Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct tense and article errors, and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing. First, handwriting helps me remember information better because forming letters and writing notes by hand engages my memory. For example, when I take handwritten notes in class, I recall details more easily than from typed notes.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and explain briefly with clear linking words. Remove fillers and unclear phrases. Use one supporting detail about frequency or purpose.

Ejemplo: I type on a laptop keyboard every day. Because I use a laptop for lectures and assignments, I usually type for two to three hours daily, mainly for writing essays and researching online.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear time reference, then give a brief context. Avoid hesitations and repeated phrases. Use correct past tense and concise supporting detail.

Ejemplo: I learned to type at about six years old when my older sister, who was studying at college, showed me how to use her laptop. She taught me basic finger placement, and I practiced a little each day until I became comfortable.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear method you use to improve, then give a specific example or routine. Correct grammar and avoid vague phrases like 'again and again.' Use linking words to connect idea and result.

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practicing regularly and using online typing exercises. For instance, I spend 20 minutes a day on typing drills to increase speed and accuracy, and as a result my words-per-minute has steadily improved.

× I would say I always prepared handwriting because since my childhood my mother taught me that we knew our handwriting.

✓ I would say I have always preferred handwriting because since my childhood my mother taught me that we should know our handwriting.

Tense and word choice: 'always prepared handwriting' is incorrect. Use present perfect 'have always preferred' to indicate a continuous preference up to now. 'Prepared' is wrong here; 'prefer' expresses choice. 'We knew our handwriting' should be 'we should know our handwriting' to express expectation or taught behavior. Suggestion: use present perfect for ongoing habits and choose verbs that match meaning (prefer, know, should).

× The things you are handwriting is remained in your brain other than typing.

✓ The things you handwrite remain in your brain more than typing does.

Pronoun and verb form errors: 'you are handwriting' is unnatural; use the verb 'handwrite'. 'Is remained' is incorrect passive; use simple present 'remain'. Also compare actions properly: 'more than typing does' clarifies the comparison. Suggestion: use active verbs and correct comparative structure 'X remain more than Y does'. Use subject-verb agreement 'things... remain'.

× So I am saying that handwriting is so special for our study and memorizing things.

✓ So I would say that handwriting is very helpful for studying and memorizing things.

Awkward phrasing: 'special for our study and memorizing things' is unnatural. Use 'helpful for studying and memorizing' to convey purpose. 'So I am saying' can be simplified to 'So I would say'. Suggestion: use gerunds for activities (studying, memorizing) and choose appropriate adjectives (helpful rather than special).

× Since I am in a university, I would always uh, type on a laptop keyboard every day and it every time I type on the keyboard, it's better than next.

✓ Since I am at university, I always type on a laptop keyboard every day, and whenever I type on the keyboard, it works better than the others.

Preposition and tense: use 'at university' rather than 'in a university'. 'I would always type' is wrong for habitual present; use 'I always type'. The clause 'it every time I type on the keyboard, it's better than next' is unclear; rephrase to 'whenever I type... it works better than the others' or specify what 'better' compares to. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and clear comparative phrases.

× So I always type on the laptop keyboard every day.

✓ So I always type on the laptop keyboard every day.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable but slightly redundant: 'always' and 'every day' both indicate frequency. Suggestion: keep one: either 'I always type on the laptop keyboard' or 'I type on the laptop keyboard every day.'

× OK, that is so interesting question because when I was young, about 6 years old, my big sister taught me how to type on a keyboard.

✓ OK, that is a very interesting question because when I was young, about six years old, my older sister taught me how to type on a keyboard.

Article and word choice: 'so interesting question' should be 'a very interesting question'. Use 'older sister' rather than 'big sister' in this context. Numerals should be written as words in speech transcripts optionally, but grammar-wise '6 years old' to 'six years old' is minor. Tense 'taught' is correct past. Suggestion: fix article and use natural collocations.

× There was a time that was a time when my sister is in, it was in a, uh, college.

✓ There was a time when my sister was in college.

Redundancy and tense/pronoun errors: 'There was a time that was a time when' is repetitive. 'my sister is in, it was in a, uh, college' mixes present and past and unnecessary words. Simplify to 'There was a time when my sister was in college.' Suggestion: remove redundancy and keep consistent past tense for past events.

× So she had uh, laptop.

✓ So she had a laptop.

Missing article: 'had laptop' needs an indefinite article 'a laptop'. Also 'uh' is filler; remove in corrected sentence. Suggestion: include appropriate articles before countable nouns.

× So ** *** taught me, I have to type on a keyboard.

✓ So she taught me that I had to type on a keyboard.

Tense and reporting: reporting past teaching should use past tense 'taught me that I had to...' rather than present 'I have to'. The placeholder '** ***' likely refers to 'she'; replace with appropriate pronoun. Suggestion: keep tense consistent in reported speech (past after past).

× I can't say that type on a keyboard is easy, but when my computer science taught teacher told me was that when you are, when you are uh, doing again and again, it will improve easily.

✓ I can't say that typing on a keyboard is easy, but my computer science teacher told me that if you practice again and again, it will improve easily.

Multiple errors: 'type on a keyboard' should be gerund 'typing'. 'taught teacher' is incorrect order; use 'computer science teacher'. Reporting should be 'told me that if you practice again and again, it will improve.' 'Doing again and again' is vague—use 'practice'. Suggestion: use gerunds for activities, correct word order, and use 'if' for conditionals.

× So I always typed on a keyboard every day.

✓ So I always type on a keyboard every day.

Tense: 'always typed' is past simple but context indicates a present habitual action; use simple present 'always type'. Also redundancy with 'always' and 'every day'—consider removing one. Suggestion: use simple present for current habits.