use 'bored' to describe feeling); awkward word order and article/ preposition choices ('watch window' -> 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window'); redundant phrases simplified. Suggestion: use simple present tense for habitual actions (I travel), use 'bored' to describe feeling, place adjectives correctly (a very energetic person), and use correct preposition 'out of' or 'out' with 'look'.

× No, actually I took photos, uh, sometimes, because when there's a good scenery, always I want to like to take some photos.

✓ No, actually I take photos sometimes, because when there is a good view I always want to take some photos.

Errors: incorrect past tense 'took' conflicts with habitual meaning—use simple present 'take'; 'there's a good scenery' is unnatural: use 'there is a good view' or 'the scenery is good'; awkward word order 'always I want to like to take' and filler 'like' should be removed. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions, choose natural noun 'view' or 'scenery' without 'a' in some contexts ('good scenery' -> 'good view' or 'beautiful scenery'), and avoid filler words.

× But I am not photothermic person.

✓ But I am not a photogenic person.

Errors: 'photothermic' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'photogenic' or 'photographer' or 'photo person'. Also missing article 'a' before the noun. Suggestion: choose the correct adjective 'photogenic' to mean looks good in photos, or say 'I am not a photography person' if meaning you don't like taking photos; always include the article when referring to a singular countable noun.

× So that's why I think it's depends on the situation.

✓ So that's why I think it depends on the situation.

Errors: unnecessary contraction 'it's' plus verb 'depends' creates incorrect subject—use 'it depends' (subject 'it' + verb 'depends'); 'that's why' is fine but avoid doubling subjects. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb pair 'it depends' for this expression.

× I always prefer the mountains because also I'd like to mention that I am from Lutsen and Lutsen is really mountainous place so that's why and also I'd like to mention that I was born in there so that's why the mountains is more natural thing for me and that's the answer.

✓ I always prefer the mountains. I'd like to add that I am from Lutsen, and Lutsen is a really mountainous place. I was born there, so mountains feel more natural to me.

Errors: run-on sentence and several tense/article problems: 'mountainous place' needs article 'a'; 'born in there' should be 'born there' (no 'in'); subject-verb agreement 'the mountains is' should be 'mountains feel' or 'the mountains are'; awkward phrasing 'more natural thing for me' -> 'feel more natural to me'. Suggestion: split into shorter sentences, use correct articles, remove unnecessary words, use correct verb forms and agreement, and prefer 'feel' for personal reactions.