Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitations and repetitions, and give one specific reason with a brief example. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., "because" and "for example").

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more accurate. For example, I can compose emails and edit text quickly on a computer, which saves time compared with rewriting messy notes by hand.

Sugerencia: Eliminate filler words and organize the response: give a direct answer (desktop or laptop), then explain why with a specific detail. Use one linking phrase such as "because" or "so" to show reason.

Ejemplo: I usually type on a desktop computer every day because I work in a hospital and need to enter patient summaries into the medical records system, which is easier on a full-sized desktop keyboard.

Sugerencia: Remove hesitations and give a clear time reference, then add one specific detail about how you learned (e.g., class, practice, self-taught). Use a linking word to connect the background reason.

Ejemplo: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was at university because computers became more common there; I learned in an introductory IT class and practiced with online typing exercises.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific strategies rather than a general statement. Use linking words like "for example" or "also" to list methods and be concise (max 4–5 sentences).

Ejemplo: To improve my typing, I practice daily using online typing tests to track my speed and accuracy. I also focus on correct finger placement and try short drills for ten minutes each day to gradually increase my words-per-minute.

× I prefer typing because typing is much easier than writing. It's faster and more accurate. I was. I typed when I was a kid, but nowadays I prefer typing.

✓ I prefer typing because it is much easier than handwriting. It's faster and more accurate. I typed when I was a kid, but nowadays I prefer typing.

The fragment 'I was.' is a sentence structure error (incomplete sentence). Also 'typing is much easier than writing' is acceptable but 'handwriting' is more precise. Correct by removing the fragment and using a clearer noun. Ensure each sentence is complete and coherent. Suggestions: remove incomplete fragments, use 'handwriting' for clarity, and keep tense consistent ('typed' for past action).

× I I I type on the desktop, laptop, keyboard every day. I because I work at the hospital, I have to write summaries for patients on computer.

✓ I type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day because I work at the hospital and I have to write summaries for patients on the computer.

Problems include repeated filler 'I I I', incorrect listing with commas, and sentence fragments ('I because...'). These are sentence structure errors. Fix by removing repetitions, using 'a desktop or laptop keyboard' for correct coordination, combining clauses with 'because', and adding the definite article 'the' before 'computer'. Also keep subject clarity and conjunction usage. Suggestions: avoid repeated fillers, use 'or' to present alternatives, connect clauses properly with 'because', and include articles ('the computer').

× I I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was a university student. Before that, a computer was not popular, so we had to write on a paper. That.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was a university student. Before that, computers were not popular, so we had to write on paper.

Errors: repeated 'I I' and the fragment 'That.' are sentence structure problems; also 'a computer was not popular' is awkward — use plural 'computers were not popular' for general statements (singular/plural and article issues) and 'write on paper' is the natural collocation. Use past tense 'learned' which is correct; remove extra words and fragments. Suggestions: remove repetitions and fragments, use plural for general statements ('computers'), and use collocation 'write on paper'.

× To improve typing, it is important to keep practicing every day. While keep typing every day you can, you can type much faster than before.

✓ To improve typing, it is important to keep practicing every day. If you keep typing every day, you can type much faster than before.

The phrase 'While keep typing every day you can' is ungrammatical. This is an error with verb + -ing form and clause structure. Use the conditional 'If you keep typing every day' or a gerund clause 'By keeping' as alternatives. 'Keep practicing' is correct (verb + -ing after 'keep' is 'practicing'). Suggestions: use 'If you keep...' for conditional meaning or 'By keeping...' to show method; maintain correct gerund forms after 'keep'.