Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 문장 구조를 더 명확히 하고 불필요한 중복과 발화 채우기(umm, uh 등)를 제거하세요. 주제 문장으로 바로 대답한 뒤 한두 개의 구체적 이유와 예시(언제, 어떤 상황에서 도움이 되는지)를 연결어(For example, In addition, Also)로 자연스럽게 이어 말하면 점수가 오릅니다.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because I find it helps me remember information better than typing. For example, when I take notes in lectures I often add small diagrams and arrows, which make complex ideas easier to recall later.

Sugerencia: 발음 반복과 문법 오류(중복 표현, 관사/명사형 오류)를 줄이고 문장을 간결하게 만드세요. 주제 문장 뒤에 구체적 이유와 상황(예: 카페에서 일할 때, 이동 중)에 대해 연결어(For example, because, so)를 사용해 설명하면 좋습니다.

Ejemplo: I use a laptop every day because it is portable and convenient when I work in cafes. For example, I usually browse the web and write reports on it while I travel between home and university.

Sugerencia: 과거 시제 표현을 정확히 사용하고 불필요한 중복 표현(so excited, and umm)을 줄이세요. 간단한 주제 문장으로 시작하고 그 다음에 이유나 상황을 한두 문장으로 구체적으로 덧붙이세요.

Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was in middle school after my parents bought a desktop computer. I remember being excited because I could type much faster than handwriting, which made homework easier.

Sugerencia: 의미 전달이 불명확한 부분과 중복(‘my my’)을 고치고 문장을 논리적으로 재구성하세요. 연습 빈도와 방법, 그리고 구체적인 효과(속도, 정확도 향상)를 연결어(For example, This helps me to…)로 명확히 설명하면 좋습니다.

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by playing online typing games for about 15 minutes each day. This daily practice has noticeably increased my typing speed and accuracy, and the games make the training more enjoyable.

× I prefer handwriting because my handwriting is neat and easier for me to remember than typed notes.

✓ I prefer handwriting because my handwriting is neat and easier for me to remember than typed notes.

No grammatical error related to listed types; sentence is acceptable. However, you could say 'than typed notes are' for clarity, but it's optional.

× For example, when I write in hands, umm it is.

✓ For example, when I write by hand, it sticks in my memory.

Original uses incorrect phrase 'write in hands' (preposition and noun form) and incomplete clause 'umm it is.' Use 'write by hand' (correct prepositional phrase) and complete the idea with a clear verb phrase such as 'it sticks in my memory.' Suggestion: practice using 'by hand' for handwritten action and finish clauses with a main verb.

× I usually use small diagrams which help me.

✓ I usually use small diagrams, which help me remember.

Sentence needs a clearer verb to complete its meaning; adding 'remember' shows what diagrams help with. Also add a comma before the nonrestrictive clause. Suggestion: include the action verb that the pronoun 'which' refers to.

× I type on type on wrapped up everyday because it is portable and I often work at cafes.

✓ I type on my laptop every day because it is portable and I often work at cafes.

'type on type on wrapped up' is incorrect. Use 'type on my laptop' and separate 'every day' as two words. Suggestion: use correct device noun and correct spacing for adverb 'every day.'

× For example, I use it for a web browsing and writing reports and yeah, it's it's very convenient for me to type.

✓ For example, I use it for web browsing and writing reports. It's very convenient for me to type.

Do not use the article 'a' before 'web browsing.' Remove the repeated 'it's' and split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestion: omit unnecessary articles with uncountable activities and avoid repetition.

× I ran to type on a keyboard when I was in middle school.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in middle school.

'ran to type' is incorrect word choice; the intended verb is 'learned.' Use past tense 'learned' to describe when you acquired the skill. Suggestion: use 'learned to + verb' for acquiring skills in the past.

× My parents bought me a new desktop then and I was so excited to discover how fast I could write.

✓ My parents bought me a new desktop then, and I was so excited to discover how fast I could type.

Use 'type' instead of 'write' when referring to keyboard speed. Add a comma before 'and' joining independent clauses. Suggestion: choose vocabulary consistent with context and punctuate compound sentences.

× I improve my typing by online typing games.

✓ I improve my typing with online typing games.

Use the preposition 'with' rather than 'by' for tools or methods; 'by' is possible but less natural here. Suggestion: prefer 'with' when referring to tools or resources used to improve a skill.

× I practice every day for about 15 minutes a day and it helps me my handwriting my my typing accuracy and speed while kept my typing orangame enjoyable.

✓ I practice every day for about 15 minutes, and it helps my handwriting and my typing accuracy and speed while keeping typing practice enjoyable.

Original has repetition ('a day' twice), missing conjunctions, incorrect verb form 'kept' and unclear word 'orangame.' Use parallel structure: 'helps my handwriting and my typing accuracy and speed' and gerund 'keeping' to show continuous action. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use parallel nouns, and use appropriate verb forms; clarify or correct unclear words.