Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
Uh, I prefer handwriting because if I choose typing message for others, I usually made mistakes. So if I choose handwriting, if I can performance my things is right and I think handwriting is convenient for me, I can write it every.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Definitely light the table because the live table is convenient for me to bring outside. So if I have enough time I will choose to type on the night table. It's so convenient and I can use it on a lot a lot aspect.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I guess it was on my primary school you that at that time I learned how to recognize the words. So I I used the keyboard to type some words to and save save message to my friends.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I think I don't have other choice, I just taping every day. I think practice more and I can improve my level. So in my daily life I usually spend a lot of time to typing such as I send the message use typing and also words I usually use typing too.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 42.0Sugerencia: 回答应更简洁、语法更准确并包含具体原因或例子。注意时态和主谓一致,减少重复。可以先给出主题句,然后用一两句具体说明(例如:写错字更少、感觉更有条理、适用于记笔记)。
Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing because I make fewer mistakes when I write by hand. For example, when I take notes in class I find my ideas are clearer and easier to organize on paper, and I don’t worry about autocorrect changing my words.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: 回答不清晰且词汇使用错误。应直接说出设备类型(desktop/laptop/tablet/phone),并说明具体原因和使用场景,使用关联词使句子连贯。避免重复和词语混淆。
Ejemplo: I usually type on a laptop because it’s portable and easy to take outside. For example, I often work in cafes or at the library, so a laptop is more convenient than a desktop.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 回答应提供明确时间点并用简洁句子描述学习过程。避免含糊表达和重复,提供具体细节(比如哪一年级、如何学习、练习方法或场景)。
Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was in primary school, around age eight. At that time we had computer lessons where the teacher taught us basic typing and I practised by typing short messages and school assignments.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 回答应更具体,说明练习方法和频率,使用正确词汇(例如 "practice", "typing exercises", "online lessons"),并举例说明效果或计划。保持两到三句即可。
Ejemplo: I improve my typing mainly by practising every day. For instance, I use online typing tests and often type messages and essays to build speed and accuracy; over time this has reduced my errors.
× I prefer handwriting because if I choose typing message for others, I usually made mistakes.
✓ I prefer handwriting because if I choose to type messages for others, I usually make mistakes.
该句动词时态与主语和句式不匹配。“choose to type”是固定搭配,需使用不定式;主句中描述通常情况应使用一般现在时“make mistakes”,而不是过去时“made”。建议记住:表示习惯动作用一般现在时,动词短语“choose to do sth.”更自然。
× So if I choose handwriting, if I can performance my things is right and I think handwriting is convenient for me, I can write it every.
✓ So if I choose handwriting, I can perform my tasks correctly, and I think handwriting is convenient for me; I can write whenever I want.
原句中“performance”是名词,应使用动词“perform”;“my things”不自然,改为“my tasks”;“is right”语法错误,改为“correctly”副词修饰动词;最后的片段缺少完整表达,改为“whenever I want”。建议学习名词/动词区别及副词用法,确保句子完整。
× Definitely light the table because the live table is convenient for me to bring outside.
✓ Definitely a light table, because a lightweight table is convenient for me to take outside.
原句使用了不恰当的形容词“light the table”结构错误,应使用名词短语“a light table”或“a lightweight table”。此外“bring outside”更常用“take outside”。建议注意形容词和名词短语的正确排列,使用固定搭配。
× So if I have enough time I will choose to type on the night table.
✓ So if I have enough time, I will choose to type at the bedside table.
“on the night table”是不自然的介词搭配,英语中通常说“bedside table”或“nightstand”,并用介词“at”或直接使用名词短语“type at the bedside table”。建议学习常见家具名词及其固定介词搭配。
× It's so convenient and I can use it on a lot a lot aspect.
✓ It's so convenient and I can use it in many ways/aspects.
原句“on a lot a lot aspect”重复且结构错误,应使用“in many ways”或“in many aspects”。建议避免重复,使用正确的介词短语表达“多方面”。
× I guess it was on my primary school you that at that time I learned how to recognize the words.
✓ I guess it was in primary school that I learned how to recognize words.
“on my primary school”介词错误,应用“in primary school”;多余的“you”应删除;“recognize the words”中定冠词多余,改为“recognize words”。建议注意介词与固定结构“It was ... that ...”。
× So I I used the keyboard to type some words to and save save message to my friends.
✓ So I used the keyboard to type some words and save messages for my friends.
原句“type some words to”中介词“to”不需要,动词并列时去掉多余介词;“save save message”重复且“message”应为复数“messages”;“to my friends”改为更合适的“for my friends”。建议检查多余词语并注意复数形式和介词选择。
× I think I don't have other choice, I just taping every day.
✓ I think I don't have any other choice; I just tap every day.
“other choice”前需用限定词“any other choice”;“taping”拼写错误,应为“tap”或更自然的“practice typing”/“type”。建议练习情态表达和拼写,使用“any”表否定情况下的不定量。
× I think practice more and I can improve my level.
✓ I think practicing more will help me improve my level.
原句缺乏主语和恰当动词形式,应使用动名词“practicing more”作为主语或补语,并使用“will help me improve”或“I can improve”连接更自然。建议掌握动名词作主语的用法及因果句型。
× So in my daily life I usually spend a lot of time to typing such as I send the message use typing and also words I usually use typing too.
✓ So in my daily life I usually spend a lot of time typing; for example, I send messages by typing and I usually type other texts too.
“spend time to typing”中介词应为“spend time doing sth.”;“send the message use typing”语序和介词错误,应为“send messages by typing”;“words I usually use typing”不自然,应改为“type other texts”。建议记住“spend time + -ing”结构以及“by + 动名词”表示方式。