Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Сократите паузы и междометия, исправьте грамматические ошибки и стройте ответ более связно: начните с чёткого топик‑предложения, затем добавьте одно‑два конкретных вспомогательных предложения с связками. Например, избегайте частого «uh» и используйте правильные формы глаголов (I think → I was thinking / I think).

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I often look out of the window when I travel by car because I enjoy watching the changing landscape. For example, I like noticing forests and small villages, which makes me feel relaxed and helps me think about my future plans.

Sugerencia: Уменьшите количество заполнителей («uh») и завершайте мысль. Дайте прямой ответ, затем пояснение с примером. Обратите внимание на выбор слов (scenario → scenery) и порядок слов (through the car window).

Ejemplo: Only occasionally. If the scenery impresses me, I'll take a photo, but usually I prefer to stop and photograph nature directly rather than through a car window. For instance, when I visit a beach I often get out and take close‑up shots.

Sugerencia: Уберите лишние «uh» и сделайте ответ более точным: начните с короткого утверждения, затем добавьте два конкретных объяснения с связкой (for example, because…). Используйте правильные артикли (the Baltic Sea) и глагольные формы.

Ejemplo: I definitely prefer the sea. I especially love the Baltic Sea in Latvia because I enjoy long walks on the beach and watching stunning sunsets. For example, when I visit Latvia I spend hours at the seaside breathing the fresh sea air and relaxing.

× At this moment, uh, I thinking about my life, about my plans and future.

✓ At this moment, I am thinking about my life, about my plans and future.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' required for the present continuous tense (present participle form). Use subject + be + verb-ing: 'I am thinking'. Also remove filler sounds for clarity.

× If I see, uh, the scenario, which, uh, really impressed me, uh, I, uh, would do, uh, take a photo, uh, but uh, mostly I don't remember.

✓ If I see a scene that really impresses me, I would take a photo, but mostly I don't.

The original mixes tenses and incorrect forms: 'scenario' is better as 'scene' for scenery; 'which really impressed me' uses past participle incorrectly in a conditional about present/future — use present tense 'that really impresses me'. 'Would do take' is ungrammatical; use 'would take' or simply 'I take' depending on meaning. Also 'mostly I don't remember' is vague; 'mostly I don't' is clearer when referring to taking photos.

× I prefer to make pictures of the nature, not through the window of car, but when I'm.

✓ I prefer to take pictures of nature, not through a car window, but when I'm outside.

Problems: 'make pictures of the nature' is unnatural—use 'take pictures of nature'. 'the window of car' should be 'a car window'. The sentence ends incomplete 'but when I'm.' Complete with 'outside' to convey meaning. Overall fix improves word choice and sentence completion.

× I definitely prefer the sea. Uh, I love Baltic Sea in Latvia.

✓ I definitely prefer the sea. I love the Baltic Sea in Latvia.

Proper nouns for seas usually require the definite article 'the': 'the Baltic Sea'. Missing 'the' is an article error.

× Uh, when I come, uh, to Latvia, I usually spend lots of time at the seaside and, uh uh, watching this, uh, stunning sunsets, uh, and uh, feel this fresh air of the sea.

✓ When I come to Latvia, I usually spend a lot of time at the seaside, watching stunning sunsets and enjoying the fresh sea air.

Verb forms and parallel structure are incorrect: 'spend lots of time ... and watching' should be 'spend a lot of time ... watching' (participial clause). 'Watching this stunning sunsets' wrong article/number—use 'watching stunning sunsets'. 'and feel this fresh air of the sea' is awkward; use 'enjoying the fresh sea air'. Remove fillers for fluency.