Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
Actually I prefer. Typing in mobile phone as it is comfortable to use and it is easier because it saves the time. So yeah, I prefer typing rather than handwriting.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Will I don't type on desktop or rather laptop keyboard every day? I used to type on the screen in mobile phones as I have only mobile phones rather than desktops or laptop.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I learned how to type on a keyboard. When I'm, uh, in school, I choose a computer course. So my teacher taught me to use computer with a keyboard. And yeah, I think it is easy to learn on it.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I improve my typing while I'm chatting with my friends or my family. Moreover, I learned from the constant practices in when I chose computer course on my SCSC. After I give SCC it improve.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 63.0Sugerencia: Give a direct clear topic sentence, avoid fillers and minor grammar errors, and add one specific reason with a linking word. Keep it within 2–3 concise sentences.
Ejemplo: I prefer typing on my mobile phone to handwriting because it is more convenient and faster. For example, when I take notes or message friends, typing lets me edit quickly and saves time.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 58.0Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and simply, correct grammar, and use a linking phrase to clarify reasons. Avoid hesitations and unnecessary words.
Ejemplo: No, I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day. I usually type on my phone because I only have a mobile device, so most of my writing and messaging is done on the touchscreen.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Start with a clear time reference, remove fillers, and link sentences smoothly. Provide one specific detail about the learning context to make the answer more informative.
Ejemplo: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was at school, after I chose a computer course. My teacher showed us proper finger placement and we practised regularly, which made learning quite straightforward.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Be concise and organized: state the main method clearly, use linking words to add one or two specific practices, and avoid unclear abbreviations or grammar mistakes. Provide concrete examples of practice.
Ejemplo: I improve my typing mainly by practising regularly while chatting with friends and family. In addition, I completed a computer course where we did timed typing drills and exercises, which helped increase my speed and accuracy.
× Actually I prefer. Typing in mobile phone as it is comfortable to use and it is easier because it saves the time. So yeah, I prefer typing rather than handwriting.
✓ Actually, I prefer typing on my mobile phone because it is comfortable and easier since it saves time. So yeah, I prefer typing to handwriting.
Original sentences have sentence fragments and incorrect preposition/article use ('Typing in mobile phone', 'saves the time'). Combine fragments into a single clear sentence, use 'on my mobile phone' (correct preposition and possessive), omit 'the' before 'time', and use 'prefer X to Y' for the preference structure. Grammar problem type ID:26
× Will I don't type on desktop or rather laptop keyboard every day?
✓ Well, I don't type on a desktop or a laptop keyboard every day.
The speaker used 'Will' instead of the discourse marker 'Well'. Also missing articles before 'desktop' and 'laptop'. Replace 'Will' with 'Well' and add articles 'a' for countable singular nouns. The sentence should start with the filler 'Well' when answering. Grammar problem type ID:4
× I used to type on the screen in mobile phones as I have only mobile phones rather than desktops or laptop.
✓ I usually type on the touchscreen of my mobile phone because I only have a mobile phone rather than a desktop or a laptop.
Use 'touchscreen' or 'on the screen of my mobile phone' rather than 'on the screen in mobile phones'. Use singular/plural consistently ('a mobile phone' vs 'mobile phones'). Also use articles before 'desktop' and 'laptop' and correct comparative structure 'rather than'. Grammar problem type ID:11
× I learned how to type on a keyboard. When I'm, uh, in school, I choose a computer course.
✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard. When I was in school, I chose a computer course.
The events happened in the past, so use past tense forms 'was' and 'chose' instead of present 'am'/'choose'. Also remove filler repositioning for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:5
× So my teacher taught me to use computer with a keyboard.
✓ My teacher taught me to use a computer with a keyboard.
Add the article 'a' before 'computer'. Preposition 'with' is acceptable, but the noun needs the article. Also remove unnecessary 'So' at sentence start for formality. Grammar problem type ID:11
× And yeah, I think it is easy to learn on it.
✓ And yeah, I think it is easy to learn to use.
The phrase 'learn on it' is awkward; use 'learn to use (it)' to describe learning how to use the keyboard. Maintain present-tense opinion 'I think'. Grammar problem type ID:6
× I improve my typing while I'm chatting with my friends or my family.
✓ I improve my typing while I chat with my friends or family.
Use simple present 'I chat' to describe habitual actions rather than present continuous 'I'm chatting'. Also drop redundant 'my' before 'family'. Grammar problem type ID:6
× Moreover, I learned from the constant practices in when I chose computer course on my SCSC.
✓ Moreover, I improved through constant practice when I took the computer course at my school.
Original has awkward phrasing and unnecessary words ('in when I chose', 'on my SCSC'). Use 'constant practice' (uncountable) and 'took the computer course at my school' to express past learning. Ensure word order and idiomatic expressions. Grammar problem type ID:26
× After I give SCC it improve.
✓ After I passed the SCC, my typing improved.
The original mixes tenses and omits subjects/auxiliaries ('After I give SCC it improve'). Use past tense 'passed' and 'improved' and add possessive relation 'my typing' for clarity. If 'SCC' is an exam, 'passed' conveys completion. Grammar problem type ID:26