Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer handwriting because I think it's comfortable and as my habit. Umm for example I attend I attended IELTS exam that I chose the handwriting every time.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
I tap on laptop keyboard every day because I like the sound of typing on keyboard. What's more, keyboard as convenient I can take, I can type everywhere.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I learned it in primary school in China. All of the primary school have computer class class. The class is easy to study and useful so it should suit for kids.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I have two main methods for study typing on keyboard. Firstly, practice it regularly is crucial. Secondly, I will use keyboard to type in all the time.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 72.0Sugerencia: 在回答中注意語法正確性和句子流暢,減少口頭語(如“Umm”)並避免重複。開頭應有清晰的主題句,之後用一到兩句具體原因或例子支撐,最多不超過五句。可以修正時態錯誤(例如“I attended”而非“I attend I attended”)。
Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because it feels more comfortable and natural to me. For example, when I took the IELTS exam, I chose to write by hand because it helped me think more clearly.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 68.0Sugerencia: 回答需更自然、語法正確並使用連接詞使句子更連貫。避免詞序和結構錯誤(如“keyboard as convenient”),用一到兩個具體理由支持主題句,並注意冠詞和介詞用法。
Ejemplo: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I like the tactile feel and the sound of typing. Also, a laptop is portable, so I can type anywhere, whether I'm at home or in a café.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答要簡潔並修正語法與數詞一致性(如“All of the primary school have”應為“primary schools have”)。提供具體細節時使用連接詞並避免重複單詞(如“class class”)。
Ejemplo: I learned to type in primary school in China. Our primary schools had computer classes, which were simple and useful, so they were well suited for young children.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 66.0Sugerencia: 結構上列出方法時,用完整且自然的句子,使用適當時態(現在習慣用現在式),並用連接詞如“firstly/secondly”後接簡潔描述。避免不必要的冗詞(如“study typing on keyboard”可簡化為“improve my typing”)。
Ejemplo: I use two main methods to improve my typing. First, I practice regularly with online typing exercises to build speed and accuracy. Second, I try to type most of my notes and messages so I get constant daily practice.
× I prefer handwriting because I think it's comfortable and as my habit.
✓ I prefer handwriting because I think it's comfortable and it's my habit.
句中“as my habit”用法不正确。英语中表示“这是我的习惯”应使用“it's my habit”或“it's a habit of mine”。建议使用固定表达“it's my habit”或“it's a habit of mine”。
× Umm for example I attend I attended IELTS exam that I chose the handwriting every time.
✓ For example, I attended the IELTS exam and I chose handwriting every time.
句中混用了现在时“attend”和过去时“attended”,且从句结构不自然。既然是过去参加的考试,应使用过去时“attended”。另外“chose the handwriting”不自然,应为“chose handwriting”。建议把时间一致改为过去时,并调整词序。
× Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
✓ Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
该句本身语法无误,预置为检查项但无需修改。
× I tap on laptop keyboard every day because I like the sound of typing on keyboard.
✓ I type on my laptop keyboard every day because I like the sound of typing on the keyboard.
“tap”语义不够准确,应用“type”。名词前需加冠词或所有格——“my laptop keyboard”。“typing on keyboard”应为“typing on the keyboard”。建议使用正确动词并加上定冠词或所有格。
× What's more, keyboard as convenient I can take, I can type everywhere.
✓ What's more, the keyboard is convenient to carry, so I can type everywhere.
原句语序混乱且“as convenient I can take”结构错误。应使用“the keyboard is convenient to carry”或“it's convenient to carry”。并用“so”连接结果。建议重组句子为“the keyboard is convenient to carry, so I can type everywhere”。
× I learned it in primary school in China.
✓ I learned it in primary school in China.
句子本身时态正确(过去时),无需修改。
× All of the primary school have computer class class.
✓ All of the primary schools have computer classes.
主谓不一致,“primary school”应为复数“primary schools”以呼应“All of”。“computer class class”重复并且应为复数“computer classes”。建议把名词复数化并去掉重复。
× The class is easy to study and useful so it should suit for kids.
✓ The class is easy to learn and useful, so it should suit kids.
“easy to study”习惯表达为“easy to learn”。“suit for kids”中“suit”后不接“for”,正确为“suit kids”或“be suitable for kids”。建议改为“suit kids”或“be suitable for kids”。
× I have two main methods for study typing on keyboard.
✓ I have two main methods for studying typing on the keyboard.
“for study”应使用动名词形式“for studying”或“for learning”。同时“typing on keyboard”需要定冠词“the keyboard”。建议使用“for studying typing on the keyboard”。
× Firstly, practice it regularly is crucial.
✓ Firstly, practising it regularly is crucial.
句首作主语的动词短语应使用动名词形式,或改为“It is crucial to practise it regularly.”。建议把“practice”改为动名词“practising”或重构句子以符合习惯用法。
× Secondly, I will use keyboard to type in all the time.
✓ Secondly, I will use the keyboard to type all the time.
“use keyboard to type in”结构错误,多余的“in”。需要加定冠词“the keyboard”,并把“in”去掉,正确为“use the keyboard to type all the time”。建议删除多余介词并加上定冠词。