Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (handwriting, is tidier) and avoid filler words like 'like'.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting. Firstly, my handwriting is messy, so typed text is much easier for others to read. Secondly, typing is faster, which helps me finish tasks more efficiently.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use clear reasons with correct grammar. Avoid contradictory or unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly and keep to two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: I type on a desktop keyboard every day because my office provides a desktop computer. As a result, I usually work at my desk rather than using a portable device.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and be specific. Replace vague fillers and give one clear detail about the learning. Keep it concise and natural.

Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was in elementary school. I attended a computer class where the teacher showed us proper finger placement and typing exercises, which helped me improve my speed.

Sugerencia: Provide a concise topic sentence and one or two specific methods you use to improve, with linking words. Avoid repetition and use comparative forms correctly.

Ejemplo: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I type every day at work and I also use online typing tests to track my speed and accuracy, so now I type much faster than I did in college.

× I prefer typing because my handwrite is not good enough and typing sometimes is efficient and like more tidy so that others can understand what I'm going to express easily.

✓ I prefer typing because my handwriting is not good enough, and typing is sometimes more efficient and tidier so that others can easily understand what I want to express.

Errors: 'handwrite' is a noun mistake; correct word is 'handwriting' (incorrect use of adjectives or nouns). 'is sometimes is efficient and like more tidy' has awkward adverb/adjective use and filler 'like'. Use 'more efficient' and comparative adjective 'tidier'. Word order: 'easily' should modify 'understand' and comes before the verb. Also use 'want to express' rather than 'going to express' for intention. Suggestion: replace 'handwrite' with 'handwriting', remove 'like', use 'more efficient' and 'tidier', and place 'easily' before 'understand'.

× I use a desktop keyboard every day because in my office they provide a desktop. So which is best portable and I have to stay on my seats every day.

✓ I use a desktop keyboard every day because my office provides a desktop. It is the most portable option I have, and I have to stay at my desk every day.

Errors: 'in my office they provide a desktop' has awkward pronoun use and subject-verb placement; correct is 'my office provides' (subject-verb agreement and pronoun choice). 'So which is best portable' is ungrammatical; intended meaning likely 'so it is the most portable option' (incorrect conjunction/structure and adjective order). 'I have to stay on my seats' misuse of preposition and plural: correct 'stay at my desk' or 'stay in my seat'. Suggestion: use 'my office provides', reorder phrase to 'It is the most portable option', and use 'stay at my desk'.

× I learned how to type a keyboard when I was in elementary school. I attend a computer class and the teacher taught me how to like, put my finger on a keyboard to like make me type more quickly.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in elementary school. I attended a computer class and the teacher taught me how to place my fingers on the keyboard to help me type more quickly.

Errors: 'type a keyboard' should be 'type on a keyboard' (preposition error). 'I attend a computer class' mixes tenses; when referring to past events use past tense 'attended' (past tense issue). 'put my finger' should be plural 'place my fingers' and 'to like make me type' uses filler 'like' and incorrect infinitive; use 'to help me type' or 'so I could type'. Suggestion: use past tense consistently, correct preposition 'on', use plural 'fingers' and remove fillers like 'like'.

× I think that practice makes perfect, so the only way to improve my typing is through daily practice. So I type every day when I'm working. So I type much faster than I was in college when I was a student.

✓ I think that practice makes perfect, so the only way to improve my typing is through daily practice. I type every day when I'm working, so I type much faster now than I did in college when I was a student.

Errors: repetition of 'So' at sentence starts is stylistic but acceptable; main grammar issue is tense inconsistency in the comparison 'much faster than I was in college' — use past tense 'did' for the action 'type' ('I type much faster now than I did in college'). Also add 'now' for clarity. Suggestion: replace the second 'So' with a comma for flow, use 'now' and 'did' to make the past comparison correct.