Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 직접적인 주제문은 있으나 문법 오류, 반복, 비유효한 표현이 눈에 띕니다. 문장을 간결하게 하고 불필요한 반복을 제거하세요. 예를 들어, ‘when I write sentences in a notebook’처럼 구체적인 표현으로 바꾸고, 이유를 연결할 때 'because'와 같은 연결어를 활용해 논리를 명확히 하세요. 발음이나 망설임(uh)도 줄여 자연스럽게 말하는 연습을 하세요.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because writing sentences in a notebook feels more relaxed. For example, when I write by hand I can easily doodle or pause to think, which helps me remember information better. In contrast, typing feels colder and less personal.

Sugerencia: 답변이 불명확하고 반복과 잘못된 어휘 선택이 있습니다. 'because'를 한 번만 사용하여 이유를 명확히 말하고, 프로그램 이름은 정확히 말하세요 ('Hangul', 'Excel', 'Word'). 구체적으로 어떤 과제를 하는지 설명하면 더 좋습니다. 또한 망설임을 줄이고 문장을 2~3문장으로 유지하세요.

Ejemplo: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I complete my assignments on software like Hangul, Excel and Word. For instance, I often type reports and spreadsheets for school projects, so a laptop is more convenient.

Sugerencia: 시간 표현과 문장 구성은 괜찮지만 반복과 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'I learned to type when I was seven at elementary school'처럼 간결한 주제문으로 시작하고, 추가로 어떤 수업이나 프로그램을 사용했는지 구체적으로 설명하세요. 연결어(also, where)로 문장을 자연스럽게 이어보세요.

Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was seven at elementary school. We had computer classes where we practiced typing using basic software, which helped me build good habits from an early age.

Sugerencia: 프로그램 이름이 잘못 발음되었거나 표기되었습니다('Hunger' 대신 'Hangul' 또는 'typing practice program'일 가능성). 문장을 명확히 하고 구체적인 방법(예: 연습 시간, 연습 방식, 목표)을 포함하세요. 망설임을 줄이고 연결어를 사용해 설명을 확장하세요.

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by using a typing practice program called Hangul Tutor. I practice for about 20 minutes every day, doing timed drills and copying passages to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting uh, because when I write the book sentence sentences, it is more uh, relaxed to hand write.

✓ I prefer handwriting, because when I write book sentences, it is more relaxing to handwrite.

'sentence sentences' is a redundant plural error; use 'book sentences' or 'sentences in a book'. 'relaxed to hand write' is incorrect collocation and form: use the adjective 'relaxing' and the verb 'handwrite' as one word. Also add a comma after the introductory clause. Suggested improvement: Remove duplicate words, choose correct adjective form (relaxing), and use 'handwrite' as a single verb.

× But typing is no, no emotions I think.

✓ But typing has no emotion, I think.

The phrase 'no, no emotions' is ungrammatical. Use 'has no emotion' or 'doesn't convey emotion'. 'Typing' is a noun/gerund that requires a verb ('has' or 'doesn't convey') to link to 'no emotion'. Suggested improvement: Use a verb to connect subject and description: 'Typing has no emotion' or 'Typing doesn't convey emotion.'

× I type on a laptop keyboard every day because my assignment uh is uh, because my assignment uh, to hand out with program like hangover, excel, like words.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because my assignments require programs like Hangul, Excel, and Word.

The original sentence has fragmented structure and incorrect verb forms. 'My assignment... to hand out with program' is ungrammatical. Use 'assignments require' to explain purpose. Program names need correct capitalization and 'Word' not 'words'. 'Hangul' (or 'Hangul/Word processor') likely intended rather than 'hangover'. Suggested improvement: Use a clear subject-verb structure ('assignments require') and correct program names.

× I learned that actually when I was seven years old, uh, the elementary school, we have a computer classes and we study typing lessons and study with program called computer.

✓ I actually learned it when I was seven years old at elementary school; we had computer classes and learned typing using a program called Computer.

Tense consistency: mix of past ('I learned') and present ('we have','we study') is incorrect. Change present to past: 'we had' and 'learned'. Also adjust preposition: 'at elementary school'. 'Program called computer' is unclear but kept as 'a program called Computer' as a corrected form. Suggested improvement: Keep past tense throughout when describing past events and use correct prepositions ('at elementary school').

× I learned that actually when I was seven years old, uh, the elementary school, we have a computer classes and we study typing lessons and study with program called computer.

✓ I actually learned it when I was seven years old at elementary school; we had computer classes and learned typing using a program called Computer.

Preposition 'at' is needed before 'elementary school'. Also 'study with program' should be 'learned typing using a program'. Suggested improvement: Use 'at' for school locations and 'using' or 'with' correctly after verbs like 'learn' or 'study'.

× Uh, I improve my typing with the program called Hunger Computer. In that program we, we can write, uh, many sentences.

✓ I improve my typing with a program called Hunger Computer. In that program, we can write many sentences.

'I improve my typing' is acceptable, but remove unnecessary commas and filler words. 'We, we can' duplication should be fixed. No additional -ing needed here; sentence is simplified for clarity. Suggested improvement: Remove repeated words, unnecessary fillers, and add commas appropriately.

× I improve my typing with the program called Hunger Computer. In that program we, we can write, uh, many sentences.

✓ I improve my typing with a program called Hunger Computer. In that program, we can write many sentences.

Filler words like 'uh' and repeated 'we' interrupt fluency. Place comma after introductory clause 'In that program'. Suggested improvement: Omit fillers and repetitions to make the sentence concise and fluent.