Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I more prefer typing rather than handwriting because typing can save my time and it's make me feel I write very quickly and I can easier to connect my mistake than handwriting.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Yes, I type on a desktop or laptop keyboard everyday because now I'm a high school student and need to do some assignment to my teacher and I always note some notice on the computer on the laptop keyboard so that I always bring the laptop to school every day.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I have just learning how to use the keyboard because I need to refer my computer listening and reading text and the test requires student who use computer that I need to purchase more and more to use the computer faster than now because I never use it before.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I improve my typing with practicing on my computer because I need to perform my exams. The exam requires student to taxing the lead hall and essay on the computer so that I improve my typing uh with my friend and I can build the speed more quickly.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答要更自然、语法正确并且更简洁。开头用一句直接回应,然后用一到两句具体原因并用连词衔接。注意动词形式(prefer 后接动词-ing 或名词),避免重复词和错误短语(如 "connect my mistake")。示例句型可练习替换原因与细节。
Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's much faster and easier to edit mistakes. For example, I can use backspace and spell-check to correct errors quickly, which saves time when I have a lot of work to finish.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答应更紧凑且逻辑清晰。先直接回答(yes/no + which),然后给一到两条具体理由并用连词连接。避免冗长和重复(不必多次提到每天带电脑)。注意可数名词复数和短语使用("assignments", "take notes")。
Ejemplo: Yes, I use a laptop every day because I'm a high school student and need to complete assignments online. I also take notes on my laptop during lessons, so I bring it to school every day.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 句子语法和时态混乱,意思不清。应用清晰的时间点或时间段来回答(e.g. "I learned... when/at age.../last year"),随后简短说明原因或情境。避免不必要的信息与重复,句子长度控制在5句内。
Ejemplo: I started learning to type last year because our school began giving computer-based tests. Since I wasn't familiar with typing, I practised regularly to improve my speed and accuracy.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 回答需更有条理:先说主要方法,然后举一两个具体练习方式并用连词连接。纠正不正确短语(如 "taxing the lead hall"),避免口语填充词("uh")。提供具体练习频率或资源会更有说服力。
Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practising on online typing platforms for 20–30 minutes a day. I also do timed typing tests and type sample essays with a friend so we can compare speeds and give each other feedback.
× I more prefer typing rather than handwriting because typing can save my time and it's make me feel I write very quickly and I can easier to connect my mistake than handwriting.
✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because typing saves me time, makes me feel like I write very quickly, and it is easier for me to correct my mistakes than with handwriting.
问题类型:主谓一致及句子结构错误(Subject-verb agreement / Sentence structure)。 说明:原句中“more prefer”用法不当,动词“prefer”不需要“more”;“typing can save my time”中的动词时态和主谓搭配应简化为“typing saves me time”;“it's make me feel”主谓不一致,应该用“it makes me feel”或“it makes me feel like”;“I can easier to connect my mistake”结构错误,正确应为“it is easier for me to correct my mistakes”。建议:去掉多余的“more”,注意主语与动词的一致性,用恰当的动词形式,并使用固定搭配(prefer A to B; it is easier to do sth; correct mistakes)。
× Yes, I type on a desktop or laptop keyboard everyday because now I'm a high school student and need to do some assignment to my teacher and I always note some notice on the computer on the laptop keyboard so that I always bring the laptop to school every day.
✓ Yes, I type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day because I am a high school student and need to do some assignments for my teachers. I always save notes on the computer, so I always bring my laptop to school every day.
问题类型:现在时使用不当(Present tense issue)与其他结构问题。说明:原句拼写错误“everyday”用作副词应写作“every day”;“need to do some assignment to my teacher”搭配错误,应为“need to do some assignments for my teachers”;“note some notice”重复且不自然,应为“save notes”或“take notes”;句子冗长,建议拆分为两句并使用正确的现在时态和固定搭配。建议:使用“every day”,复数“assignments”,以及常见动词搭配(do assignments for; save/take notes)。
× I have just learning how to use the keyboard because I need to refer my computer listening and reading text and the test requires student who use computer that I need to purchase more and more to use the computer faster than now because I never use it before.
✓ I have just learned how to use the keyboard because I need it for computer-based listening and reading tasks. The test requires students to use a computer, so I need to practice more to become faster because I had never used one before.
问题类型:过去时使用错误(Past tense issue)及句子结构混乱。说明:原句“I have just learning”动词形式错误,应为现在完成时“have just learned”或“have just been learning”;“refer my computer listening and reading text”不通顺,意图应为“for computer-based listening and reading tasks”;“the test requires student who use computer that I need to purchase more and more”语法混乱,应该是“the test requires students to use a computer, so I need to practice more”;“because I never use it before”时态需为过去完成“had never used one before”或现在完成“had never used it before”视上下文,改为过去完成以表明在那之前没有使用过。建议:用正确的完成时或过去时,理清句子逻辑,拆分为更短的句子。
× I improve my typing with practicing on my computer because I need to perform my exams.
✓ I improve my typing by practicing on my computer because I need to do well in my exams.
问题类型:动词+ing形式使用错误(Verb + -ing form)。说明:短语应使用介词“by”引导动名词短语(by practicing),而不是“with practicing”;“perform my exams”搭配不当,正确说法为“do well in my exams”或“take my exams”。建议:用固定用法“by practicing”,并用恰当的动词短语描述考试表现。
× The exam requires student to taxing the lead hall and essay on the computer so that I improve my typing uh with my friend and I can build the speed more quickly.
✓ The exam requires students to type the listening and essay parts on the computer, so I practice typing with my friend to build up my speed more quickly.
问题类型:句子结构错误(Sentence structure errors)和词汇误用。说明:原句“requires student to taxing the lead hall and essay”中“student”应为复数“students”,“taxing”错误,应为“type”;“lead hall”不明,推测为“listening”或“listening section”;句子语序混乱,且“improve my typing with my friend”表达不自然,改为“practice typing with my friend”。建议:使用正确动词“type”,修正名词和部分名称(listening and essay parts),调整语序并使用自然短语“practice with someone / build up speed”。