Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct minor errors; start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and fillers, and add one specific supporting reason with a linking word. Also correct phrasing (‘on a notebook’ → ‘in a notebook’) and reduce hesitation.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting in a notebook because writing things down helps me remember them longer. For example, when I make a grocery list on paper, I rarely forget items, whereas I'd sometimes overlook things when typing.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence then one clear supporting detail. Remove fillers like ‘uh’ and finish the thought. Use linking words to show frequency and reason.

Ejemplo: I don't type every day; I usually type on my laptop once or twice a week to prepare study documents. Because it's portable and convenient, the laptop keyboard suits my needs better than a desktop.

Sugerencia: This answer is mostly clear and well structured but shorten and correct small errors (e.g. ‘6th or 7th grade’ → choose one or say ‘around’). Avoid repetition (‘program programming’) and link the extra detail succinctly.

Ejemplo: I learned to type around sixth grade because keyboarding was part of our curriculum. We also studied basic computer topics like Java, which made me more comfortable using computers.

Sugerencia: State the plan clearly, remove redundancy, and give one specific example of how the activity helps. Fix grammar (e.g. ‘short focus sections’ → ‘short passages’) and avoid repetition (‘improve’ twice).

Ejemplo: I plan to improve my slow typing by practicing on online games like TypeRacer, which provide short passages that train both speed and accuracy. By playing regularly I expect my words-per-minute and precision to increase.

× I prefer writing down on a notebook with a pen as it will help me to remember for a longer duration.

✓ I prefer writing in a notebook with a pen because it helps me remember for a longer time.

Use of prepositions: 'writing down on a notebook' is incorrect; 'write in a notebook' or 'write on a piece of paper' are correct. 'For a longer duration' is awkward in conversational English; 'for a longer time' or 'longer' is more natural. Also change 'it will help me to remember' to present tense 'it helps me remember' to match general preference context.

× For instance, when I make a grocery list on a pen on on a paper, uh, there is less less probability that I'll forget an item than typing.

✓ For instance, when I make a grocery list on paper with a pen, there is less chance that I'll forget an item than when typing.

Prepositions and word order: 'make a grocery list on a pen on on a paper' is incorrect. Use 'make a list on paper with a pen'. 'Less less probability' is redundant; use 'less chance' or 'a lower probability'. Add 'when' before 'typing' for a correct comparison structure.

× I don't do typing on daily basis, but uh, once or twice a week I make my study documents and on my laptop, uh, and I feel that it, uh, typing on my laptop is more convenient and also.

✓ I don't type on a daily basis, but once or twice a week I prepare my study documents on my laptop, and I feel that typing on my laptop is more convenient.

Use of gerund/verb forms: 'do typing' is unnatural; use the verb 'type'. Add the article in 'on a daily basis'. 'Make my study documents and on my laptop' has word order problems; use 'prepare my study documents on my laptop'. Remove redundant fillers and trailing 'and also' to complete the sentence.

× I learned to type in my 6th or 7th grade because keyboarding was part of our school curriculum.

✓ I learned to type in sixth or seventh grade because keyboarding was part of our school curriculum.

Tense is acceptable but number format and article use: use 'sixth or seventh grade' rather than '6th or 7th grade' in formal speech. No major tense error; corrected for style and clarity.

× Besides typing, we were also taught basic computer topics such as Java and other introductory program programming concepts, which help me become more comfortable with computers.

✓ Besides typing, we were also taught basic computer topics such as Java and other introductory programming concepts, which helped me become more comfortable with computers.

Agreement and word choice: 'program programming' is a typo; use 'programming'. Also the clause should match past narrative 'were taught' so change 'help' to past 'helped'. This corrects tense consistency and fixes the redundant word.

× I still feel I'm very slow at typing so I plan to improve it by playing online games like Type Racer.

✓ I still feel I'm very slow at typing, so I plan to improve it by playing online games like TypeRacer.

Minor punctuation and proper noun: add a comma before 'so' to join clauses. 'Type Racer' is a proper name often written 'TypeRacer' or 'TypeRacer'; keep consistent. The gerund use 'playing' is correct.

× It's a wonderful game where you get a short focus sections and you by playing this you can improve not only improve your speed but also your accuracy of typing.

✓ It's a wonderful game where you get short focused sections, and by playing it you can improve not only your speed but also your typing accuracy.

Sentence structure and word choice: 'a short focus sections' mixes singular/plural and word form; use 'short focused sections'. 'You by playing this you can improve not only improve' is redundant and ungrammatical; rephrase to 'by playing it you can improve not only your speed but also your typing accuracy.' This fixes agreement, removes redundancy, and clarifies meaning.