Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “I prefer typing.”), then give one or two brief, specific reasons using linking words (e.g., “because” or “so”). Avoid fillers like “actually” and vague phrases such as “so many other things.”

Ejemplo: I prefer typing, especially on my phone, because it's faster and more convenient for chatting with friends. For example, I can reply quickly and use emojis to express tone, so conversations feel more natural.

Sugerencia: Organize your response into a clear topic sentence and specific supporting details. Answer directly (Yes/No) and then explain where you type, how often, and with whom. Avoid repetition and correct grammar (e.g., “on my mobile phone” not “on keyboard my off my mobile phone”).

Ejemplo: No, I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day. I usually type on my mobile phone several times a day to text my close friends and reply to social media messages, which is quicker and more convenient for me.

Sugerencia: Give a clear time reference and trim unsure language. Begin with a direct time statement, then add a brief detail about context (where or why you learned). Avoid broken phrases and filler words.

Ejemplo: I started learning to type when I was around seven, which is about ten years ago. I first learned at school during computer lessons where we practiced basic typing exercises.

Sugerencia: Provide a structured answer: topic sentence stating your main method, followed by two specific strategies with linking phrases (e.g., “for example,” “also”). Avoid vague emotional statements and unfinished sentences. Correct grammar and be concise.

Ejemplo: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I use online typing exercises to increase speed, and I also practice by texting and writing short notes daily to build accuracy and confidence.

× Actually pretty much both, but mostly I guess enjoy typing on my mobile phone because I feel more comfortable than handwriting with my friends and so many other things.

✓ Actually, I enjoy both, but I mostly prefer typing on my mobile phone because I feel more comfortable typing than handwriting when I'm with my friends and for many other things.

Original sentence has unclear pronoun references and missing subjects ('I' before 'pretty much both') and incorrect comparison structure ('more comfortable than handwriting with my friends' is awkward). Use 'I enjoy both' to state preference, 'mostly prefer' to indicate primary choice, and compare activities clearly with 'more comfortable typing than handwriting'. Use 'when I'm with my friends' to clarify context and 'for many other things' instead of 'so many other things'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Actually, hardly ever. Instead I enjoy typing. On keyboard my off my mobile phone regularly and I enjoy texting with my some of my friends by message who are my regular companion.

✓ Actually, I hardly ever type on a desktop or laptop. Instead, I regularly type on my mobile phone and enjoy texting some of my regular friends by message.

Original sentences are fragmented and contain word order errors ('On keyboard my off my mobile phone' is ungrammatical), unnecessary phrases ('who are my regular companion' is singular and redundant). Combine fragments into coherent sentence, correct word order to 'type on a desktop or laptop' and 'type on my mobile phone', and use 'some of my regular friends' for plural. Remove 'by message' can remain but 'texting' implies messaging. Grammar problem type ID:26

× As far as I remember, I probably started learning. Of type on a keyboard at a very young age, which I think would be nearly a decade ago.

✓ As far as I remember, I probably started learning to type on a keyboard at a very young age, which I think was nearly a decade ago.

Original has misplaced phrase 'Of type' and mixes tenses and modal ('would be') incorrectly. Use the correct infinitive 'learning to type' and past tense 'was nearly a decade ago' to match 'started'. Remove superfluous modal 'would' to state a recollection. Maintain past tense for past events. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Uh, a lot of practice and dedication that I did to improve my typing and I never depressed and stressed, uh, whether I can't or unsuccess, but at the.

✓ I improved my typing through a lot of practice and dedication, and I never got depressed or stressed even when I couldn't succeed at first.

Original is fragmented, has incorrect verb forms and word choices ('that I did to improve', 'I never depressed and stressed', 'whether I can't or unsuccess', 'but at the.'). Recast into coherent sentence: use 'improved my typing through' to show method, 'never got depressed or stressed' for correct verb usage, and 'even when I couldn't succeed at first' to express early failures. This fixes sentence structure and word choice. Grammar problem type ID:26