Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, correct basic grammar, reduce hesitation words and use linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with examples. Correct verb agreement and phrasing (e.g. "it depends on the situation").

Ejemplo: I prefer typing in most situations because it is faster and more convenient when I work from home. However, I sometimes handwrite notes in a notebook to help me remember important details, for example when I need to jot down a phone number quickly.

Sugerencia: Avoid general statements and filler phrases. Use one clear sentence stating preference, then give a specific reason and an example. Fix grammar (e.g. "Everyone has a computer or laptop"). Remove repetitions and unnecessary background statements.

Ejemplo: I type on a laptop every day because it is portable and convenient for my job. For instance, when I need to visit a client or work from a café, I can easily bring my laptop and continue typing without interruption.

Sugerencia: Give a direct time reference if possible, or say clearly you don't remember and then describe how you learned. Avoid vague generalizations and correct grammar (e.g. "I don't remember when I started"). Use linking words to make it coherent.

Ejemplo: I don't remember the exact time I started typing, but I learned gradually as computers became common at home. Over the years I improved my skills by practicing regularly, especially while doing schoolwork and later at my job.

Sugerencia: Be specific about methods and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence about your main method, then list two concrete practices (e.g. daily messaging, using typing tests) and mention results briefly. Correct phrasing ("improve" not "makes me perfect").

Ejemplo: I improve my typing mainly through daily use: I message drivers and customers frequently, which keeps me typing every day. I also practice with online typing tests and set small speed goals; as a result, my speed and accuracy have improved significantly over the past year.

× Honestly speaking, it's totally depend on situation.

✓ Honestly speaking, it totally depends on the situation.

Use present simple for general states. 'depend' needs third person singular '-s' (subject 'it'), and include the article 'the' before 'situation' for specificity.

× But right now working as a dispatcher from home, so uh, I would prefer to uh, typing on laptop, it is more easy and convenient.

✓ But right now, working as a dispatcher from home, I prefer typing on a laptop because it is easier and more convenient.

Sentence needed a subject and correct verb form. Use 'I prefer' (not 'would prefer' with present routine), use gerund 'typing' without 'to', include article 'a' before 'laptop', and use comparative 'easier' and adverb 'more convenient' or 'more convenient' combined as 'easier and more convenient'.

× But sometimes, uh, I prefer to write some uh, words on my notebooks in order to keep remind.

✓ But sometimes I prefer to write some words in my notebook to remind myself.

Use 'in my notebook' (singular or plural consistent) and the verb phrase 'remind myself' instead of 'keep remind'. Also 'prefer to write' is correct; remove filler words.

× So it's really depend on situations.

✓ So it really depends on the situation.

Use third person singular '-s' with 'depends' (subject 'it') and use singular 'the situation' for general meaning or 'situations' with appropriate article; here 'the situation' is natural.

× With the advancement of innovations, everyone's have their, uh, computer or laptops, but uh, laptop, uh, I prefer to type on a laptop because it is easier and convenient for me.

✓ With technological advances, everyone has a computer or laptop, but I prefer to type on a laptop because it is easier and more convenient for me.

Use 'everyone has' (singular), not 'everyone's have'. Choose singular 'a computer or laptop'. Remove repetition 'but laptop'. Use 'easier and more convenient' for correct adjective pairing.

× Even as you know, laptop is a portable device, so we can carry anywhere with us.

✓ As you know, a laptop is a portable device, so we can carry it anywhere with us.

Include the article 'a' before 'laptop', add the object 'it', and use 'carry it anywhere with us' or simply 'carry it anywhere'. 'Even' is unnecessary.

× So right now working from home, so I whenever I want to go somewhere, so I prefer to type only.

✓ Right now I am working from home, so whenever I want to go somewhere I still prefer to type on my laptop.

Remove extra 'so' and reposition clauses. Use present continuous 'I am working' for current action, and clarify 'prefer to type on my laptop' rather than 'type only'.

× I did not remember that when I started typing on a keyboard, but with the advancement of technology, every children or everyone's have their computer or laptop at their home.

✓ I do not remember exactly when I started typing on a keyboard, but with technological advancement, every child or everyone's has a computer or laptop at home.

Use present simple 'do not remember' for a current memory state. 'Children' should be singular 'child' after 'every'. However original still awkward: better 'every child has a computer or laptop at home'. Also correct 'everyone's have' to 'everyone has'.

× So with the passage of time and uh, I learned, uh, typing by practice, practice.

✓ So over time I learned to type by practicing.

Use 'learned to type' (infinitive) rather than 'learned, typing'. Simplify repetition 'practice, practice' to 'practicing'.

× Actually, I often use my keyboard for typing in order to, uh, communicate with my drivers and my customers.

✓ I often use my keyboard to communicate with my drivers and customers.

Use 'use my keyboard to communicate' (infinitive) and omit extra 'my' before 'customers' for natural wording.

× So by practicing day by day on laptop or a mobile phone.

✓ I improve by practicing day by day on a laptop or mobile phone.

This fragment needed a subject and verb to form a complete sentence. Use 'I improve by practicing' and include article 'a' before 'laptop' or use 'a laptop or a mobile phone'.

× So practising gradually practising makes me perfect and right now my typing speed is too good as compared to past.

✓ Gradual practice made me much better, and right now my typing speed is much better than in the past.

Use clear comparative structure: 'much better than in the past'. 'Makes me perfect' is unnatural; use 'made me much better'. Remove repeated 'practising'. Use past simple 'made' for result of practice, or present perfect 'has made' if preferred.