Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally natural and relevant, but it's slightly long and contains some awkward phrasing and grammar errors. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window', 'how beautiful the world is' → 'how beautiful the scenery is', 'the road I passed' → 'the roads I pass'). Keep it to a maximum of 3–4 sentences and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually look out the window when I travel by bus or car. I find the changing scenery relaxing, and I like noticing local architecture and landscapes as we pass through different areas. For example, I often enjoy watching villages and fields when I travel between cities.

Sugerencia: The content is good, but the response has unclear phrasing and grammar issues that reduce clarity. Use a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details with linking words. Avoid redundancy ('not only photos but also videos' is fine once) and finish sentences cleanly. Mention when and why you post versus keeping footage private to add specificity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take both photos and short videos of the view from the car. I usually post the best ones on Instagram with a fitting song, but sometimes I keep clips private as a personal travel record.

Sugerencia: Your answer communicates the idea but is grammatically weak and a little confused. Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference (or that you have no preference), then provide two contrasting specific reasons using linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand'. Correct awkward phrases ('mountains can't relax my heart' → 'mountains sometimes calm me', 'give cold air' → 'offer cool, fresh air'). Keep it concise.

Ejemplo: I enjoy both, so I can't choose one. For example, mountains often calm me with their cool, fresh air and peaceful trails; however, I also love the sea because swimming and the warm sun help me relax and have fun.

× I prefer to stay awake and look at the window how beautiful the world is, because sometimes I think the road I passed is very beautiful.

✓ I prefer to stay awake and look out of the window to see how beautiful the world is, because sometimes I think the roads I pass are very beautiful.

The original uses 'look at the window' and ungrammatical clause order. 'Look out of the window' or 'look out the window' is idiomatic. To describe purpose use 'to see how...'. 'The road I passed' mixes past tense with a general present observation; use simple present 'roads I pass' for habitual actions and plural 'roads' to match general reference.

× Yes, I usually do not only photos but also videos too and I love to post it on Instagram or other social media and give the related music some but sometimes I just keep it as my history or.

✓ Yes, I usually take not only photos but also videos, and I love to post them on Instagram or other social media and add suitable music, but sometimes I just keep them as my story.

Errors include incorrect verb 'do' for taking photos (use 'take photos'), incorrect word order 'do not only photos', wrong pronoun agreement ('it' should be 'them' for plural 'photos and videos'), awkward phrase 'give the related music some' should be 'add suitable music', and 'history' is the wrong word for social media ephemeral posts; use 'story'. Also punctuation and sentence structure were fixed for clarity.

× I like both, I cannot choose one because sometimes I feel mountains can't relax my heart and my mind. It can give cold air for me and but sometimes I need to swim too so I would go to see.

✓ I like both; I cannot choose one because sometimes I feel the mountains can't relax my heart and mind. They can give me cold air, but sometimes I need to swim, so I would go to the sea.

Preposition and pronoun issues: 'give cold air for me' is unnatural — use 'give me cold air'. 'But' was misplaced; punctuation fixed. 'Go to see' is incorrect; intended meaning is 'go to the sea'. Also subject number: 'mountains' plural requires plural pronoun 'they'. Removed redundant 'my' before 'mind'.