Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer typing than handwriting because when in typing I can replace the wrong word easily. For example, when I have to write a lot of words, it was helpful.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
I do type on laptop keyboard every day because I only have laptops and laptops make me use my keyboard everywhere because desktop is very heavy and it's not suitable for carrying so it helps me a lot.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
When I was a junior high school, there were classes to use the computer. For example, writing, typing, searching and also editing how to make the document. These skills that I learned helped me a lot to work with laptop.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
In order to get more skills of typing, I practiced with computer programs which types as much as I can in one minute, so it helps me to improve my typing skills.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct, use a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Avoid tense errors and redundant phrases. Use a linking word when giving an example.
Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it lets me correct mistakes quickly. For example, when I need to write long essays, using a word processor makes editing and reorganising my ideas much easier.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Start with a concise topic sentence and then give one clear reason with a linking word. Avoid repetition (e.g. repeating 'laptop') and improve sentence grammar and flow.
Ejemplo: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I only own a laptop and it’s portable. Therefore, I can work anywhere, whereas a desktop would be too heavy and inconvenient to carry.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: Give a direct answer with a clear time reference, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Correct small grammar issues and make the examples more fluent.
Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was in junior high school, during computer classes. In those lessons we practised typing, word processing and online research, which really helped me use laptops confidently later on.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: Give a concise topic sentence about your method, then add a clear specific detail about the program or routine with a linking word. Fix awkward phrasing and use natural collocations (e.g. 'typing speed' or 'practice with typing programs').
Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practising regularly with online typing programs that measure words per minute. For instance, I use a one-minute test every day to focus on accuracy and gradually increase my typing speed.
× I prefer typing than handwriting because when in typing I can replace the wrong word easily.
✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because when typing I can replace a wrong word easily.
Use 'prefer to' not 'prefer than' for comparisons. Also remove 'in' before 'typing' and use 'a wrong word' or 'an incorrect word'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer typing to handwriting' and 'when typing I can replace a wrong word easily.'
× For example, when I have to write a lot of words, it was helpful.
✓ For example, when I had to write a lot of words, it was helpful.
Sentence mixes present 'have to' with past 'was.' Keep tense consistent: use past 'had to' to match 'was helpful.' Alternatively, change 'was' to 'is' if speaking generally.
× I do type on laptop keyboard every day because I only have laptops and laptops make me use my keyboard everywhere because desktop is very heavy and it's not suitable for carrying so it helps me a lot.
✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I only have laptops, and they let me use my keyboard anywhere; a desktop is very heavy and not suitable for carrying, so laptops help me a lot.
Unnecessary 'do' for emphasis removed; use article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard.' Use pronoun 'they' to refer to 'laptops.' Use 'anywhere' instead of 'everywhere' for context. Also improve sentence cohesion by splitting and choosing correct verb forms.
× When I was a junior high school, there were classes to use the computer.
✓ When I was in junior high school, there were classes on using the computer.
Use 'in' with 'junior high school.' Say 'classes on using the computer' or 'computer classes' instead of 'classes to use the computer.' Preposition 'on' or the noun form 'computer classes' is more natural.
× For example, writing, typing, searching and also editing how to make the document.
✓ For example, we learned writing, typing, searching, and editing to make documents.
Original is a fragment and has awkward structure. Use a full clause 'we learned' and plural 'documents.' Use 'editing' followed by purpose 'to make documents.' This fixes sentence structure and verb usage.
× These skills that I learned helped me a lot to work with laptop.
✓ These skills that I learned helped me a lot when working with a laptop.
Add article 'a' before 'laptop.' Use 'when working with a laptop' for natural expression; avoids awkward 'to work with laptop.' Also keep tense consistent.
× In order to get more skills of typing, I practiced with computer programs which types as much as I can in one minute, so it helps me to improve my typing skills.
✓ To improve my typing skills, I practiced with computer programs that measure how many words I can type in one minute, so they helped me improve.
'Skills of typing' is unnatural; use 'typing skills.' 'Programs which types' is wrong: 'programs that measure' and plural verb 'they helped.' Also change 'as much as I can' to 'how many words I can type.' Maintain past tense 'practiced' and 'helped.'