Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more organized: give a direct topic sentence, then one or two supporting reasons with specific details. Avoid repetition and hesitations. Use linking words such as "because" or "so" correctly and check pronoun/reference clarity.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because my typing speed is faster and my handwriting is hard to read. For example, when I type I can finish notes quickly, and my teachers often tell me they can read typed work more easily.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence and remove repetitions. Add a brief supporting detail (when and why). Use linking words such as "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I usually use a laptop keyboard almost every day because I work from home. When I have a lot of work to do at home, I prefer the laptop for convenience and portability.

Sugerencia: Provide a specific time or age and one concise supporting detail. Avoid filler words and fragmented sentences. Use linking words like "when" or "because" to explain context clearly.

Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was about eight years old because my parents had a desktop computer at home. I practiced by writing simple school assignments and playing typing games.

Sugerencia: Give a clear method and one or two specific examples of how you practice. Reduce hesitations and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words like "for example" or "so" to make your point coherent.

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practicing with online typing games and exercises. For example, I use a typing app for 15 minutes each day to increase my speed and accuracy, and I also practice touch-typing drills to reduce errors.

× I do prefer typing instead of handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting.

Using 'do prefer' is not wrong but unnatural here; the correct preposition is 'to' after 'prefer' (not 'instead of'). Use the simple form 'prefer' for general preference: 'I prefer A to B.' This is clearer and more idiomatic.

× It is because I can tap, I can tap well, but I I don't hand the right hand the right so so well and the others always say my handwriting.

✓ It's because I can type well, but I don't write neatly with my right hand, and others always comment on my handwriting.

Multiple issues: 'tap' should be 'type' for keyboard use; repetition 'I I' and 'so so' are disfluencies to remove; 'hand the right hand the right' is incorrect pronoun/word order—use 'write with my right hand'; 'always say my handwriting' should be 'always comment on my handwriting.' Make the sentence concise and grammatical.

× Actually I usually use laptop keyboard almost every day and when when I'm when I'm at at home and have a lot of work to do, I would choose I would choose the laptop laptop.

✓ Actually I usually use a laptop keyboard almost every day, and when I'm at home and have a lot of work to do, I choose the laptop.

Remove repeated words and use the article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard.' Use present simple 'choose' (not conditional 'would choose') for habitual actions. Place adverbs ('usually' and 'almost every day') in natural positions. Eliminate stuttering repetitions.

× Let me think when I was a child. Uh, there are, uh, there are desktop on my home and IU used to, uh, tap it because I'm, uh, I'm.

✓ Let me think. When I was a child, there was a desktop computer at my home, and I used to type on it because I...

Use past tense 'was' (there was) for a past state, and 'desktop computer' with the article 'a.' 'On my home' should be 'at my home' or 'in my house.' 'IU used' is a typo for 'I used.' Use 'type' not 'tap.' Complete the thought; ellipses show trailing off. This fixes 'there be' error and incorrect prepositions and verb choice.

× Well, I think umm, it's quite useful to umm, to play a game umm, by using using the keyboard umm, when I I think when you are at games, you, you come.

✓ Well, I think it's quite useful to play games using the keyboard; when you play games, you improve your keyboard skills.

Remove repetitions and filler words. Use the infinitive 'to play' and the gerund 'using the keyboard' correctly. 'When you are at games' is ungrammatical — use 'when you play games.' Make the second clause explicit: 'you improve your keyboard skills.' This corrects misuse of verb forms and unclear phrasing.