Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer typing because I think typing is more faster and I can change my mistake words very quickly.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Yes, I type on my laptop every day because of my job. My job always need to work on the computer, so I always typing every day.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I learn it when I in the high school I remember because in high school we must finish our home, my homework in the computer. So that's how I start to learn the typing.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
Well, sometimes I will play some typing games or sometimes I will find a book and find some videos to teach me how to typing.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 表达要更自然、语法更准确,并增加一两句具体原因或例子。注意动词形式和比较级用法,避免冗余。例如把“more faster”改为“faster”,把“mistake words”改为“mistakes”或“incorrect words”。可以用连接词如“because”或“so”衔接原因。
Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and makes editing easy. For example, when I write emails I can quickly correct typos and rearrange sentences without starting over.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 句子要更简洁自然,注意主谓一致和时态。避免重复信息(两次说每天打字)。可以先给直接答案,再用一句话说明原因并举例。
Ejemplo: Yes, I type on my laptop every day for work. My job involves writing reports and emails, so I spend several hours each day at the keyboard.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 58.0Sugerencia: 注意时态和语序,使用清晰的时间表达并减少重复。可以先给时间点(e.g. in high school),然后说明原因并补充具体细节。避免插入无关词如“I remember”影响流畅性。
Ejemplo: I learned to type in high school when we were required to complete assignments on the computer. Because most homework had to be typed, I practiced a lot and improved quickly.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 62.0Sugerencia: 用更连贯的结构表达方法,避免重复“sometimes”和多次使用“find”。动词不定式和动名词形式要正确(learn how to type / teach me to type)。可以列举具体资源并说明频率或效果。
Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing games and following tutorial videos. I also use typing practice lessons and track my speed and accuracy to see progress.
× I prefer typing because I think typing is more faster and I can change my mistake words very quickly.
✓ I prefer typing because I think typing is faster and I can change my mistaken words very quickly.
句中使用了比較級修飾詞 "more faster",這是冗餘且不正確的結構。英文中較快的比較級應使用 either "faster" 或 "more fast"(不常用),但不能同時使用 "more" 和 "-er"。此外,"mistake words" 不自然,應使用形容詞形式 "mistaken words" 或更常見的表達 "my mistakes"。建議:移除多餘的 "more",將 "mistake words" 改為 "mistaken words" 或 "my mistakes"。
× Yes, I type on my laptop every day because of my job. My job always need to work on the computer, so I always typing every day.
✓ Yes, I type on my laptop every day because of my job. My job always needs me to work on the computer, so I always type every day.
第一句正確。第二句中主語是單數名詞 "My job",動詞應用第三人稱單數形式 "needs",而不是原形 "need"。此外原句缺少接收者,應為 "needs me to work";最後一句中使用了不正確的現在分詞短語 "always typing",應使用一般現在時 "always type" 表示習慣性動作。建議:動詞與主語一致(第三人稱單數加 -s),用完整不定式短語表達需求,並用一般現在時表習慣。
× I learn it when I in the high school I remember because in high school we must finish our home, my homework in the computer. So that's how I start to learn the typing.
✓ I learned it when I was in high school, I remember, because in high school we had to do our homework on the computer. So that's how I started to learn typing.
此處描述過去發生的動作,應使用過去時而不是現在時:"I learn" 應為過去式 "I learned";"when I in the high school" 缺少動詞,且應為過去時 "when I was in high school"。"must finish" 用於過去情境應改為 "had to do" 或 "had to finish";"in the computer" 介詞應為 "on the computer"。最後一部分也應改為過去式 "started"。建議:敘述過去事件時統一使用過去式,注意存在動詞及介詞用法。
× Well, sometimes I will play some typing games or sometimes I will find a book and find some videos to teach me how to typing.
✓ Well, sometimes I play some typing games, or sometimes I find a book and some videos to teach me how to type.
動詞短語 "how to typing" 錯誤,"to" 後應接動詞原形,因此應為 "how to type"。此外,"I will play" 與表習慣的頻率副詞搭配時更常用一般現在時或現在進行,改為 "I play" 或保持 "I sometimes will" 視語氣而定。建議:在帶有不定詞 "to" 的結構後使用動詞原形,描述習慣性行為時可使用一般現在時。