Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I I prefer to handwriting because I I study at school so I usually use a pen to write the homework but I don't usually typing because I don't I can't use a laptop.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because the laptop keyboard is very useful and convenient when I was study. I can use this quickly to solve my difficult problem.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
When I was in 10 years old, I should go to the international schools. So I should bring the laptop to study. So I, I, I I think I should to study to use the keyboard.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
MMM my mum she Mama think I should I should to typing quickly because I should to study in every day so I should type in quickly. So I type this once a week and three hours.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 建议:减少重复并使用完整句子,先给出直接回答,然后简要说明原因。可以用连接词将观点与原因衔接,细节具体化。例如说明在哪种情况下会选择手写或打字。建议控制在3-4句内。
Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because I usually do homework with a pen at school. However, I rarely type since I don't have much experience using a laptop. When I need neat notes, I choose handwriting because it's faster for me.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 建议:注意时态和语法,句子结构要更自然。回答先直接说每天是否打字,然后说明原因并给出具体例子(例如做作业、查资料)。使用适当的连接词如 because / so / when。
Ejemplo: Yes, I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is convenient for studying. For example, I type essays and search for information quickly when I have difficult problems to solve.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: 建议:提供清晰的时间点并用正确的语法表达(例如 “when I was ten”),避免重复,说明学习打字的具体场合和方式(在学校、上课或通过练习)。控制句子数量与长度,保持自然流畅。
Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was ten years old after I started attending an international school. We had to bring laptops to class, so I practised typing regularly during lessons and homework.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 30.0Sugerencia: 建议:明确说明具体的练习方法和频率,并用正确的数量词和时间表达(例如 “three hours a week”)。避免口头填充词,给出改善方法的细节(练习软件、打字游戏、定时练习)。
Ejemplo: My mum encouraged me to improve my typing speed, so I practise three hours a week. I use online typing lessons and do timed exercises to increase accuracy and speed.
× I I prefer to handwriting because I I study at school so I usually use a pen to write the homework but I don't usually typing because I don't I can't use a laptop.
✓ I prefer handwriting because I study at school, so I usually use a pen to write my homework, but I don't usually type because I can't use a laptop.
错误类型:第三人称单数或动词形式使用不当。说明:句中动词形式不正确,如“prefer to handwriting”应为“prefer handwriting”或“prefer to handwrite”;“don't usually typing”应为“don't usually type”;“I don't I can't”有多余词语且时态/助动词重复。建议:去掉重复词,使用正确的动词不定式或动词原形(在助动词后用动词原形),并用冠词/物主代词修饰名词(my homework)。
× I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because the laptop keyboard is very useful and convenient when I was study. I can use this quickly to solve my difficult problem.
✓ I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because the laptop keyboard is very useful and convenient when I study. I can use it quickly to solve my difficult problems.
错误类型:介词及指示代词使用不当,和时态混淆。说明:“when I was study”中介词/结构不正确且动词时态错误,应为“when I study”;“use this”指代不自然,改为“use it”;“problem”应为复数或加冠词,改为“problems”或“a difficult problem”。建议:在表示常态时用一般现在时;注意代词指代一致;复数或冠词根据上下文选择。
× When I was in 10 years old, I should go to the international schools. So I should bring the laptop to study. So I, I, I I think I should to study to use the keyboard.
✓ When I was 10 years old, I went to an international school. So I had to bring a laptop to study. I think I needed to learn to use the keyboard.
错误类型:过去时使用错误及情态动词用法不当。说明:“When I was in 10 years old”应为“When I was 10 years old”;“I should go to the international schools”表示过去事实应使用过去时或过去义务“had to/go”,所以改为“went”或“had to go”;情态动词“should”在这里不合适,改为“had to”或“needed to”;“should to study to use”中不定式连用错误,应为“learn to use”或“needed to learn how to use”。建议:回忆过去事实时用一般过去时,表示过去必要性用“had to”或“needed to”。
× MMM my mum she Mama think I should I should to typing quickly because I should to study in every day so I should type in quickly. So I type this once a week and three hours.
✓ My mum thinks I should type quickly because I have to study every day, so I should practice typing quickly. I practice typing once a week for three hours.
错误类型:动词+ -ing 形式及情态动词后动词形式错误。说明:原句中重复和冗余较多,且“think”后主语动词需加-s(she thinks);“should to typing”错误,应为“should type”或“should be typing”;“study in every day”介词及词序错,应为“study every day”;“So I type this once a week and three hours”表达不自然,改为“practice typing once a week for three hours”。建议:情态动词后用动词原形;注意主谓一致;用“practice”表达练习动作,使用“for + 时间段”表示时长。