Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I think I prefer, prefer handwriting, uh, because I, I think it's convenient and, uh. Typing.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
I type on a laptop keyboard every day as a college. College students a laptop keyboard as a important equipment. It's covenants.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
Let me think about 2000. 18 years we need to take class in the home so we we must to type on a keyboard as I guess I.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I think it's, uh, that need need that need lots of, uh, practice. You need to. MMM, I think you also. You also can improve your typing by.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 48.0Sugerencia: Be more concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetitions and filler words (uh, I think) to sound more fluent.
Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand, I retain details longer and can organize ideas more personally.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Give a clear, grammatical sentence and add one specific reason. Use linking words and correct vocabulary (e.g., "essential" instead of "covenants"). Avoid fragmentary phrases.
Ejemplo: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because I am a college student and I need it for lectures and assignments. It is essential for writing essays, researching online, and communicating with classmates.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 36.0Sugerencia: Provide a clear date or age and a brief explanation. Use correct tense and structure, e.g., "I learned to type in..." Avoid uncertain fillers and repetition.
Ejemplo: I learned to type in 2018 when I was about 18 years old. At that time our school required computer classes, so I practiced typing regularly during lessons.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 30.0Sugerencia: Give a structured answer: state the main method, then list specific practices using linking words. Be specific about activities and frequency, and avoid hesitations.
Ejemplo: The best way to improve typing is regular practice. For instance, I use online typing tutorials for 20 minutes daily and focus on accuracy with exercises, and I also try to type essays to increase my speed and confidence.
× I think I prefer, prefer handwriting, uh, because I, I think it's convenient and, uh. Typing.
✓ I think I prefer handwriting because I think it's more convenient than typing.
The sentence contains repetition ('prefer, prefer' and 'I, I') and a fragment ('Typing.'). This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Remove repeated words and combine fragments to form a complete sentence. Also add a comparison phrase ('more convenient than typing') to clarify the contrast.
× I type on a laptop keyboard every day as a college. College students a laptop keyboard as a important equipment. It's covenants.
✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day as a college student. A laptop keyboard is important equipment. It is convenient.
Multiple errors: 'as a college.' is incomplete and should be 'as a college student' (sentence structure and missing noun). 'College students a laptop keyboard as a important equipment.' is ungrammatical: missing verb and article issues (IDs 26 and 22). Use 'A laptop keyboard is important equipment' or 'An important piece of equipment.' Also 'covenants' is incorrect word choice and form; likely meant 'convenient' (adjective) and requires 'It is convenient.' Fix subject-verb structure and articles.
× Let me think about 2000. 18 years we need to take class in the home so we we must to type on a keyboard as I guess I.
✓ Let me think. Around 2000, when I was 18 years old, we had to take classes at home, so we had to learn to type on a keyboard, I guess.
Errors include incorrect year expression and disjointed sentence fragments, incorrect tense usage ('need to take' for past) and unnecessary 'to' after 'must' (IDs 5 and 26). Use past tense 'had to' for past obligations and correct time phrase 'when I was 18 years old'. Remove duplicate 'we we' and use 'learn to type' or 'learned to type'.
× I think it's, uh, that need need that need lots of, uh, practice. You need to. MMM, I think you also. You also can improve your typing by.
✓ I think it needs lots of practice. You need to practice regularly. You can also improve your typing by practicing every day and using typing exercises.
Original has repetition and awkward modal/verb forms: 'that need need' is incorrect; correct is 'it needs' (subject-verb agreement, ID 27 and 6). 'You need to.' is a fragment—complete with the verb 'practice'. 'You also can' is acceptable but 'You can also' is more natural (word order, ID 20). Finish the sentence by providing methods. Use consistent verb forms and complete sentences.
× It's covenants.
✓ It is convenient.
'Covenants' is a wrong word form; correct adjective is 'convenient'. This is a word choice and spelling error leading to an ungrammatical sentence (closest listed types: 26 sentence structure and 13 adjective/adverb use). Replace with the correct adjective and use the full form 'It is convenient.'