Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve naturalness and conciseness. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid redundancy (e.g., "basically", "over the time"), and limit to two to three supporting sentences. Add a brief reason for your preference and a specific example to make it more informative.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and easier to edit. For example, since starting university I type lecture notes and assignments, which saves time and helps me organize my work more efficiently.

Sugerencia: Your response answers the question but contains unnecessary filler and a slight grammar issue. Replace long explanations with a concise topic sentence, correct small errors (e.g., "everyday" → "every day"), and explain why typing feels stressful with a specific reason (e.g., keyboard size or wrist discomfort).

Ejemplo: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I don't own a desktop. However, I sometimes find it stressful to type for long periods because the keys are small and my wrists get tired.

Sugerencia: Good chronological answer, but remove hesitations ("Well", "Uh"), refine phrasing ("at +7" is unclear), and give one clear detail about the learning context. Use linking words to make the timeline obvious.

Ejemplo: I learned to type in high school when I was in grade seven. At that time I took an ICT course where we practiced keyboard skills as part of the curriculum.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and gives an example, but avoid colloquial phrases like "no brainer" and tighten language. State the improvement method first, then give the specific example and, if possible, mention a measurable outcome (e.g., faster speed or fewer errors).

Ejemplo: I improved my typing mainly through regular practice. For instance, writing my undergraduate thesis required typing long drafts every day, which helped me increase my speed and reduce mistakes.

× Basically, I prefer typing over handwriting, but this has evolved over the time.

✓ Basically, I prefer typing over handwriting, but this has evolved over time.

Use 'over time' (idiomatic) rather than 'over the time'. The definite article 'the' is incorrect here because we refer to a general period rather than a specific time.

× For example, when I was in my high school, I used to write a lot in hand, but after joining university I love to type.

✓ For example, when I was in high school, I used to write a lot by hand, but after joining university I began to prefer typing.

Use 'in high school' (no 'my') and the phrase 'by hand' for handwriting. Also change tense/phrase 'I love to type' to 'I began to prefer typing' to maintain past-to-present narrative consistency; original mixed past habitual and present without clear transition.

× Since I have only laptop and don't have any desktop computer, that's why I use laptop keyboard everyday.

✓ Since I have only a laptop and don't have a desktop computer, that's why I use the laptop keyboard every day.

Missing articles: 'a laptop' and 'a desktop computer'. Use definite article 'the' before 'laptop keyboard' to refer to the specific device. 'Every day' should be two words when meaning 'each day'.

× Even I was typing a letter on my laptop keyboard yesterday, but I find it a little bit stressful.

✓ I was typing a letter on my laptop keyboard yesterday, and I found it a little stressful.

Remove unnecessary 'Even' and change conjunction to 'and' to connect actions. 'Yesterday' requires past tense 'found' not present 'find'. 'A little bit stressful' can be simplified to 'a little stressful'.

× Well, as far as I remember, I learned to type on keyboard while being at my high school.

✓ Well, as far as I remember, I learned to type on a keyboard while I was in high school.

Add article 'a' before 'keyboard'. Use 'in high school' not 'at my high school' for general statement and use straightforward past continuous/was to match tense.

× Uh, specifically at +7 because I had a subject or course name ICT so I had to learn typing.

✓ Specifically in grade 7, I had a subject called ICT, so I had to learn to type.

Use 'in grade 7' (not '+7'), 'a subject called ICT' is natural, and 'learn to type' is correct verb pattern rather than 'learn typing'.

× Basically, this is a no brainer that I have improved through practicing and writing a lot in my laptops.

✓ Basically, it is a no-brainer that I improved through practice and by writing a lot on my laptop.

Use 'it is' and hyphenate 'no-brainer'. Use noun 'practice' instead of gerund 'practicing' after 'improved through'. Use 'on my laptop' (singular) rather than 'in my laptops'.

× For example, I had to write a thesis paper for my undergraduation capstone project, so I had to type a lot and this improved.

✓ For example, I had to write a thesis for my undergraduate capstone project, so I had to type a lot and my typing improved.

Use 'thesis' (no need for 'paper') and 'undergraduate' instead of 'undergraduation'. 'This improved' is vague; specify 'my typing improved' to show what improved and use past tense consistently.