Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words (for example, "because" and "also"). Avoid filler sounds ("mmm", "you know") and unclear phrases. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and use correct vocabulary (e.g., "take notes", "phone").

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because I take most of my class notes on my laptop or iPad, which is faster and easier to organize. I also type messages to friends and family on my phone, so typing is more convenient in my daily life.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer (desktop, laptop, or phone) and one specific example of typical tasks. Avoid filler words and correct vocabulary ("homework" instead of "classword"). Use a linking phrase like "for example" to add a supporting detail.

Ejemplo: I usually type on my phone’s virtual keyboard every day because I use my phone for most tasks, for example, checking emails, doing homework, and messaging friends.

Sugerencia: Answer with a clear time reference and one short context sentence explaining where or why you learned. Remove hesitations and incorrect word order. Use linking words like "because" or "when" to make the timeline coherent.

Ejemplo: I learned to type about four years ago when I started studying at home more and used a mobile device for schoolwork, so I practiced typing frequently during that time.

Sugerencia: Provide a specific method or two for improving typing and explain briefly how they help. Use clear verbs ("practice", "use online lessons", "type regularly") and linking words like "for example" or "by". Keep the answer to 2–3 concise sentences without fillers.

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practicing regularly on my phone and computer, for example using online typing exercises and timed tests. By practicing daily I increase my speed and reduce mistakes.

× MMM, I prefer typing recently, but because you know, as a college student, I know we usually could use more or iPad to take a notice in the class.

✓ MMM, I have preferred typing recently, because as a college student we usually use phones or iPads to take notes in class.

Original has pronoun and word-choice errors ('we usually could use more or iPad' unclear) and article/noun errors ('a notice'). Replace with 'phones or iPads' and 'take notes' to be natural; use present perfect 'have preferred' or simple present 'prefer' with 'recently' often pairs with present perfect. Also remove redundant 'I know' and 'because you know.'

× In addition, if you want to chat with your friend or family, you also need to tap use telephone.

✓ In addition, if you want to chat with a friend or family member, you also need to use your phone.

Incorrect pronoun and word order: 'tap use telephone' is ungrammatical. Use 'a friend' (indefinite) or 'family member' and possessive 'your phone'. 'Tap' is unnecessary; 'use' is correct verb.

× Uh, I usually tap on, uh, keyboard because, umm, uh, I usually use phone to do everything, for example, finish my classword, uh, or my chat with my friends.

✓ Uh, I usually type on a keyboard because I usually use my phone to do everything, for example, finish my coursework or chat with my friends.

'Tap on keyboard' should be 'type on a keyboard' (verb choice). Add possessive 'my phone'. 'Classword' is incorrect; correct word is 'coursework'. 'My chat with my friends' should be 'chat with my friends' without 'my'.

× So I usually to, uh, use keyboard everyday.

✓ So I usually use a keyboard every day.

Incorrect infinitive 'to use' after 'usually' and missing article 'a' before 'keyboard'. 'Everyday' should be two words 'every day' when used as an adverb. Remove filler words.

× Let me think in my memory about four years ago, we usually to study in the home use, uh, umm, use uh, mobile machine.

✓ Let me think. About four years ago we usually studied at home using a mobile device.

Original mixes tenses and incorrect structures: 'in my memory about' is awkward; use 'About four years ago'. 'We usually to study' is incorrect; use past tense 'studied'. 'Home' needs preposition 'at home'. 'Mobile machine' is unnatural; 'mobile device' is better.

× So I think, uh, at, at at the time I learned to how to type a keyboard.

✓ So I think at that time I learned how to type on a keyboard.

Incorrect word order 'learned to how to' should be 'learned how to' or 'learned to'. Use preposition 'on a keyboard'. Remove stuttering and extra words.

× Let me think, I think this scale just needed, uh, need you to, uh, frequency use your phone to tap something, uh, innovation you, you, you also like you also to use, uh, on computer to improve your, uh, typing.

✓ Let me think. I think you just need to use your phone frequently to practice typing, and you can also use a computer to improve your typing.

Original mixes tenses and incorrect forms: 'this scale just needed' should be present 'you just need'. 'Frequency use' should be 'use frequently' or 'use...frequently'. 'Tap something' is informal; 'practice typing' is clearer. 'On computer' needs article 'a computer'. Rearranged for natural word order.