Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid vague phrases and redundant words.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s faster and easier to organize my thoughts. For example, when I write essays or take notes I can type and edit quickly, and digital documents are easier to store and search.

Sugerencia: Correct grammar and reduce hesitation. Provide a clear topic sentence, then one specific supporting detail about convenience and portability with a linking word. Remove filler words and repetition.

Ejemplo: I usually type on a laptop because it’s portable and I can work anywhere. For example, when I travel or go to a coffee shop I bring my laptop since it’s light and lets me type and save notes easily.

Sugerencia: Use a clearer timeline and correct noun/verb forms. Give one concise reason why you learned it early and connect it logically with a linking phrase. Avoid awkward phrasing like “in our generations.”

Ejemplo: I learned to type in elementary school because typing was part of the curriculum and all students had to practice. As a result, we became familiar with computers early since they are widely used today.

Sugerencia: Provide a clearer and more helpful answer. State whether you practice now, then give specific, actionable methods for improvement using linking words. Avoid hesitation and general statements.

Ejemplo: I don’t practice much now because I learned typing as a child and feel comfortable with it. However, if someone wants to improve, I would recommend daily touch-typing exercises and using online typing tests to build speed and accuracy.

× A lot of people think handwriting could be more connection with our activities, but in my perspective I think typing is more effective and I can quickly to record my ideas.

✓ A lot of people think handwriting could be more connected with our activities, but from my perspective I think typing is more effective and I can quickly record my ideas.

Errors: 'more connection with' is incorrect preposition and noun form; use 'connected with' or 'connected to'. 'in my perspective' is nonstandard; use 'from my perspective'. 'quickly to record' incorrectly uses 'to' after an adverb; use 'quickly record'. Suggestion: Use correct preposition with 'connected' and omit unnecessary 'to' before verbs.

× I usually type on a laptop, for example, uh, when I was traveled or when I going to the Co coffee shop.

✓ I usually type on a laptop; for example, when I travel or when I go to the coffee shop.

Errors: 'was traveled' is incorrect passive/tense form; should be simple present 'travel' to match habitual action. 'when I going' lacks auxiliary verb and correct form; use 'when I go'. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual actions and correct verb forms ('travel', 'go').

× Lap laptop is more convenient to carry and to umm, record my my thought.

✓ A laptop is more convenient to carry and to record my thoughts.

Errors: 'Lap laptop' is redundant/typo; article missing before 'laptop' (should be 'A laptop'). 'record my my thought' has repetition and 'thought' should be plural 'thoughts' to match context. Suggestion: Fix typos, include appropriate articles, and use plural when referring to multiple ideas.

× I learned to type when I was in elementary school because the schools courses, all of the students need to practice and need to learn these skills.

✓ I learned to type when I was in elementary school because the school's courses required all of the students to practice and to learn these skills.

Errors: Mixed tenses and missing possessive: 'schools courses' needs possessive 'school's'. 'need' should be past 'required' to match 'learned' (past). Also use 'to practice' parallel structure. Suggestion: Match verb tenses (past) and use possessive form for 'school's'.

× Because of the globalization and in our generations, computer is more common in our daily life.

✓ Because of globalization and in our generation, computers are more common in our daily lives.

Errors: 'the globalization' unnecessary article; use 'globalization'. 'in our generations' should be singular 'in our generation' or 'in recent generations' depending on meaning. 'computer is' subject-verb agreement error (should be plural 'computers are'). 'daily life' often pluralized to 'daily lives' when referring to people. Suggestion: Remove unnecessary articles, ensure number agreement, and choose correct noun forms.

× I don't really practice my typing because I learned when I was little so I remember all of the skills of typing.

✓ I don't really practice typing because I learned when I was little, so I remember all of the typing skills.

Errors: 'practice my typing' is acceptable but 'practice typing' is more natural. 'skills of typing' awkward; use 'typing skills'. Keep present tense 'don't practice' while explaining past learning; the combination is fine but improve wording. Suggestion: Use natural collocations like 'practice typing' and 'typing skills'.

× But if there anyone need to uh, improve their typing and I will recommend them to uh write.

✓ But if there is anyone who needs to improve their typing, I would recommend that they practice writing.

Errors: Missing 'is' after 'there' ('if there anyone' -> 'if there is anyone'), subject-verb agreement ('anyone needs'), run-on sentence and incorrect modal 'will' for hypothetical (use 'would' for hypothetical). 'recommend them to write' is less natural; use 'recommend that they practice writing' or 'recommend they write'. Suggestion: Include 'is', ensure agreement, use conditional modal 'would' for hypothetical advice, and use a natural verb phrase for recommendation.