Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words (for example, 'because' and 'also') and finish with a short concluding sentence. Reduce hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., 'it also it is also' → remove duplicate words; 'type document' → 'typed document').

Ejemplo: I prefer typing because it is faster and makes editing mistakes much easier. Additionally, typing lets me change fonts and formats quickly, which is useful for presentations. Also, I can share a typed document instantly with colleagues. Overall, typing is more practical for my work.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use clear, concise language. Avoid repetition and correct sentence structure. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect reasons, and include a brief specific detail (e.g., tasks you do).

Ejemplo: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because most of my work is done on a laptop. It is portable, so I can work from different locations, and it’s convenient for writing emails and reports.

Sugerencia: Give a clear timeline and avoid repetitions and fillers. Use one or two specific details (age/grade and setting) and correct vocabulary ('mother' only once, 'typing' rather than 'proper typing on a computer').

Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was in fifth grade during a summer vacation. My mother enrolled me in a computer class where an instructor taught basic computer skills and typing practice.

Sugerencia: Be specific about improvement methods and avoid fillers ('uh', 'um'). Mention concrete activities or tools (e.g., online typing practice, drills, timed tests) and link them logically to results. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practising regularly on the standard QWERTY layout and using online typing exercises to increase speed and accuracy. Also, typing daily emails and reports helps reinforce muscle memory, so my speed improves over time.

× I prefer typing as it is efficient and it also it is also easy to edit the mistakes while typing and it also helps me to use different types of font styles and I can easily share the type document with others.

✓ I prefer typing as it is efficient and easy to edit mistakes while typing; it also helps me use different font styles and I can easily share the typed document with others.

The original sentence contains redundant phrases and improper verb forms. 'to edit the mistakes' is better as 'edit mistakes' (no to-infinitive needed after 'easy to' with gerund). 'type document' is incorrect; use past participle 'typed' to describe the document. Remove repeated 'it is also' to avoid redundancy and use parallel structure for verbs ('helps me use'). Suggestion: simplify clauses, use 'typed' for the document, and maintain parallel verb forms.

× I use a laptop keyboard everyday since my mostly work is on laptop and I prefer to use a laptop for day-to-day tasks as it is easy and easy to easily portable as the laptop is very easy to.

✓ I use a laptop keyboard every day since most of my work is on a laptop, and I prefer using a laptop for day-to-day tasks because it is easy and very portable.

Errors: 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverbial phrase) here. 'my mostly work' is incorrect; use 'most of my work'. Repetition and word order issues: 'easy and easy to easily portable' is wrong; use 'easy and very portable'. Also end of sentence was incomplete. Suggestion: correct 'every day', use 'most of my work', and streamline adjectives ('very portable').

× I learned to write on a keyboard when I was in 5th class and it was a summer vacation, so my Mother Mother enrolled me into a computer class where they, uh, taught me how to operate a computer and how to do a proper typing on a computer.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in fifth grade during summer vacation, so my mother enrolled me in a computer class where they taught me how to operate a computer and how to type properly.

Use 'type' instead of 'write on a keyboard'. '5th class' is better as 'fifth grade' in this context. Capitalization: 'Mother' should be 'mother'. 'enrolled me into' is less natural than 'enrolled me in'. 'do a proper typing' is incorrect; use 'type properly'. Suggestion: use natural collocations ('learned to type', 'enrolled me in', 'type properly') and correct capitalization and ordinal format.

× Umm, I prefer to, uh, use the standard QWERTY keyboard and uh, try to, uh, remember the rules of the, uh, typing. Uh, also, uh, in my daily life, I have to type a lot of emails and reports. So uh, my typing and actually gets improved day by day.

✓ I prefer to use the standard QWERTY keyboard and try to remember the rules of typing. Also, in my daily life I have to type a lot of emails and reports, so my typing actually improves day by day.

Problems: unnecessary fillers removed. 'remember the rules of the, uh, typing' should be 'rules of typing' (no article). 'my typing and actually gets improved' is ungrammatical; use active present simple 'my typing improves'. 'gets improved' is passive and awkward here. Suggestion: remove fillers, drop unnecessary articles, and use correct present tense 'improves' for regular improvement.