Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
Uh, I just agree with hiring. I think umm, I don't usually writing by my hand nowadays because I tend to write slowly and meets umm, I mean make mistakes. So umm typing is fast and uh, more accurate. It's also very convenient for sending message or e-mail on my phone.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Actually, I think no, I just always typing use my phone like if I should do some assignment or just writing. Uh, I always use my laptop and sometimes, umm, but I always use my phone typing send message for authors. So yeah, that's it.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
Maybe why was I was seven years old? In our primary school we have some computer classes and our teacher teach me how to typing on keyboard. So yeah, maybe I learned it when I was seven years old. Sorry, I'm not really clearly.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
You know, if I remember correctly, uh, why was 10 years older in our computer class, we should exercise typing in every computer class. So maybe during that period I get lots of improvement. So maybe.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 在回答中注意发音和句子结构的准确性,避免重复和口头禅(如“umm”“uh”)。先用一句话直接回答问题,然后给出具体原因并用连接词衔接。可改进的点包括语法(时态和动词形式)、词汇选择(handwriting 而不是 hiring),以及简洁表达(控制在最多5句内)。
Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because I write more quickly and make fewer mistakes when I type. For example, typing lets me correct errors instantly and format texts clearly. Moreover, it is very convenient for sending messages or emails on my phone.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 需要更清晰地组织答案:先直接回答(每天用哪种设备),然后用一两句具体说明使用场景并用连接词衔接。注意动词顺序和冠词的使用,避免矛盾表达(先说不每天打字再说总是用手机)。
Ejemplo: I usually type on my phone and my laptop rather than a desktop. For quick messages and social media I use my phone, but for assignments and longer texts I prefer my laptop because its keyboard is more comfortable.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答时先给出明确时间,然后补充背景说明。注意语法(过去式)、句子简洁以及避免不必要的道歉。可以加入细节(比如课程内容或练习方式)来丰富答案。
Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was about seven years old. My primary school had computer classes where the teacher taught us basic keyboard skills and we practiced simple typing exercises each week.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 58.0Sugerencia: 先用一句话说明现在或过去如何提高打字速度,再给出具体方法并使用连接词衔接。注意时态一致性及句子完整性。可以提到练习频率、使用的工具(如typing software)或具体成果来增加细节。
Ejemplo: I improved my typing mainly through regular practice in computer classes when I was about ten, where we did typing exercises every lesson. Later, I reinforced my skills by using online typing tutors and practising daily to increase my speed and accuracy.
× Uh, I just agree with hiring.
✓ Uh, I just agree with typing.
原句中"hiring"显然是拼写错误,应为"typing"(打字)。这是词汇选择错误导致的代词/词语使用不当,不属于语法时态问题。建议说话前先在脑中构建完整的词或短语,避免听写或口误。
× I don't usually writing by my hand nowadays because I tend to write slowly and meets umm, I mean make mistakes.
✓ I don't usually write by hand nowadays because I tend to write slowly and make mistakes.
句子中"don't usually writing"动词形式错误,应在助动词后用动词原形"write"。"by my hand"也是不自然的表达,应为固定短语"by hand",此外"meets"应为动词原形"make"配合主语。改进建议:注意助动词(do/does)后使用动词原形;常见短语使用固定搭配。
× So umm typing is fast and uh, more accurate.
✓ So umm typing is fast and more accurate.
原句多了额外的停顿词,但语法上"more accurate"正确。这里仅需去掉重复逗号并保持连贯。建议练习用简洁表达避免多余停顿词。
× It's also very convenient for sending message or e-mail on my phone.
✓ It's also very convenient for sending messages or emails on my phone.
应使用复数"messages"或不可数时用"messaging";"e-mail"可写为复数"emails";"on my phone"正确。建议注意名词的单复数及集合名词用法。
× Actually, I think no, I just always typing use my phone like if I should do some assignment or just writing.
✓ Actually, I think no. I usually type on my phone if I need to do an assignment or just write something.
原句中"just always typing use my phone"词序和动词形式错误。应使用一般现在时"I usually type",并在条件从句用"if I need to"。建议练习一般现在时的常用副词位置(usually位于主语和动词之间),以及动词后使用原形或不定式。
× Uh, I always use my laptop and sometimes, umm, but I always use my phone typing send message for authors.
✓ I always use my laptop sometimes, but I also always use my phone to type and send messages for authors.
原句结构混乱,动词搭配不当。应保证主语与谓语一致并使用不定式"to type",以及复数"messages"。建议简化句子结构,确保每个并列分句有明确的主语和谓语。
× Maybe why was I was seven years old?
✓ Maybe I was seven years old.
原句多加了多余的疑问词"why"且使用了"was"重复。叙述过去年龄时直接用"I was seven years old."。建议在表达过去时间时避免插入无关疑问词并注意动词不重复。
× In our primary school we have some computer classes and our teacher teach me how to typing on keyboard.
✓ In primary school we had some computer classes and our teacher taught me how to type on a keyboard.
描述过去经历应使用过去时:"have"改为"had","teach"改为过去式"taught"。"how to typing"应为不定式"how to type",并在"keyboard"前加冠词"a"。建议练习规则和不规则动词的过去式与不定式用法。
× So yeah, maybe I learned it when I was seven years old. Sorry, I'm not really clearly.
✓ So yeah, maybe I learned it when I was seven years old. Sorry, I'm not really clear.
"learned"为过去式与上下文一致。问题在于形容词"clearly"(副词)错误,应使用形容词"clear"来描述状态"I'm not clear"。建议区分副词与形容词的用途:be 动词后通常接形容词。
× You know, if I remember correctly, uh, why was 10 years older in our computer class, we should exercise typing in every computer class.
✓ You know, if I remember correctly, when I was 10 years old in our computer class, we used to practice typing in every computer class.
原句"why was 10 years older"错用疑问词和结构,应为时间状语从句"when I was 10 years old"。此外表达过去习惯用"used to"或"we practiced",而不是"we should exercise typing"。"exercise typing"不自然,应使用"practice typing"。建议学习如何用when引导过去时间状语,以及使用"used to"或过去式描述过去习惯。
× So maybe during that period I get lots of improvement. So maybe.
✓ So maybe during that period I made a lot of improvement.
这里描述过去发生的变化应使用过去时,"get"改为过去式"made"或"saw",并用固定搭配"made a lot of progress/improvement"更自然。建议学习表示进步常用表达并注意时态一致。