Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 在回答中要更直接并减少重复，控制在最多五句；清楚地给出观点后，用一两句具体原因或例子支撑（例如习惯、效率或场合差异），并尽量避免口头语（如“umm”）和语法错误。

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because I grew up without regular access to phones and computers, so I'm more comfortable writing by hand. For example, taking notes in class feels faster and helps me remember information better.

Sugerencia: 答案要更简洁并注意语法和重复（如“make sure and to make sure”）。先给明确回答，再用一两句说明频率和原因，使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

Ejemplo: I mainly use a desktop keyboard, though not daily. I practice typing a few times a week because I want to improve my test-writing speed so I can complete tasks within the time limit.

Sugerencia: 直接说出时间或时期（例如“几个月前”或“为了参加考试”），并用更准确的表达描述原因和细节，避免口语化的填充词，句子控制在三到四句内。

Ejemplo: I started learning to type seriously when I began preparing for the TOEFL exam. The writing section requires finishing two passages in about 30 minutes, so I needed to type faster to meet the time constraint.

Sugerencia: 回答要更流畅并纠正语法错误，先说明方法（使用在线课程或练习网站），再举具体例子并说明效果或频率。避免模糊或重复表达。

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by using online practice tools such as TypingClub. I use it several times a week to do timed exercises and track my speed and accuracy, which helps me gradually increase my words-per-minute.

× Actually I'm more into handwriting as I'm not good at typing because I'm at such a young age, I didn't have my phone for such a long time.

✓ Actually I'm more into handwriting as I'm not good at typing because when I was so young, I didn't have a phone for a long time.

句中“I'm at such a young age”与语境不符，应使用过去时表达“我小时候”，可改为“when I was so young”。另外“my phone”改为“a phone”更自然；“such a long time”改为“for a long time”。建议：使用正确的时态和更自然的介词短语来表达过去持续的状态。

× So I get used to umm, write things by my hand.

✓ So I got used to writing things by hand.

“get used to”后必须跟动名词（-ing）形式，且句子描述过去习惯应使用过去时“got used to”。“by my hand”应为习惯用法“by hand”。建议：把不定式改成动名词，并注意时态和固定搭配。

× So umm, it will be more comfortable to for me to do handwriting than typing.

✓ So, it will be more comfortable for me to handwrite than to type.

“to for me to do handwriting”中介词位置混乱，应为“comfortable for me to ...”。英文中“handwrite”或“write by hand”比“do handwriting”更自然。比较结构也要保持动词形式一致，改为“handwrite... to type”。建议：将介词放在形容词后，并在比较时使用平行动词形式。

× I don't type on it every day, but I usually practice typing a few times a week because I need to improve my writing section and I make sure and to make sure that I can finish the tasks on time.

✓ I don't type on it every day, but I usually practice typing a few times a week because I need to improve my writing and make sure that I can finish the tasks on time.

“make sure and to make sure”重复且不合逻辑。应使用单一结构“make sure that”。“writing section”在口语可简化为“writing”。建议：删除重复短语，保持句子简洁，使用正确的连接方式。

× Probably it's the time when I decide to attend on the TOEFL test as it also include the writing section.

✓ Probably it was when I decided to take the TOEFL test as it also included the writing section.

此处讲过去发生的事情，应使用过去时（was, decided, included）。另外动词搭配为“decide to take a test”和“include”要与过去时一致。介词“attend on”不正确，应为“take”。建议：把句子整体改为过去时并使用正确动词搭配。

× I have to finish it in like 30 minutes and I have to finish like 2-2 passage.

✓ I had to finish it in about 30 minutes and I had to finish two passages.

描述过去的考试要求，应使用过去时“had to”。“like 30 minutes”更正式为“about 30 minutes”。“2-2 passage”不正确，应为“two passages”。建议：用过去时表述过去义务，数字用词形准确。

× It's quite hard for me so I have to practice more.

✓ It was quite hard for me, so I had to practice more.

这里仍然在讲过去参加考试的经历，应统一使用过去时态“was”与“had to”。建议：叙述过去事件时，保持时态一致。

× On actually on, I think it's very easy as I just unuse a use the Internet like some apps and help me to it's called typing Club, which you can type it as fast as you can and it will score for you, Yeah.

✓ Actually, I think it's very easy because I just use the Internet, like some apps that help me. It's called TypingClub, where you can type as fast as you can and it will score you.

句中有多个问题：不必要的词“On actually on”、“unuse a use”需删除；“the Internet”在此可用“the Internet”，但句子结构应清晰；“help me to it's called typing Club”结构混乱，应分成两句并纠正App名字“TypingClub”。“score for you”应为“score you”或“give you a score”。建议：删去多余词，理顺句子结构，正确使用冠词并改正搭配。