Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer handwriting. I o V, I use hand. I use handwriting for a long time, And I don't like to study some new, new things to work or.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Ya. I type on my a keyboard cause. I'm a student and I live in my dormitory. So a keyboard is more convenient than desktop, and I can use it every time I.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I learned it when I was a primary school student because our school have computer classs and my computer teacher touch us to how to type.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I think I can improve my typing by. A type more. Cause if I spend two or three hours to type, I think I can improve my type skills.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 回答要直接且有条理。首先明确给出主题句(例如:I prefer handwriting),然后用1-2句具体原因或举例来支持。避免口头语和重复(如“new, new”),注意句子完整性和语法(如动词时态和主谓一致)。可以使用连接词(because, so, for example)使表达更连贯。
Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because I find it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand, I can organize ideas more clearly and review them more easily before exams.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答要更流利并注意句子完整性。先给出直接回答(Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day),然后用一两句说明原因并用连接词(because, so)衔接。修正语法错误(例如冠词、时态和不完整句子)。
Ejemplo: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I live in a dormitory and need a portable device. As a student, I find a laptop more convenient for studying and doing assignments anywhere.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答要注意时态和语法准确,避免错误(如“have”应为“had”,“touch us to how to type”不自然)。结构上先给出时间点,然后具体说明学习方式或场景,使用连接词(because, when)。
Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was in primary school because our school had computer lessons. My teacher taught us proper typing techniques and we practised regularly during class.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 48.0Sugerencia: 回答要简洁连贯,使用完整句并提供具体方法和细节。先给出总体方法(I improve by practising regularly),然后说明如何练习(每天练习多长时间、使用哪些练习工具或网站),并用连接词(for example, by doing)组织内容。避免碎片化和重复。
Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practising regularly, for example by spending 30 minutes every day on typing exercises. I also use online typing programs to track my speed and accuracy, which helps me see progress.
× I prefer handwriting. I o V, I use hand. I use handwriting for a long time, And I don't like to study some new, new things to work or.
✓ I prefer handwriting. I write by hand. I have used handwriting for a long time, and I don't like learning new things for work.
句子结构混乱,包含残缺短语和重复词(“I o V”,“I use hand”,“new, new”)。将句子重组为自然连贯的表达:用“write by hand”表示“用手写”;用现在完成时“have used”表示“很长时间以来一直使用”;将“不喜欢学习一些新的东西去工作”改为“我不喜欢为工作学习新东西”。建议:写句子时先理清主语、谓语、宾语,避免重复词和残缺短语。
× Ya. I type on my a keyboard cause. I'm a student and I live in my dormitory. So a keyboard is more convenient than desktop, and I can use it every time I.
✓ Yes. I type on my keyboard because I'm a student and I live in my dormitory. So a keyboard is more convenient than a desktop, and I can use it anytime.
介词和冠词使用有误:“type on my a keyboard”中“my”和“a”不能同时出现;“because”被缩短为“cause”且句子断裂;“than desktop”需要不定冠词“a”;“every time I”不完整,应改为“anytime”。建议:注意不同时使用限定词与所有格,确保连词完整并检查句子末尾是否完整。
× I learned it when I was a primary school student because our school have computer classs and my computer teacher touch us to how to type.
✓ I learned it when I was a primary school student because our school had computer classes and my computer teacher taught us how to type.
时态和动词形式错误:描述过去的情形应使用过去时,“have”应为过去式“had”;“classs”拼写错误且应为复数“classes”;“touch us to how to type”是错误的动词和结构,应为过去式“taught us how to type”。建议:谈论过去事件时统一使用过去式,检查动词的过去式和拼写。
× I think I can improve my typing by. A type more. Cause if I spend two or three hours to type, I think I can improve my type skills.
✓ I think I can improve my typing by typing more. Because if I spend two or three hours typing, I think I can improve my typing skills.
使用动名词/动词+ing的结构不正确:“improve my typing by. A type more.”应为“by typing more”;作目的或方式时通常用动名词;“spend ... to type”结构不对,正确应为“spend ... typing”;“type skills”应为“typing skills”。建议:在表示通过某种方式改进时,用“by + 动名词”,表示花时间做某事用“spend time + -ing”。