Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は明確ですが、文法ミス（more faster）、冗長表現や不自然な追加句（"With computer."）が目立ちます。改善点は①文法を正しくする（比較級の使い方）、②情報を簡潔に保つ、③Supporting detailを1つだけ具体的に示す、④接続表現（because, so）を自然に使うことです。例えば、なぜ効率的なのか具体的に（速さ・編集のしやすさ・保存の容易さ）を一つか二つ挙げると良いです。発音や流暢さは現状維持でOK。

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is faster and makes editing easier. For example, I can quickly correct mistakes and save documents on my computer, which saves me time when I study.

Sugerencia: 答えは内容を伝えていますが、時制と語順が不安定で、繰り返し（desktop, desktop PC）や短い文の断片化（"Because it's very mobile."）があります。改善点は①時制を一貫させる（used to、now）②繰り返しを避ける③接続詞で文をつなげて滑らかに話すことです。具体例として、いつどのデバイスを使うか、理由を1つに絞り明確に説明してください。

Ejemplo: I used to type on a desktop because I played games on my PC, but recently I mostly use a laptop because it's more portable for studying and working outside.

Sugerencia: 回答は自己学習で覚えたことを伝えていますが、表現が不明瞭（"I didn't burn it by anybody."）、文法と語順ミス、冗長なフィラーが多いです。改善点は①明確で正しい表現を使う（"I didn't learn it from anyone"など）、②時を示す語句を加える（e.g. when you were a child, at school）③不要なフィラー（uh）を減らすことです。学んだ時期や具体的な状況を1文で示し、理由を簡潔に述べると良いでしょう。

Ejemplo: I learned to type by myself when I was a teenager because I spent a lot of time playing games on my desktop, so I became familiar with the keyboard.

Sugerencia: 意図は伝わりますが、文が断片的で不自然な構造、冗長（"it's like a website that it's"）や多いフィラーが問題です。改善点は①具体的な方法を明確に述べる（使っているウェブサイト名や練習方法）、②接続詞で理由や結果をつなげる、③簡潔に1〜2文で完結させることです。例えば、どのサイトでどのように練習するか具体例を挙げてください。

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by using online practice sites like TypingClub. These sites provide timed exercises and drills, so I can track my speed and accuracy and practice regularly to get better.

× I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is more faster than writing, so it's more efficient for me to type. With computer.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is faster than writing, so it's more efficient for me to type on a computer.

'more faster' is incorrect because 'faster' is already a comparative adjective; do not add 'more'. Use 'faster' alone. Also 'with computer' is incomplete; use 'on a computer' to show the device. Suggestion: remove 'more' before comparatives and use correct preposition for devices ('on a computer').

× I was using desktop, uh because I play games on PC, desktop PC, but I use laptop lately. Because it's very mobile.

✓ I used to use a desktop because I play games on a desktop PC, but I've been using a laptop lately because it's very portable.

'I was using desktop' is awkward; use 'I used to use a desktop' for past habitual action. 'use laptop lately' has tense mismatch; 'lately' pairs with present perfect ('I've been using'). 'portable' is the correct adjective for mobility. Also add articles: 'a desktop', 'a laptop'.

× I didn't burn it by anybody. I learned by myself to type. I was playing games with, uh, desktop PC, so I very used to uh.

✓ I didn't learn it from anyone. I taught myself to type. I used to play games on a desktop PC, so I became very familiar with the keyboard.

'I didn't burn it by anybody' is ungrammatical and likely intended to mean 'didn't learn from anyone'; use 'learn from anyone'. 'I learned by myself to type' is better as 'I taught myself to type'. 'I was playing games with... so I very used to' is incorrect order and word choice; use 'I used to play games on a desktop PC' and 'became very familiar with the keyboard' to express habituation and result. Use correct verb forms and word order.

× How do you improve your typing? I used to see that to improve my typing, uh, typing ability because, uh.

✓ I use websites and practice exercises to improve my typing ability.

'I used to see that to improve my typing' is unclear and uses wrong tense/form. For current habitual actions, use present simple ('I use'). Use specific nouns 'websites and practice exercises' and say 'to improve my typing ability'. Avoid vague 'see that'.

× It's like a website that it's enables to type more carefully and more specifically, uh.

✓ There are websites that enable you to type more accurately and precisely.

Using 'it's like a website that it's enables' is redundant and incorrect pronoun usage. Use 'there are websites that enable you...' and choose correct verbs and adverbs: 'accurately' and 'precisely' instead of 'carefully' and 'specifically' in this context. Ensure subject matches verb ('websites that enable').