Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct some grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason with a brief example. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition (e.g., don’t repeat "fast" or "easy"). Also correct verb forms and articles.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient in my work as a doctor. For example, I type patient progress notes to communicate with colleagues, which saves time and makes it simple to edit records when needed.

Sugerencia: Organise your answer: state one main fact, then give a clear contrast and a short reason. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g., "more white") and correct articles and prepositions. Use linking words like "however" or "at home" for coherence.

Ejemplo: I usually type on a desktop at work because the hospital provides desktop computers in my office. However, at home I use my laptop for personal documents since it is more portable and convenient.

Sugerencia: Give a clear timeline and one or two specific details. Fix tense and phrasing mistakes, and avoid redundant words. Use linking words like "after that" or "since then" to show sequence.

Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was 16 after my parents bought my first computer. At first I typed homework and later I started writing poems and study notes, which helped me practice and improve my speed.

Sugerencia: Provide a structured answer: state the main method, then list two concrete ways with linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "more appropriate"; use specific goals (e.g., "faster, more accurate").

Ejemplo: I improve my typing mainly through daily practice. In addition, I use online courses and typing tests to increase speed and accuracy, and my daily work writing progress notes gives me regular practice that reinforces these skills.

× I prefer typing over handwriting as typing is faster and more convenient during my daily work.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is faster and more convenient for my daily work.

Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A over B' in formal contexts; use 'because' for reason and 'for my daily work' is the correct preposition phrase.

× I am using it to write progress notes to communicate with my colleagues as I'm working as a doctor.

✓ I use it to write progress notes to communicate with my colleagues because I work as a doctor.

Use simple present 'I use' for habitual actions; 'because' better links reason and 'I work as a doctor' is the correct simple present form.

× So typing is making our task more easy and fast and it's letting us to make edit.

✓ So typing makes our tasks easier and faster and it allows us to make edits.

Use simple present for habitual effect: 'makes'; comparative adjectives 'easier' and 'faster' required; 'allows' is correct verb and 'make edits' (plural) is correct noun form; remove 'to' after 'allows'.

× Every day I type on desktop as I'm working at hospital and in hospital we have computer in my office.

✓ Every day I type on a desktop because I work at a hospital and there is a computer in my office.

Add articles 'a desktop', 'a hospital'; use simple present 'I work' for habitual job; use 'there is' to state existence of a computer in the office.

× In the desktop you can see more white and more easy.

✓ On the desktop you can see more white space and it is easier to use.

'On the desktop' is the correct preposition; 'white space' is clearer than 'white'; use adjective 'easier' and include verb to complete clause.

× So at home I'm using my laptop and typing in laptop.

✓ So at home I use my laptop and type on it.

Use simple present 'I use' for habitual actions; 'type on it' is concise and correct preposition 'on' for typing on a laptop.

× This is for my personal task and personal documents.

✓ This is for my personal tasks and documents.

Use plural 'tasks' to match general activities and avoid repeating 'personal'; 'documents' is sufficient.

× So what I'm using.

✓ So that is what I use.

Original is a sentence fragment; include subject and verb 'that is what I use' to form a complete sentence.

× I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was 16.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was 16.

Both 'learned how to type' and 'learned to type' are acceptable, but 'learned to type' is more concise. Use past simple 'learned' for a past event.

× That time first my parents bought me computer.

✓ At that time my parents first bought me a computer.

Use 'At that time' for past time phrase, place 'first' before the verb or after subject, and include article 'a computer'.

× So I start my first typing many years before first.

✓ So I started typing many years ago for the first time.

Use past 'started'; 'many years ago' expresses past time; 'for the first time' is clearer than 'before first'.

× The task which I start to make is to write my homework and studies as well.

✓ The first task I did was to write my homework and study assignments.

Original is awkward; use past 'did' to describe initial tasks and rephrase 'study assignments' for clarity.

× I type my poetry.

✓ I type my poems.

Use plural 'poems' when referring generally to poetry pieces; simple present is fine for a habitual action.

× It was nice experience.

✓ It was a nice experience.

Include the indefinite article 'a' before 'nice experience' to form correct noun phrase.

× I improve my typing by daily practice.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing daily.

Use the gerund 'practicing' after 'by' and place 'daily' appropriately; both sentences acceptable but this is more natural.

× Also, I'm using online courses and tools to gradually make my typing faster and more appropriate as well.

✓ Also, I use online courses and tools to gradually make my typing faster and more accurate.

Use simple present 'I use' for habitual actions; 'accurate' better than 'appropriate' for typing speed/quality; avoid redundant 'as well'.

× I'm working and my daily work is forcing me to type my progress notes and communication with my colleagues helps me to improve my typing skills.

✓ My work requires me to type progress notes daily, and communicating with my colleagues helps me improve my typing skills.

Use simple present 'requires' for job demands; reorder to avoid repetition 'my work' and make 'helps me improve' more natural by removing 'to'.